Phan Man
Guillotine
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He ain't shit to me even Charlie Sheen himself would tell you that I was Born To Win..
Fuck the heat that "Phanny Packs" he ain't matchin what I've got in Store For Him!
i did like this np but i felt u couldve finished it better diffrent concept
Yeea its Guillotine mothafucka so of course right now I'm thinkin OFF WITH HIS HEAD..
Just like a "Rickety Bridge" trust me he shouldn't have tried Crossin This Threat!
nah didnt feelt this metaphore was strong on the finisher no hate
This dude beleives that hes still nice with it even after hes finished Taken A Loss..
And hes kinda like "Carrot Top" the way Phans always around here Beggin For Props!
lol ok
She was chubby before nobody not even your own father was Fuckin Your Mom..
Until I hit it so much now they call her "Miss Fit" like someone who Doesnt Belong!
wasnt feeling this wp concept
Its pitiful hes got no chance at all doesn't he know that I'm Quick To Body Dudes..
Not only am I "Pissin On Phans" just like R. Kelly right now I'm Shittin On Em' To!
old concept but lol
Phanman
now i got a solid reason for this fag to get clobbered wit hits
thought of the name with hopes of passin out landin on top a dick
lmao
called police for the rape i enforced, tryna put ya boy in a box
found out Gil a teen, statuatory rape? i lawyered up on the spot
lol nice np
u the son nd im dad, Phan shootin off jus gunnin wit facts
call my lil slugger to come over nd taste the wrong end of a bat
nah
u better jump on this lap, endure the beatdowns im lovin to do
maybe realize that this whole rappin thing just wasnt for u
nah
he'll brag about accompishments, make u a believer hes a fly GOD
anyone a fan of Tine's awards are the same ppl w/ Bieber on the iPod
lol
i felt both had misses here. i had Phan taking this with 2 quotes that were funny and hit a little better agaisnt guillotines one quote
V/phan
Yeea its Guillotine mothafucka so of course right now I'm thinkin OFF WITH HIS HEAD..
Just like a "Rickety Bridge" trust me he shouldn't have tried Crossin This Threat!
This dude beleives that hes still nice with it even after hes finished Taken A Loss..
And hes kinda like "Carrot Top" the way Phans always around here Beggin For Props!
vs.
called police for the rape i enforced, tryna put ya boy in a box
found out Gil a teen, statuatory rape? i lawyered up on the spot
u the son nd im dad, Phan shootin off jus gunnin wit facts
call my lil slugger to come over nd taste the wrong end of a bat
u better jump on this lap, endure the beatdowns im lovin to do
maybe realize that this whole rappin thing just wasnt for u
nice lil battle here, Guillotine i ken tell is a long bar head, but his punches wasn't that bad, but i thinkin phan's gill a teen was the LOTB in this 1, no hate. not bad showin from both tho, both keep battlin.
v - FAN
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guillotine you have to work on your concepts man, come with some more direct punches, alot of your verse was just statements n shit. and then when you opened the door for a punch the wording was off. Honestly, dont put your structure with the spaces inbetween cause it just makes it look whack.
vs.
called police for the rape i enforced, tryna put ya boy in a box
found out Gil a teen, statuatory rape? i lawyered up on the spot
phan you came alright man, you couldn've came hard, kinda seems like you just didnt bring an A game verse on purpose lol. I know you got better words and concepts. that opener was almost a quote but worded up wrong. the one i did quote made me laugh even tho it could've been better. good shit tho
v/ phan
V.Phan/overall better verse,
if this was a punch line battle guill wins,but thats all he had and no 'substance'
...Onslaught!
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