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Alphabet
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Originally Posted by Alphabet
he got some nerve talking that shit, this dude ain't dropping that raw
al should change his name to baby huey.. cuz he's the biggest duck of them all
i lol'd at your last battle...... now i'm here to show you what hell is
cuz you sucked against Jizz so much, he got porn star's feeling jealous
imma uppercut the shit out you, leaving your back on the pavement
when my fist put an end to BET like low budgets on black entertainment
mir'll put the chrome to ya dome..watch these bullets stop your rapping
nevermind promotions in town watch, BITCH I'LL LEAVE UR HEAD CAPTAIN *
this guys a sick prevert...in his spare time he's all about masterbation
n sadely alphbet's invovled in more kids lifes then a preschool education
at my concert everyones jumping n screaming...while they hate ur sound prick
when hearing ur music there like genius kids w/ exams ..how they SAT down quick
people all know i'm taking this W, the votes will be coming in swarms
cuz everyone can see i modem down... like satellite internet during storms
*capped in
BWAAAAAAHAHAHAAAAAAA your fucking kidding me right?
i dunno who has u gassed makin u think ur dope/tough & raw
the only time you'd break knux is after u lose to him,rage and punch a wall
& u swing like a female ur weak/frail & everyone believes it kid
so its nothing for me to smash mir than slit his throat with a broken piece of it
i'm the pinnacle/high point top tier & ur KNOWN as a lame bore
so u being whack as fuck is the bottom line..& it's where everyone ranks yours
but u might be able to fool em noobs into thinking ur dope
for u txt is ride or die...meaning mir will LITERALLY suck ur dick for a vote
u went 1-3 in the LLL then got blacklisted < TRUE FACTS
if it didn't happen irony'd be in effect..u bein smoked by meth in a boot match
cuz u have the LAMEST drops & what u types the whackest
if u EVER had fatal thoughts..
it was to end ur life afer ur L to him in the write of passage
ur a goof/whack one punch'll leave this noob smashed w/ ur dyke rep
^ faggot if the shoe fits u'd wear it..meaing mir in stilettos & a tight dress
i lol'd at your last battle...... now i'm here to show you what hell is
cuz you sucked against Jizz so much, he got porn star's feeling jealous
imma uppercut the shit out you, leaving your back on the pavement
when my fist put an end to BET like low budgets on black entertainment
mir'll put the chrome to ya dome..watch these bullets stop your rapping
nevermind promotions in town watch, BITCH I'LL LEAVE UR HEAD CAPTAIN
vs.
& u swing like a female ur weak/frail & everyone believes it kid
so its nothing for me to smash mir than slit his throat with a broken piece of it
i'm the pinnacle/high point top tier & ur KNOWN as a lame bore
so u being whack as fuck is the bottom line..& it's where everyone ranks yours
but u might be able to fool em noobs into thinking ur dope
for u txt is ride or die...meaning mir will LITERALLY suck ur dick for a vote
u went 1-3 in the LLL then got blacklisted < TRUE FACTS
if it didn't happen irony'd be in effect..u bein smoked by meth in a boot match
nice lil battle here. I got Alpha havin 1 more bar of quotables in total of 4 bars to mirs 3 bars. Mir is a good consistent battler, n Alpha is gettin good. i think alpha edged this 1 with consistency. no hate. keep battlin.
v - alpha
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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i lol'd at your last battle...... now i'm here to show you what hell is
cuz you sucked against Jizz so much, he got porn star's feeling jealous
best line from miracle
both lacked in the rhyme department both had some lines that were forced... mir a couple of your punches where kinda bland, the masterbation line and the BET joint.. just being real... and just felt you could have came more personal...
u swing like a female ur weak/frail & everyone believes it kid
so its nothing for me to smash mir than slit his throat with a broken piece of it
i'm the pinnacle/high point top tier & ur KNOWN as a lame bore
so u being whack as fuck is the bottom line..& it's where everyone ranks yours
-some of the better lines from alph... overall all he posted a solid verse.. like i said the rhyme scheme was strecthed on the last 4 bars... but he hit hard with personals and I checked a few lines to be sure.. so good battle from both emcees
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i lol'd at your last battle...... now i'm here to show you what hell is
cuz you sucked against Jizz so much, he got porn star's feeling jealous
imma uppercut the shit out you, leaving your back on the pavement
when my fist put an end to BET like low budgets on black entertainment
coo ^ bet line
vs.
& u swing like a female ur weak/frail & everyone believes it kid
so its nothing for me to smash mir than slit his throat with a broken piece of it
i'm the pinnacle/high point top tier & ur KNOWN as a lame bore
so u being whack as fuck is the bottom line..& it's where everyone ranks yours
u went 1-3 in the LLL then got blacklisted < TRUE FACTS
if it didn't happen irony'd be in effect..u bein smoked by meth in a boot match
v-alpha. didnt see a good use of personals in mirs verse. alpha was more relevant using other peoples name meth and fatal. and revelance wins battles.
