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Mate, you have the IQ of a discus
You also look like you've inhaled a few biscuits
But lets get over your wrist slits and bitch fits
Cause you'll be cryin when my dis hits
But we all know what comes from Germany...
All we hear is this fat cunts sausage-fingers goin' furiously...
So, your name is fucking Drztic, what is up with that ya spastic
I'll bash ya bitch, leave her face with slits and take ya kids
Come back blazed as shit and hope you have some friends to hit
But I'm a nice guy, new to the scene so I'll say good-bye, hope you dont quit
jeez...
I guess I missed the part where we agreed on droppin wack shit
well you did a perfect job, I'm afraid I won't be able to match it
I might aswell ask Owch if it's ok if we would bury the hatchet
I would toss that thing right at ya I'm just worried you'd catch it
go ahead exit, quit rap cuz this shit really seems to trouble you
spelling his own name wrong, only time this bitch sees a double U
yea I know that shit is played but look who the fuck I'm facin'
my punches have this kid live up to his names pronounciation
steppin in a ring with Voice, dude that's the 3rd step before the 2nd
shit that's like me winning this battle before I even checked in
Nothing.
this verse was not good man, im sorry. no punches, not really any good concepts either. just keep writing, read other peoples battles and learn
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I might aswell ask Owch if it's ok if we would bury the hatchet
I would toss that thing right at ya I'm just worried you'd catch it
this verse was decent, you had some okay concepts but i think you need to work on your wording real talk. had some ok concepts that would've hit but they were kinda forced or not worded well. just keep it up man
v/ owch
guess you ment vote for me since that'S what you polled
I thought it was a good battle, cheers VOB
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I guess I missed the part where we agreed on droppin wack shit
well you did a perfect job, I'm afraid I won't be able to match it
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nada
owch needs to think more outside the box and use more personals and metaphors. VOB got the idea but wording needs some work. The line i quoted was aight but a played concept too. Try to think ofmore current, or fresher material next battle.
v. VOB
Owch, you had no punches. You were spitting insults, but none of them connected or did damage. VOB, you had some weak punches, but they still delt way more damage then any lines from Owch.
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owch
Mate, you have the IQ of a discus
You also look like you've inhaled a few biscuits
can say this made me lol a bit but the concepts werent relevant
But lets get over your wrist slits and bitch fits
Cause you'll be cryin when my dis hits
too basic
But we all know what comes from Germany...
All we hear is this fat cunts sausage-fingers goin' furiously...
didnt hit hard personal concept was there but get more creative
So, your name is fucking Drztic, what is up with that ya spastic
I'll bash ya bitch, leave her face with slits and take ya kids
not relevant as far as setup goes finisher was ok pretty direct
Come back blazed as shit and hope you have some friends to hit
But I'm a nice guy, new to the scene so I'll say good-bye, hope you dont quit
like the cockiness in here but didnt hard again
VOB
I guess I missed the part where we agreed on droppin wack shit
well you did a perfect job, I'm afraid I won't be able to match it
lol
I might aswell ask Owch if it's ok if we would bury the hatchet
I would toss that thing right at ya I'm just worried you'd catch it
lol nice
go ahead exit, quit rap cuz this shit really seems to trouble you
spelling his own name wrong, only time this bitch sees a double U
didnt get this owch/ouch its only on w and one u so didnt understand the wp here no hate
yea I know that shit is played but look who the fuck I'm facin'
my punches have this kid live up to his names pronounciation
nice
steppin in a ring with Voice, dude that's the 3rd step before the 2nd
shit that's like me winning this battle before I even checked in
ok like the cockiness here
V/VOB
Pretty onesided battle here VOB just has better concepts and harder punches. Owch need to come more creative and make his concepts more relevant.
nothing from owch was hard hitting,all i gotta say is practice and read battles
and you'll get the hang of this in no time.VOB had that first bar which was
alright it might be played but ive never seen it anyways it was enough to put this
away.the rest was fillerish and the double u thing is hella old but what hasnt already
been use in text battling right
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