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    Re: Imagination- Rose Redemption

    Beats alright, reminds me of some MF Doom vibe which is pretty dope acually. Flowing pretty nice on this, and lyrically I'm feeling it. Vocal quality needs work though, but other than that this is pretty dope. Maybe switch up the flow a tiny bit? That's me being madd picky though, this is pretty nice man. A good song man, keep dropping.

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    Re: Imagination- Rose Redemption

    Thanks

    I actually made this when I was 15 and didnt know what a flow was to be honest lol.

    But definitely, Ill give feedback.

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    Re: Imagination- Rose Redemption

    beat is def dope....but hmm sound like you talking man not really flowing just use the paper as a guide and memorize the lyrics...let yourself just flow this will come with time....you do have good content and lyrics though so keep rapping and work on the flow, think you have potential

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