Due Date: 11/23 by midnight
10 lines.
House Rules
3 links asap and all that.
Due Date: 11/23 by midnight
10 lines.
House Rules
3 links asap and all that.
Record: 1-1-0
chideck
waistin ya time in school idiot, makin ya parents sicker
Bet if look on phace book, there will be less words than pictures
My legacy is intact, u less important than Paul Blart
Naw, We all see you great Valyu…. Shoppers only buy shit from walmart
Hoes quick to slurp ya boy, stay rocked up like a statue
Women only scream Val yum, cause they need pills to look at you
Ima bully at this dog, u shook and probably weaker
So I got a leg up on this bitch…. about to piss on his sneakers
I murder lames like you, its been a battle trend
Its obvious if P is tryina beat Know…. He’ll only get capped at the end
czech (sorry this is late, ran into some trouble yesterday and was running around trying to fix things. now taking a break from my turkey day celebrations)
Without further ado:
Look....
I'll defeat this fool though he tries like "fuck fate"/
But Phace verses come off with a sting like duct tape//
Get stuck despite ya tries to duck hate, you've hit a tough state/
Since we all know...P would need identity theft to touch Phace//
Just, confess fails...I'll blow out this lames guts on excess scales/
Clips press frails, so see him get de-livered faster than express mail//
I just laugh, cause you still.try.shams to rap tight frees/
I'll just clench my fist so with my will.i.am. gonna black-eye P//
Demolishing foes, dropping blows to leave an immense hurt/
Cause...rhymes in a teepee is your only chance for an in-tents verse//
Links soon.
Record: 1-1-0
Record: 1-1-0
Links Know
LEGION OF LEGENDS
Jack Herrera, Sour Ina Dutch..AC On High Flyin On The Hutch
I wanna see this shit go on but ur way past deadline and I already reminded u Know.. 3 links by tonight
LEGION OF LEGENDS
Jack Herrera, Sour Ina Dutch..AC On High Flyin On The Hutch
sorry dog, my net still down. Im at work gettin links... dedicated... lol
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...388/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...353/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...254/index.html
Know P
waistin ya time in school idiot, makin ya parents sicker
Bet if look on phace book, there will be less words than pictures
lol nice np and good reference
My legacy is intact, u less important than Paul Blart
Naw, We all see you great Valyu…. Shoppers only buy shit from walmart
lol again nice nameplay reference
Hoes quick to slurp ya boy, stay rocked up like a statue
Women only scream Val yum, cause they need pills to look at you
lmfao again good np
Ima bully at this dog, u shook and probably weaker
So I got a leg up on this bitch…. about to piss on his sneakers
lol
I murder lames like you, its been a battle trend
Its obvious if P is tryina beat Know…. He’ll only get capped at the end
nah
Phace
I'll defeat this fool though he tries like "fuck fate"/
But Phace verses come off with a sting like duct tape//
setup was there but finisher was more self hype
Get stuck despite ya tries to duck hate, you've hit a tough state/
Since we all know...P would need identity theft to touch Phace//
nah didnt hit hard for me
Just, confess fails...I'll blow out this lames guts on excess scales/
Clips press frails, so see him get de-livered faster than express mail//
ok much better this hit like the multie usage in this too
I just laugh, cause you still.try.shams to rap tight frees/
I'll just clench my fist so with my will.i.am. gonna black-eye P//
lol nice concept
Demolishing foes, dropping blows to leave an immense hurt/
Cause...rhymes in a teepee is your only chance for an in-tents verse//
ok nice wp here
Well yo this was a good battle here. Know P had an enjoyable verse always brings humor to the table as well as creativity he had some cool np concepts. Phace started off a little shaky then picked it up with his 3 bars towards the end and showed some creativity as well with np and wp usage.
If i gotta choose though id say i enjoyed Knowp's verse more he kept it creative all the way through and felt his punches hit a bit more the Phace's.
V.Phace/Harder punches,Know has some lines that were too bland
...Onslaught!
My legacy is intact, u less important than Paul Blart
Naw, We all see you great Valyu…. Shoppers only buy shit from walmart
-iight
Hoes quick to slurp ya boy, stay rocked up like a statue
Women only scream Val yum, cause they need pills to look at you
-cool nameplay
Ima bully at this dog, u shook and probably weaker
So I got a leg up on this bitch…. about to piss on his sneakers
-concepts cool..cud have flipped it better
vs
I just laugh, cause you still.try.shams to rap tight frees/
I'll just clench my fist so with my will.i.am. gonna black-eye P
-this was good
Demolishing foes, dropping blows to leave an immense hurt/
Cause...rhymes in a teepee is your only chance for an in-tents verse
-in-tents wordplay is really played so in order to make this hit, its gotta be flipped really good
..that didnt happen here.
v/knowP both came iight..but he edged it with fresher hits n a overall more polished verse
Felt like Know forced his concepts a bit too much, but overall smooth and newer hits.
Phace had good concepts, good hits but didnt quite deliver them as good as they should have been
v: Phace
Phayce, you had the best line of the battle
Just, confess fails...I'll blow out this lames guts on excess scales/
Clips press frails, so see him get de-livered faster than express mail//
your other concepts were somewhat weak though.
KnowP..you were consistent and had some good lines
Hoes quick to slurp ya boy, stay rocked up like a statue
Women only scream Val yum, cause they need pills to look at you
Ima bully at this dog, u shook and probably weaker
So I got a leg up on this bitch…. about to piss on his sneakers
this was close but im going to give the win to knowp
Hoes quick to slurp ya boy, stay rocked up like a statue
Women only scream Val yum, cause they need pills to look at you
Ima bully at this dog, u shook and probably weaker
So I got a leg up on this bitch…. about to piss on his sneakers
vs
Get stuck despite ya tries to duck hate, you've hit a tough state/
Since we all know...P would need identity theft to touch Phace//
alright
I just laugh, cause you still.try.shams to rap tight frees/
I'll just clench my fist so with my will.i.am. gonna black-eye P//
i think these were the best bars of the battle from each of them...over all knowp didnt come that hard, i think flow wise phace had a better flow in some places. punchline wise knowp had better battle orientated bars. phaces third sounded good, but the multis were really forced there, along with his fifth bar. the way he executed it didnt work well. knowps first two bars were alittle lame but i think his last three came nice and gave him enough to take this win. he was more consistent of the two
waistin ya time in school idiot, makin ya parents sicker
Bet if look on phace book, there will be less words than pictures
My legacy is intact, u less important than Paul Blart
Naw, We all see you great Valyu…. Shoppers only buy shit from walmart
vs.
nothing
aight know you came pretty nice, good concepts, a little off on some wording with the punches but i quoted 2 cuz i liked them. nice drop tho def enough to get the win. Phace you didnt really come with much, had some okay concepts but for the most part na. no real punches but i see potential, just keep writing. and the structure is kind've annoying to fyi
v/ - know
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