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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    sry if this aint the right place to be asking but what a good mic?

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    You kind of had a 2pac flow in there. Your voice is kind of raspy. It'll be better if you had more emotion in your voice, know what I'm saying? That'll make what your saying a lot more impactful. Good choice of beat though, Keep at it, I'm just getting good myself. Check it out
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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    i like your flow and my voice is deep and raspy aswell but lots of people are saying its a nice new sound so stick with it and improve

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    thanks man

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    gotta say good beat choice for you i could see u riding this beat well with the raspiness in ur voice like people said but key is man come with more energy in that delivery my dude. keep doing ur thing though u got the flow down pat just bring up that intensity my dude.

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    mellow beat choice!!!!

    flow isnt to bad but the mix needs some work sounds very raw still!!

    lyrics are nice man im liking the whole vibe with it

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    good beat choice, yeah i feel your main prob is emotion is needed in the delivery. you sound very boring for the most part like your just reading with rhthym, def needa up the quality too
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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    I like this, its a good throwback jam. My only criticism is its hard to understand some of the words, but other than that- good job!

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    Re: Puppet in the Plan

    ok thanks for the feedback
    ill come with more energy and a better mic

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