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no voting from smokinandjerkin and the homo1 oh wait they banned lmao
just ppl who have enough post to poll may vote plz no hate goes quicker
I bagged up many bitches white,black to spanish
Only time ur bitch fuking with Wonder when i tell her ass go make me a sandwich
Got the Nina cocked back sidearm position
Watch how Joe close out the 9th like Mariano Rivera was pitching
Ur wasted a whole two minutes setting up this fukin thread
No need to Wonder how stupid you are cuz my open palm is already across ur forehead
He likes playing defensive string can really go in for the sack
U wouldve thought he had an affair with Trent Reznor the way niggaz digging 9 inch nails into his back
I come strong with 10 every bar was an even punch
So when they ask who 9 is hes just an odd number in the bunch
Lacking skill for victory in any battle JB Fell quick, clean
Only ticket to success for Boston ... Is KG in the Celtic green
What a sick scene, mentor to Mac, Fuktup came to you to get ahead
If Joe considered fresh to death ... No wonder FL is fucking dead
No pussy on the reg, this loner would never bang a boo
Joey b inside a woman ... Only In the pouch of a kangaroo
You know it's true any play with tits n ass is unlikely
Joe gets impact with TNA ... Thursday nights on Spike TV
Unlike me, lines so stretched you need some spacial care
If U see Boston handle bars ... Its just the red sox facial hair
lmao good drop man uppin man dont forget to drop those links
bump 2
I bagged up many bitches white,black to spanish
Only time ur bitch fuking with Wonder when i tell her ass go make me a sandwich
-haha nice
Got the Nina cocked back sidearm position
Watch how Joe close out the 9th like Mariano Rivera was pitching
-setup lacked hit could have been better
I come strong with 10 every bar was an even punch
So when they ask who 9 is hes just an odd number in the bunch
-decent hit again setup could have made this hit better
...ur getting alot better dude. keep battling n getting more creative..ur gonna be nice. not a bad verse
some of ur setup seemd like u didnt care but the end punch was good.
vs
What a sick scene, mentor to Mac, Fuktup came to you to get ahead
If Joe considered fresh to death ... No wonder FL is fucking dead
-cool bar well put together
You know it's true any play with tits n ass is unlikely
Joe gets impact with TNA ... Thursday nights on Spike TV
[b]-lol [b]
Unlike me, lines so stretched you need some spacial care
If U see Boston handle bars ... Its just the red sox facial hair
-cool
....you had some cool hits...ur verses seemed to be polished n u no how to set a hit up..punches were cool
overall not a bad verse
vote- 9th. if boston's lines would have had more time put into them i would have gave the W to him
check one of my battles out
I come strong with 10 every bar was an even punch
So when they ask who 9 is hes just an odd number in the bunch
vs.
What a sick scene, mentor to Mac, Fuktup came to you to get ahead
If Joe considered fresh to death ... No wonder FL is fucking dead
Unlike me, lines so stretched you need some spacial care
If U see Boston handle bars ... Its just the red sox facial hair
joe you came eh. you need to work on wording your punches and making them more direct. stay away from self glory that shits lame, and not a punch. you had nice ok concepts but got potential, keep it up. 9th you had some pretty nice bars in here. some punches that hit nice. good concepts, keep it up
v/ 9th
thanks for the feed yall good shit 9
Got the Nina cocked back sidearm position
Watch how Joe close out the 9th like Mariano Rivera was pitching
Ur wasted a whole two minutes setting up this fukin thread
No need to Wonder how stupid you are cuz my open palm is already across ur forehead
vs.
No pussy on the reg, this loner would never bang a boo
Joey b inside a woman ... Only In the pouch of a kangaroo
You know it's true any play with tits n ass is unlikely
Joe gets impact with TNA ... Thursday nights on Spike TV
Unlike me, lines so stretched you need some spacial care
If U see Boston handle bars ... Its just the red sox facial hair
joe if u was to structure ur piece a lil better an make it more evenly out, u woulda won this, hands down. 9th had a couple more quotables in his lines. Good battle. Not much to improve on relly, keep battlin my niggas.
v - 9th inning
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bump 4
joeboston
I bagged up many bitches white,black to spanish
Only time ur bitch fuking with Wonder when i tell her ass go make me a sandwich
eh, got the concept but u coulda delivered it smoother imo
Got the Nina cocked back sidearm position
Watch how Joe close out the 9th like Mariano Rivera was pitching
again, its okish but u needa flow and deliver the punch smoother.
Ur wasted a whole two minutes setting up this fukin thread
No need to Wonder how stupid you are cuz my open palm is already across ur forehead
nah, wasnt feelin this one. too wordy/filler.
He likes playing defensive string can really go in for the sack
U wouldve thought he had an affair with Trent Reznor the way niggaz digging 9 inch nails into his back
nah, tried to connect the reference to the name but it just came out all wrong and sloppy fam, no offense
I come strong with 10 every bar was an even punch
So when they ask who 9 is hes just an odd number in the bunch
eh, developing the odd number concept coulda been hella doper than what u left it at. just too simple, no heavy punch factor
9thwonder
Lacking skill for victory in any battle JB Fell quick, clean
Only ticket to success for Boston ... Is KG in the Celtic green
ehh, its average
What a sick scene, mentor to Mac, Fuktup came to you to get ahead
If Joe considered fresh to death ... No wonder FL is fucking dead
a lil weak here imo, execution style was poor and didnt have that harshness feel about it.
No pussy on the reg, this loner would never bang a boo
Joey b inside a woman ... Only In the pouch of a kangaroo
ehh, wasnt feelin it
You know it's true any play with tits n ass is unlikely
Joe gets impact with TNA ... Thursday nights on Spike TV
its aight
Unlike me, lines so stretched you need some spacial care
If U see Boston handle bars ... Its just the red sox facial hair
simple closer, but coo
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ayo, so after judgin this shit a couple times i think its clear to me that 9th came just a lil harder and focused in this. had a better grasp of what to work with and how to deliver those concepts.
difference between 9th nd joe to me was the better consistency i was seein from wonder, showed that he can continuously develop concepts and punches down that are direct, regardless of them bein weak or dope.
so for the stronger verse outta the 2, gotta with 9th on this one.
Vote-> 9thWonder
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