10 lines
due before midnight pacific time
check n g/l
10 lines
due before midnight pacific time
check n g/l
im awkward on purpose because i hate people
follow me on twitter: @NobleCAM_JR
check.
im awkward on purpose because i hate people
follow me on twitter: @NobleCAM_JR
yo lets do this tomorrow im tired....i get done work after 9pm so ill finish writting then
youve been a little bitch come and get your wrist tapped
for hunting noobs down for wins in bitch slapped
the people you know would be no competition... light size
guess there's something called drama missin... Lifetime
from the strikes that these palms emitted you might cry
but thats cause faggots get emotional when touched right guy?
listen youre nothing even close to spiritual:you were never god-sent
probly were born and lived by a miracle:you were better off dead
your chest glows youre light-hearted and never seek war on tracks
cause youre only miracle and its clear you need more than that
im awkward on purpose because i hate people
follow me on twitter: @NobleCAM_JR
excuses... whatever man
im awkward on purpose because i hate people
follow me on twitter: @NobleCAM_JR
mir will man handle this lame fuck, you better get the moving son
b4 i choke you till your 'eyes turn big' like the roman numeral 1 (I)
picking who's winning this battle?? it's me....cuz i'm sick like cancer
u'd think the voters were some presistent fucks, how they won't take NO for a answer
no ones giving this kid sex........w/ him girls are quick to end a date
fact is he could sketch the characteristic's about it n still not pen a trait
imma waste these next two bars.. cuz honestly your not worth it
you could give poisen ivy to the earths crust n still not scratch the surface
blah blah blah...your rhymes are the fucking lamest
cuz ur hits produce sweet shit like famous amos
nothing, maybe 1 bar
vs.
mir will man handle this lame fuck, you better get the moving son
b4 i choke you till your 'eyes turn big' like the roman numeral
no ones giving this kid sex........w/ him girls are quick to end a date
fact is he could sketch the characteristic's about it n still not pen a trait
your opener was pretty funny. overall ok battke, noble didnt really come hard. miricle u had some fresh shit
v.- mir
word up1
im awkward on purpose because i hate people
follow me on twitter: @NobleCAM_JR
Noble had better punches, felt like miracle rushed it towards the end with no effort.
V - Noble
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mir will man handle this lame fuck, you better get the moving son
b4 i choke you till your 'eyes turn big' like the roman numeral 1 (I)
picking who's winning this battle?? it's me....cuz i'm sick like cancer
u'd think the voters were some presistent fucks, how they won't take NO for a answer
vs
listen youre nothing even close to spiritual:you were never god-sent
probly were born and lived by a miracle:you were better off dead
your chest glows youre light-hearted and never seek war on tracks
cause youre only miracle and its clear you need more than that
best bars, i think this battle was pretty close. miracle didnt put anything into his last four lines, but overall his first three hit harder than any of N0ble. is noble would have came like he did with his last two bars he would have taken this, but miracles punches were more creative
vote/ miracle
listen youre nothing even close to spiritual:you were never god-sent
probly were born and lived by a miracle:you were better off dead
vs
picking who's winning this battle?? it's me....cuz i'm sick like cancer
u'd think the voters were some presistent fucks, how they won't take NO for a answer
no ones giving this kid sex........w/ him girls are quick to end a date
fact is he could sketch the characteristic's about it n still not pen a trait
Noble verse was a little too simple and straight forward. Not a bad verse but the concepts and creativity was lacking a bit and therefore let him down. A couple of better hits and he could of taken this easy.
vote. Miracle.
noble
youve been a little bitch come and get your wrist tapped
for hunting noobs down for wins in bitch slapped
the finisher felt like it was a run on too the 1st line coulda worded it better
the people you know would be no competition... light size
guess there's something called drama missin... Lifetime
statement
from the strikes that these palms emitted you might cry
but thats cause faggots get emotional when touched right guy?
see dont use but to start a second bar no hate man it just seems like ur 1st line is a run on u feel me??
listen youre nothing even close to spiritual:you were never god-sent
probly were born and lived by a miracle:you were better off dead
ok better
your chest glows youre light-hearted and never seek war on tracks
cause youre only miracle and its clear you need more than that
ok
Miracle
mir will man handle this lame fuck, you better get the moving son
b4 i choke you till your 'eyes turn big' like the roman numeral 1 (I)
damn this was fuking nice dope metaphore direct punch here HOF line
picking who's winning this battle?? it's me....cuz i'm sick like cancer
u'd think the voters were some presistent fucks, how they won't take NO for a answer
lol nice np concept
no ones giving this kid sex........w/ him girls are quick to end a date
fact is he could sketch the characteristic's about it n still not pen a trait
lmao nice wp
imma waste these next two bars.. cuz honestly your not worth it
you could give poisen ivy to the earths crust n still not scratch the surface
lol cool concept
blah blah blah...your rhymes are the fucking lamest
cuz ur hits produce sweet shit like famous amos
nah lol
V/miracle killed it with concepts np wordplay creativity metaphores hard punches all around pretty one sided man. no noble just when u go into a second line off ur setup reframe from using but or for it just seems like the line is stretched when u do that.
your chest glows youre light-hearted and never seek war on tracks
cause youre only miracle and its clear you need more than that
vs
no ones giving this kid sex........w/ him girls are quick to end a date
fact is he could sketch the characteristic's about it n still not pen a trait
imma waste these next two bars.. cuz honestly your not worth it
you could give poisen ivy to the earths crust n still not scratch the surface
blah blah blah...your rhymes are the fucking lamest
cuz ur hits produce sweet shit like famous amos
mir crushed this wit consistency, n punches that landed, no hate to noble work on fresher concepts n creativity. no hate. keep battlin.
v- mirror
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