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Love this beatMixdown 1stcould be better louder on the track. Good delivery on the beat. Lyrically good.
2nd verse was amazing in flowing don't like the doubling of the vocals though Killed the track
3rd COuld be louder as well ok flow not the easiest to hear.
Overall good not great 2nd was the best verse
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first verse was tight... you got a nice flow kinda unique, it was weird where you guys kind of were talking at the same time saying "im ill naw im ill" etc...2nd verse was tight and 3rd was the same but you probably had the best flow out of all of it.. make it better quality doe.
I would have like to have heard you on an original beat.
When you rap over a beat that someone like Jay-Z rapped over people will sub consciously compare your verses to theres.
Overall good mic skills and Presence
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1st and 3rd verses aight. 2nd verse was ill flow-wise and pretty good lyric-wise. This would be way better without the Jay Z in the background. You're good enough to stand on your own
nice drop
flow is downright sick, delivery was good, i liked the effx in the last verse, overall good
Beats like a mix of oldschool and new school. I'm really feeling the flow on this, you could have gone commercial with the flow and you didn't, madd respect for that. Madd heads used this "I'm ill" sample though. Vocal quality was pretty good, second verse coming in...not bad at all, you guys definitely have different flows, which is a good thing. I'm actually feeling the first verse more, but both are dope. Good drop man, keep doing ya thing.
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pretty cool
like the style
voice is unique
keep it up
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your verse wasnt bad man, had good confidence on the mic, flow was decent, lyrics were good for what it was...
second dude had a real cool style, was feeling him too..
third dude sounded tooo much liek a Shyne wanna be but other then that again a good verse...
yall did ur thing on this, wel ldone, lyrics were all kinda typical for this but thats ok ya still sounded good, and did have some cool lines throughout
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Thanks for the feed everyone
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not really feeling this beat choice but yall rode it very nicely. lyrically all yall were nice. i would rather hear a beat yall did though with the lyrical potential yall have.
I like the production, I like the swag...the first verse was very lyircal and had some clever lines in there, really nice man...the second verse had alot energy and a nunique flow too it complementd the track ....te last verse was decent, the presence couldve been a lil more uprfront than it was, but I like the song man... keep droppin man
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