Butter Pretzels - All I Can Remember

[tupacisalive420]

[SC]http://soundcloud.com/butter-pretzels/all-i-can-remember[/SC]

wuddup this is a track by butter pretzels which is me and my buddy. called all i can remember, sort of a riff on songs about like omg i cant remember or omg i partied so hard!? lol !?

ignore the last lil skit part "really? really right now?" cuz thats whack

yeah k thx ill hitchu back n shit if you post links

2PACISALIVE420ISANATIONALHOLIDAYONLYGODCANJUDGEME

edit: links
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...952/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...173/index.html

[Jawn Raw]

damn really sick beat, i am loving this shit. first dude has a nice mic presence. lyrically really nice. flow seemed a little rushed at times, iunno. it still rode the beat pretty nice though. the scratching seems kinda cool. sounds like someones voice scratchin rather. second dude, flow is actually on point and really nice. presence/delivery was good. lyrics were also nice. nice lil switch between dudes in the middle. overall solid verse here. 3rd verse, nice job goin back and forth. good team work. another sick verse. overall a really sick track yall.

hit me back
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...970/index.html

[Jawn Raw]

damn really sick beat, i am loving this shit. first dude has a nice mic presence. lyrically really nice. flow seemed a little rushed at times, iunno. it still rode the beat pretty nice though. the scratching seems kinda cool. sounds like someones voice scratchin rather. second dude, flow is actually on point and really nice. presence/delivery was good. lyrics were also nice. nice lil switch between dudes in the middle. overall solid verse here. 3rd verse, nice job goin back and forth. good team work. another sick verse. overall a really sick track yall.

hit me back
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...970/index.html

[tupacisalive420]

thanks alot for the detailed feedback man. i know what spot in my verse you're talking about, the flow was supposed to be like that but it does sound awkward now that i listen again.

also already commented in your thread haha

UP

[tupacisalive420]

up again cmon guys even if you hate it just post saying it fucking sucks

[DeathChamberz]

Loved the scratching in the track miss that hip hop

Good flow the vocals kind of loud on the beat 1st verse
2nd verse trying the triple style ok
Liked the 1st verse best
Very Oldschool syle track liked the vibe with the talking in the chorus

refeed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...255/index.html