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ThatKidCry
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TPK
your broke ass aint ballin fool,
only time u get a wad is when you play pocket pool/
he's full of deceptionhe dont carry protection,
he likes it rawdog when sittin on ahomo's erection/
you smells like tha corpse of big pun,
everytime you try to take a bath the fuckin soap runs/
and his breath smells like it's shit he just ate,
figured ud brush after getting cavitys in 7 teeth out 8/
now i know why you rap online,
even if you owned a label you wouldnt get signed/
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TPK
it's black market weekend, so if anyones a fan? man they gonna lose ya
from NC, but his hearts in florida..
..cuz I sold it to cartel n its on its way to cuba
he ain't fucked a bitch in ever.. but he stays in shape when he rhymes
u can tell he's doin' stretches and gettin' limber 'cause of the length of his lines
girls are easy at the clubs, but now for you it's no choice, b..
if she planned on gettin' fuctup... it's cuz she'd rather get alchohol poisoning
a river of concepts? I ain't outta breath even after I've paddled
and how convenient you pick your name from the aftermath of your battles
before he tries to open a can up... let cry here open it for em
I swear, no body's gonna front... if you decide never to post in the forum
uupp
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upp
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it's black market weekend, so if anyones a fan? man they gonna lose ya
from NC, but his hearts in florida..
..cuz I sold it to cartel n its on its way to cuba
-i thought the wordin was lil off but nice concept dude..it still hit
girls are easy at the clubs, but now for you it's no choice, b..
if she planned on gettin' fuctup... it's cuz she'd rather get alchohol poisoning
-i like it, cool n/p
vs
your broke ass aint ballin fool,
only time u get a wad is when you play pocket pool/
-lil basic but iight
v/CRY better hits.. fuct i see u getting better tho
upp
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TPK
v.Thatkid/overall better verse,decent punches while fuctup was just crackin jokes
nothin
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he ain't fucked a bitch in ever.. but he stays in shape when he rhymes
u can tell he's doin' stretches and gettin' limber 'cause of the length of his lines
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fuctup just didnt come with anythin that landed. either just weak execution or basic punches i wasnt feelin it to be honest. come a lil more direct, form ya set ups and deliver the punch well.
Cry, aint need to say much. most concepts were solid, had the creativity edge on this for sure nd had the polished verse outta the 2.
Vote-> ThatKidCry
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Fuctup: felt ur opener had some potential my man but like i said before need alot of work on developing ur concepts u can come off with some funny shit at times but how u get it across it doesnt hit. stick with a concept and make sure ur 1st line and 2nd line are compatable with each other.
TKC: Pretty onesided here for you man
it's black market weekend, so if anyones a fan? man they gonna lose ya
from NC, but his hearts in florida..
..cuz I sold it to cartel n its on its way to cuba
he ain't fucked a bitch in ever.. but he stays in shape when he rhymes
u can tell he's doin' stretches and gettin' limber 'cause of the length of his lines
girls are easy at the clubs, but now for you it's no choice, b..
if she planned on gettin' fuctup... it's cuz she'd rather get alchohol poisoning
a river of concepts? I ain't outta breath even after I've paddled
and how convenient you pick your name from the aftermath of your battles
overall killed him with consistency here good concepts as well as creativity.
V/TKC just overall more experienced in text battling developed his concepts much better and showed his vet status. no hate to fuctup keep battling.
One sided battle here...
Fuctup- you had simple, weak hits. didn't see anything sting to your lines or much creativity.
Cry - concepts were cool, some nice hits, creativity
Overall cry had the stronger/polished/better verse so he gets my vote.
v/Cry
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