Newest Rap Instrumental

[L.way]

Wattup. If you guys don't know, I'm not only a rapper But I produce. This is my newest Beat. I tell you, I still have lots to learn in the producing game, But I'm getting better everyday. Comments and Critique this Instrumental. It's not my first beat ever made, That's pretty self-explanatory considering it's called Best Beat 79... But yeah,

[sc]http://soundcloud.com/lwayncemcee/beat-beat-79[/sc]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...945/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...260/index.html

[L.way]

[sc]http://soundcloud.com/lwayncemcee/beat-beat-79[/sc]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...945/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...260/index.html

[fo11]

Its good. if your just playing around.
if your serious,
you need to get better sounds. Basically, That clap is down, the parts when its not layerd with the snare, find some good vsts, you seem like you just on factory default sounds.. this comes when you get some vstis and good samples. The strings was kinda cool, compositions weren't bad either.
on the 2nd one, it seems like you put a bit reverb or Increased the release time lol. Nice.. Keep finding the way out and working hard !!

Hit this : http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...306/index.html

[J-min]

dude this aint all that bad the drum patters cud do with some work maybe bit more eq the woodstick/cow bell is nice i like random sounds. but the way u have added these sound very factory so work on that

the trumpets ( im guessing there a brass) sounds nice maybe add a multi band compression on it and adjust the mid levels on it!!

keep building ur skill bro ur not far off being ill!!

rtf pls http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...48#post8332548

[L.way]

Word, Ik about that. Actually, I did a little bit to the drum beat after that, Thats's for the comments thought. I've only been producing seriously for about 6 months, So I still have a LONG way before I'll be good

[LamborghiniLloyd]

Not bad. I can tell you're new. You have potential fam. Drums are good. Melodies are boring. Keep it at homie.

RTF - She Lyin'

[Fatal.]

not bad. i like the strings and the trumpet in the back ground, really cool beat tbh - i would follow some of the advice in the feeds above to really make this even better, but not bad. i was feelin it

[L.way]

Thank's guys. I really appreciate the feedback, It's helping me a lot