This track has a smooth melody to it, its about a girl that played me recently but i also include other important topics going on in my head, its as deep as you want it to be, "if you can relate". give it a listen and give me some good feedback.
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Pretty good dude. I loved The deepness and emotion, And it had a really nice flow. The quality wasn't amazing, But its decent. I could understand everything, So in that aspect good. Maybe put a little more emotion in your voice, to make the lyrics more powerful. But in all, its a dope track. Keep at it. Check me out as well
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im liking the lyrics bro mix needs a little tightening but on the whole this is dopes!!!!
really vibing the beat... gated ffx - dreams (gabrielle?)
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I like this a lot, it was pretty good. I kinda wish you put slightly bit emotion into it. I like it though, good drop. Keep it up man!
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checking this....is this hook? guess not but hmm sound like u having a hard time keeping up with the beat also sound a bit off beat make sure to hit them snares....real shit but your emotion needs to back that man...get into them lyrics live them....flow a bit shaky work on that
overall i like this concept and always appreciate real shit...but don't think it was delivered well but keep dropping man only way u gon get better
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Vibe of the track was nice
Beat was cool
Lyrically really painted the picture
Delivery was off and didn't ride the beat great sometimes to many words in the line. Sometimes on beat but some lines slipped off beat 2nd verse better than 1st
A chorus could help
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the lyrics weren't bad and you can relate to them. the flow was kind of weird, but the concept/message was dope and you can actually feel emotion when you convey it. overall a pretty good track and i loved the beat.
the delivary was kinda off but the lyrics was nicely done and i feel your vocal blending needs more cleanliness but thi swas nice man
i was feeling this.. had a chill vibe to it, couple funny punchlines like that frogger one. good voice, good flow. 4/5 dude, i liked that vocal sample alot
great flow and beat man. your voice/style reminds me of j. cole. mad props. very smooth and i bet a lot of people can relate to your lyrics.
well i did like the beat sample is pretty cool on it. concept was nice i like positive concepts or something people can relate too so emotion wise was on point with the words. delivery could be more energencic due to the fact ur describing how u feel and shit. flow wise some parts were a little choppy like said maybe too many sylables shortening up some bars a bit. other then that not bad.
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