Write To This Picture (I)

[Dadi Kewl]

i was sittin and writin those same words to those same flows//
it was then that i finally realized for so long i've been chasin rainbows//
i've been chasin rainbows so long i look in the mirror and don't see me//
i mean it looks like me but only vaguely he's tall like me mouth like me//
and i know were one and the same but its strange //
it seems i was so in the chase i didn't notice the change//
for better or worse only time can tell
was i growin up or growin down str8 to hell//
well its hard to tell anything since lately rainbow chasing has been my only deisre//
no matter how far away it was i ran faster and always tried to reach higher//
til i reached to high and now i'm hurt....
it seems no matter how fast i ran how i high i reachedit would never work//
was i a hopless romantic or romanticly hopeless?//
rainbow chasing was my choice so all this pain i chose it//
i smile and think maybe of all the rainbow chasers i've come the closest//
and it eases the pain....
it seems like you only see the colors and the sun but when its done you only feel the rain//
a rainbow in reverse where its beauty is what hurtsmaybe its not a rainbow maybe i'm insane//
maybe its not meant to be beautiful justa sick and twisted game//
or maybe i'm just mad cuz i missed all the rules...
or maybe i win and this pain is as precious as jewels//
probably not but i know i didn't lose i know its not a tie and maybe its not done maybe were just over//
so maybe if i stay right where i am then another rainbow may come closer//

[Reduction]

I am new to this site but i really want to see what you guys think.


Melting away my sins never knowing who really wins because of this emotional stress that is not realived by the person in my bed. All i ever wanted was to know my next day was going to be happy. Yet as the sunsets over the dirty rock that i will one day be casted in i still do not understand the point of the next sunrise or sunset. I break off a piece of my heart for everyday i stay breathing and seein and not bealiveing my life without who? If i ever i have clue i would wish it would not be any of the people i ever knew. I sit on the corner of this land and look over this calm area of water that lets me know that this is the only place of peace and humanity. Yet as i sit i feel a pinch of anger angainst my shadowy skin.This pinch of anger just show their will never be peace in my life but always something trying to bring me down to my early grave.Maybe one day the clock will stop and i will be saved.

[Makkin]

Time is fading
Evil's heat has come to drown it's life
Melting fast and oh, so slowly waiting
Ants' short fangs cut through like steel momentum driven knives
And so close is the answer to survival
But time's not strong enough to get it
It's up to man, time's greatest rival.
To bring time back to life and not forget it.

[Varentao]

Some real nice stuff.

Though esco ryhmes i think is a bit lost...

New one is up now. Check it out and get writing..

[Bounce]

In a desolate valley over looking the sea
time is standing still like muscular atriphy
electrons winding down in absolute zero degrees
suspended in time and whittered away on a tree
a clock can not exist without time
or no one to hear it chime or pay it no mind
time only exist as long as we persist in our ryhme

metaphoric symbolence of the ants on a chronologic measurement
telling us the measuremnet is miniscle and our life is heaven sent
Doli the abstract illusionist has created a peace and ressonance
within the swirling valley of innocense lost in a culture of dilegence
His reflection of vast intellegence melting clocks of signifigance
in the realm of magnificence eraddicating the worlds ignorance
Throw out the benign concept of time and just experience your delivernce!


I just wanted to add my thoughts on the melting clock, it is tryully a remarkable piece, mad props for the post!!!