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Ripsta
Pistols Pete
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
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Tear his spine out, coward, crawl on belly for all times
battling RIPS a joke like passing gas after a comedy line
come on cat your best of the best spits are straight trash
i just said best two times, too bad its puff puff pass
Ripsta tried battling but tay tay Musta ripped him a new ass
spread ya cheeks
you musta peeked cause you u couldnt Sway a vote wit King Tech's badge
this a fag of a kid cause he, suck fuck and get gone.. damn you funny
a man wit a pussy, your a contradiction like busta signin to Young money
damn you dropped like two verses on rapbattles and still no feedback
maybe its everyone else, and not the FACT that your shits wack
damn i tried to be nice and read that trash, but ya verse... GAG
no literally it looks like fucking vomit thrown on al greens back
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Infekted Penz
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The Birth Of Creation
Yea my flows vomit and trash, compare it to an atomic drop it N loud bang,
Talking bout pussy line between my legs have mine its ur girls am fingering whil she kissing my head
You really think of yourself as a big threat, Loc dog grandma hit harder than you I bet, easy knock out like she did to ashtray, PISTOL PETE you know what that means bitch ass mascot for Oklahoma state wanna be,
U ain't no MC, o yea u control dicks, wha are you doing here u got the wrong theme, victory looking
For me, Rip u in half am the legend demon eat u like calves. Hurricane power destroy everything
In my path, homeboy skills you lack crack your back turn you to christopher reeves you can't stand,
Am kryptonite my flows to tight you get weak run away in fright, call me krueger kill at night slice you
And your mic, so smooth I'm a sharp knife, ur mom too lift her up into the air,dick n pussy then they pair
My bad for the wait sum personal came up dawg
oh boy...this was really a tough read. gotta say I didn't enjoy either verse but Pistol just had the better punches so I gotta go with him.
Structure: Pistol
Wordplay: Pistol
Punches: Pistol
creativity: Pistol
Vote goes to Pistol
Ripsta
straight up i just didnt like the verse at all. didnt try ur hand at goin direct nd actually throwin some punches relatin to him in some way. bars just seemed like pure filler to me, either too basic or too statementish.
pistols pete
guess u still had some bad moments in there like not rhymin at times, but u seemed to have a better understandin on concepts or just formin some sort of punch at all.
gotta say tho it'd help to show some creativity from u guys, incorporate some personals, name plays, etc.
aight, thats enough for now.
Vote-> Pistols Pete
hit up my battle with guillotine or inspiyer nd drop some feed back.
INFEKTED PENZ
ripsta's verse was all over the place, it was hard read it lacked rhythm and he didnt have any punches, they were more or less statements. he had the one christopher reeves line where he attemped to create a metaphor, other than that his lines didnt rhyme in some places and they werent battle orientated. Pistol petes verse was more direct and well put together
vote/pistol pete
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...300/index.html
Tear his spine out, coward, crawl on belly for all times
battling RIPS a joke like passing gas after a comedy line
eh okay
come on cat your best of the best spits are straight trash
i just said best two times, too bad its puff puff pass
nah
Ripsta tried battling but tay tay Musta ripped him a new ass
spread ya cheeks
you musta peeked cause you u couldnt Sway a vote wit King Tech's badge
not sure I get the reference
this a fag of a kid cause he, suck fuck and get gone.. damn you funny
a man wit a pussy, your a contradiction like busta signin to Young money
eh weak
damn you dropped like two verses on rapbattles and still no feedback
maybe its everyone else, and not the FACT that your shits wack
capitalizing fact doesn't really make it that much harder for me
damn i tried to be nice and read that trash, but ya verse... GAG
no literally it looks like fucking vomit thrown on al greens back
I seriously don't get why al green was in this punch
vs
Yea my flows vomit and trash, compare it to an atomic drop it N loud bang,
Talking bout pussy line between my legs have mine its ur girls am fingering whil she kissing my head
You really think of yourself as a big threat, Loc dog grandma hit harder than you I bet, easy knock out like she did to ashtray, PISTOL PETE you know what that means bitch ass mascot for Oklahoma state wanna be,
U ain't no MC, o yea u control dicks, wha are you doing here u got the wrong theme, victory looking
For me, Rip u in half am the legend demon eat u like calves. Hurricane power destroy everything
In my path, homeboy skills you lack crack your back turn you to christopher reeves you can't stand,
Am kryptonite my flows to tight you get weak run away in fright, call me krueger kill at night slice you
And your mic, so smooth I'm a sharp knife, ur mom too lift her up into the air,dick n pussy then they pair
I tried to do a bar for bar breakdown but it's so unorganized I can't even tell what the fuck is happening.. your shit wasn't very creative and you have no real rhythm to your drops.. read more and learn to write better. that's all I can really tell you..
vote Pistol for being more polished.. your concepts are a bit farfetched but other than that you did enough to win.
ripsta: really dude no hate to you but ur lines were stretched as shit and ur rhyme scheme was totally off and u had no punches that hit to me.
Pistol pete:
Tear his spine out, coward, crawl on belly for all times
battling RIPS a joke like passing gas after a comedy line
lol cool np concept
come on cat your best of the best spits are straight trash
i just said best two times, too bad its puff puff pass
nah
Ripsta tried battling but tay tay Musta ripped him a new ass
spread ya cheeks
you musta peeked cause you u couldnt Sway a vote wit King Tech's badge
lol
this a fag of a kid cause he, suck fuck and get gone.. damn you funny
a man wit a pussy, your a contradiction like busta signin to Young money
nah
damn you dropped like two verses on rapbattles and still no feedback
maybe its everyone else, and not the FACT that your shits wack
too basic good personal on setup though
damn i tried to be nice and read that trash, but ya verse... GAG
no literally it looks like fucking vomit thrown on al greens back
nah
V/Pistol wins with two bars quoted agaisnt nothing no hate
Pistol pete got this, but both battlers needta elevate.
Ripsta: u got some...alright concepts (that bein very generous) but u was all over the place in this battle. ur attempts were weak, n half ur verse barely rhymed. go peep some battles.
Pistol Pete: u had the better verse in this battle, u rhymed...but that was about it, i aint hatin on u, no doubt but the concepts/creativity are there, jus work on them punches dogg. no hate.
v - pistol, better verse overall
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