NIGHTMARES
miracle
he got some nerve talking that shit, this dude ain't dropping that raw
al should change his name to baby huey.. cuz he's the biggest duck of them all
little funny but didnt really hit hard to me
i lol'd at your last battle...... now i'm here to show you what hell is
cuz you sucked against Jizz so much, he got porn star's feeling jealous
reference to Jizz kinda basic with the pornstar reference
imma uppercut the shit out you, leaving your back on the pavement
when my fist put an end to BET like low budgets on black entertainment
ok nice concept good np attempt
mir'll put the chrome to ya dome..watch these bullets stop your rapping
nevermind promotions in town watch, BITCH I'LL LEAVE UR HEAD CAPTAIN *
nice
this guys a sick prevert...in his spare time he's all about masterbation
n sadely alphbet's invovled in more kids lifes then a preschool education
lol
at my concert everyones jumping n screaming...while they hate ur sound prick
when hearing ur music there like genius kids w/ exams ..how they SAT down quick
wasnt feeling the SAT reference with the wp
people all know i'm taking this W, the votes will be coming in swarms
cuz everyone can see i modem down... like satellite internet during storms
ok cool concept nice wp
Alphabet
i dunno who has u gassed makin u think ur dope/tough & raw
the only time you'd break knux is after u lose to him,rage and punch a wall
good personal nice concept
& u swing like a female ur weak/frail & everyone believes it kid
so its nothing for me to smash mir than slit his throat with a broken piece of it
this was raw pretty direct
i'm the pinnacle/high point top tier & ur KNOWN as a lame bore
so u being whack as fuck is the bottom line..& it's where everyone ranks yours
nah
but u might be able to fool em noobs into thinking ur dope
for u txt is ride or die...meaning mir will LITERALLY suck ur dick for a vote
nah too basic of a concept
u went 1-3 in the LLL then got blacklisted < TRUE FACTS
if it didn't happen irony'd be in effect..u bein smoked by meth in a boot match
nice personal
cuz u have the LAMEST drops & what u types the whackest
if u EVER had fatal thoughts..
it was to end ur life afer ur L to him in the write of passage
again good personal
ur a goof/whack one punch'll leave this noob smashed w/ ur dyke rep
^ faggot if the shoe fits u'd wear it..meaing mir in stilettos & a tight dress
nah
Well overall this was an ill battle but i felt one focused more onr trying to come creative and add metaphores but had a couple misses which was miracle. Alphabet came more with the personal approach which helped him a bit in this battle but had a few misses as well.
V/Alphabet
Reason: i just thought the personal approach in those few bars hit and it worked for him. Mir got some ill lines and i like the fact he tries diffrent shit but his concepts were kinda off to me in this one no hate man.
i lol'd at your last battle...... now i'm here to show you what hell is
cuz you sucked against Jizz so much, he got porn star's feeling jealous
this one was pretty nice. orginal
imma uppercut the shit out you, leaving your back on the pavement
when my fist put an end to BET like low budgets on black entertainment
i got this, a little bit forced but quotable
mir'll put the chrome to ya dome..watch these bullets stop your rapping
nevermind promotions in town watch, BITCH I'LL LEAVE UR HEAD CAPTAIN *
i didnt like this
this guys a sick prevert...in his spare time he's all about masterbation
n sadely alphbet's invovled in more kids lifes then a preschool education
lol, not bad
at my concert everyones jumping n screaming...while they hate ur sound prick
when hearing ur music there like genius kids w/ exams ..how they SAT down quick
naw, not at all
people all know i'm taking this W, the votes will be coming in swarms
cuz everyone can see i modem down... like satellite internet during storms
eh, a bit forced. good concept
overall not a bad verse, you had a couple good punches, the rest were good concepts but there wording was off which made it forced.
vs.
i dunno who has u gassed makin u think ur dope/tough & raw
the only time you'd break knux is after u lose to him,rage and punch a wall
okay
& u swing like a female ur weak/frail & everyone believes it kid
so its nothing for me to smash mir than slit his throat with a broken piece of it
ok
i'm the pinnacle/high point top tier & ur KNOWN as a lame bore
so u being whack as fuck is the bottom line..& it's where everyone ranks yours
lol'd
but u might be able to fool em noobs into thinking ur dope
for u txt is ride or die...meaning mir will LITERALLY suck ur dick for a vote
na
u went 1-3 in the LLL then got blacklisted < TRUE FACTS
if it didn't happen irony'd be in effect..u bein smoked by meth in a boot match
okay concept
cuz u have the LAMEST drops & what u types the whackest
if u EVER had fatal thoughts..
it was to end ur life afer ur L to him in the write of passage
ok
ur a goof/whack one punch'll leave this noob smashed w/ ur dyke rep
^ faggot if the shoe fits u'd wear it..meaing mir in stilettos & a tight dress
na
i felt like you didnt really have any punches that stood out, but you were consistant with coming direct. so good shit
v/ alpha
I got alpha on this one as well.
yet this one of the better battles I read here. both cam with some creative shit but the thing that stood out the most were the good personals alpha had.
seems like he did put more effort into this and that's what edged it out for him in this battle.
both had good quotable lines, yet everything has been quoted already so I'll leave it at that.
vote goes to Alpha
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