Subliminal Vibes

[PatricBernier]

New song me and my friend made. its him first and me second. pretty sick, i dont care what you say i think the pitch change is sick. I mean I do care what you say, but you know what i mean. Oh yeah, beat is "Creep Fast"- Twista, and also. Subliminal Vibes.


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...200/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...05/index2.html

[I-M-E]

love the original track by twista.

first dudes fast but its a bit sloppy at times and got no delivery and cant really hear his lyrics very good, just stops out of the blue.

second verse is more slopppy, sounds like reading, yall def sound liek your new to rap, so jsut keep at it

[PatricBernier]

love the original track by twista.

first dudes fast but its a bit sloppy at times and got no delivery and cant really hear his lyrics very good, just stops out of the blue.

second verse is more slopppy, sounds like reading, yall def sound liek your new to rap, so jsut keep at it

Thanks apreciate it.

[DeathChamberz]

What are you recording on?
I don't advise letting the general public hearing your stuff 1st Impressions
Also fast flow can't be attempted without being super on point. To sloppy at points
Sounded like you didn't even listen to the beat and was just reciting how fast you can
2nd verse was better he was actually trying to rap onto the beat had a couple sloppy parts and need more emotion and emphasis on the vocals
Please refeed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...255/index.html

[ShaDoWLesS]

Hahah god damn man, shit's crazy. Seems offbeat at places though, for this kinda beat I think you went way too fast, but still it's pretty impressive I could never do anything like that. Like some coke shit hahah. This was pretty crazy though, only thing is I think the audio quality needs a lot of work, if the quality was better this would be more enjoyable. Nonetheless, props for the fast spit man.

Please return the feedback homie
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...388/index.html

[PatricBernier]

What are you recording on?
I don't advise letting the general public hearing your stuff 1st Impressions
Also fast flow can't be attempted without being super on point. To sloppy at points
Sounded like you didn't even listen to the beat and was just reciting how fast you can
2nd verse was better he was actually trying to rap onto the beat had a couple sloppy parts and need more emotion and emphasis on the vocals
Please refeed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...255/index.html

what do you mean stuff 1st impressions. thanks. we recorded with my trv900 camera because my mic is being borrowed and my friend who has it is a supersloth

[PatricBernier]

Hahah god damn man, shit's crazy. Seems offbeat at places though, for this kinda beat I think you went way too fast, but still it's pretty impressive I could never do anything like that. Like some coke shit hahah. This was pretty crazy though, only thing is I think the audio quality needs a lot of work, if the quality was better this would be more enjoyable. Nonetheless, props for the fast spit man.

Please return the feedback homie
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...388/index.html

thanks man. i usually use my mic, but i dont have it right now so im using camera. thanks.

[L.way]

I mean, I like the double time, But it doesn't really fit with the beat, Know what I mean? I'm not saying that it isn't a good flow, It just doesn't fit with the beat. I mean, the quality isn't that good, But your only 15, So you'll get better quality in due time. I like the second person better btw, No offense to the first dude

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...287/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...238/index.html

[PatricBernier]

I mean, I like the double time, But it doesn't really fit with the beat, Know what I mean? I'm not saying that it isn't a good flow, It just doesn't fit with the beat. I mean, the quality isn't that good, But your only 15, So you'll get better quality in due time. I like the second person better btw, No offense to the first dude

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...287/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...238/index.html

Thanks, the idea of two completely different type of rappers is sick. i know, we are working on being compatable, its hard. yeah man thanks for that, i apreciate it so much man. thanks.