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Alphabet
Jizzy.
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-Scytsophrenia-
check.
srry dude busy. i'll key and drop in a bit
check, fasho
-Scytsophrenia-
lmfao....
u can't even rhyme twat & that is something basic
if u ever get solid multis in a bar..i'll use it to beat ur fucking face in
everything u drops depressin so i'll blast u w/ glocks & weapons
leaving jizz splattered everywhere it'll resemble the set after a bukake session
& that GG tourney proves ur bitch made & this is known chump
cause you KNOW i woulda knocked u the fuck out first round if u showed up
shoooow nuff ya bitch hates u & prick the truth hurts
so i'll throw u through a some walls..than i'll put my dick through hers
i'm nice w/ em hands. i throw bombs like tyson & u know it kid
if u ever had me up against the ropes..ur making it easier for me to choke u bitch
yeaaap
-Scytsophrenia-
i'm sick of dealin with whacks, you can't make shit for a rap
the only thing i've seen you burns a fuckin cigarette ash
i'll take a rip at your rep, ya parents fucked with your head
How can they say you aint an accident? you look like a wreck
yo, take this time. & fuckin own it, try to capture this shit
cause you should live for the moment... & that's about it
I’m sure your knockin up some bitch & really good at talkin wit
I heard you gave someone a bad name, I just thought you had a kid
I could point all of your flaws, & every person who's better
I'm not just saying that your bad,
...…................ I can’t think a thing about you goodfella
Last edited by Knux; November 22nd, 2011 at 11:41 PM
-Scytsophrenia-
u can't even rhyme twat & that is something basic
if u ever get solid multis in a bar..i'll use it to beat ur fucking face in
everything u drops depressin so i'll blast u w/ glocks & weapons
leaving jizz splattered everywhere it'll resemble the set after a bukake session
& that GG tourney proves ur bitch made & this is known chump
cause you KNOW i woulda knocked u the fuck out first round if u showed up
vs.
I could point all of your flaws, & every person who's better
I'm not just saying that your bad,
...…................ I can’t think a thing about you goodfella
damn good lil battle, alpha i ken tell u key'd this, but ur verse wasnt bad. Jizzy u surprised me a lil bit, u got some potential, u could be a threat to FL if u keep battlin some top heads, but i thinkin alpha had more punches that landed in this 1, no hate to eiter keep battlin.
v - alpha
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u can't even rhyme twat & that is something basic
if u ever get solid multis in a bar..i'll use it to beat ur fucking face in
everything u drops depressin so i'll blast u w/ glocks & weapons
leaving jizz splattered everywhere it'll resemble the set after a bukake session
vs
naahhh
jizz gotta work on rhyme schemes. nothing really seemed to connect as far as concepts are concerned either. very elementary attempts. Alpha got this pretty easy imo.
v. al
Jizzy - very simple bars. weak punches. need to be more creative and come harder with the concepts.
Alpha- you had a pretty solid verse all around, nice multies, and nice hits.
Overall one sided battle imo, i got alpha taking this.
v/Alpha
alpha why'd you change your avatar? i made a personal on it.
Just so you know, he had joe pecsi before, hence the goodfella line
thanks for votes
-Scytsophrenia-
my bad dude didn't notice..
uppp
cant hit the poll yet but I'll do a breakdown need links for my battle.
Alphabet took this quite easy had some nice personal punches and hard hitting ones Jizzy lacked anything that really clicked and had basic multi schemes mostly one syllable.
vote/ alphabet