Track made with a friend!
First rapper is Zed.I.Am (Right)
Second rapper is Doza (Left)
Hook: Both
Links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...211/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...492/index.html
Track made with a friend!
First rapper is Zed.I.Am (Right)
Second rapper is Doza (Left)
Hook: Both
Links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...211/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...492/index.html
Last edited by Psychadelic; November 23rd, 2011 at 03:17 PM
This wasn't bad the beat was sick man
The back and forth chorus was cool I like that tandem shit also the raw emotional delivery was illy the only issue was at times the flow fell off an the content got sort of repetitive but still an all around dope track fellas
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Thank you! Appreciate the comment, man
Flow is intense and hittin the beat well
Nice beat, btw
Vocals sound good
slick soundin track
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Aight very cool to hear guys! Anyone else something to add?
Flow and lyrics aer kind of basic Could be improved on how to deliver on the beat. But good consistency on the beat
Liked the back and forth approach.
Beat was nice
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Beat is a little synthy for my taste. That said, I like the chorus, you pulled it off well, got energy but not overdoing it. The way you spit kinda reminds me of kottonmouth kings (the other dude too). It's some party shit but not sappy club type music, so props on that point. Verses were both pretty good, but I think the high point of this song is the chorus. Vocal quality not bad either. Good drop man, keep doing the damn thing.
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not a huge fan of this beat. rappin' is good for the most part though. like some foreign soundin' young jeezy shit lmao. it works whatever it is. you're riding the beat perfectly imo... the delivery is okay. the effects are cool. this track is what it is. not really my style but you guys do your thing on this. lines are cool... content is good. the hook is straight, basic hook but it works. overall no major complaints. it's a cool track.
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Mhhm. The delivery Was really nice, I like the kind of raspy type of voice you guys have. THe Hook was fire. I'm not into these type of beats, but you guys did a dope job on it. Keep at it. Check out some of my stuff
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Aight cool cool! I'm diggin the comments thanks !
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