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Fatal Thoughts
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give me a 10h ext.. i got the drop in other cpu
no problem drop whenever.
thats first link
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8329594
this is second
We saw your pics, showing ur muscles alone u look fairy[1]
Imma grab you and divide ya in two and remake Chuck & Larry[2]
He's so ugly that cats wont bother to start scratch or shots
So if we see girls talking about him.. it's all fatal thoughts
With a punch i'm gonna fuck you up before u say "mac sucks"
But you never gonna win with those lines u took from Twilight Books
He'd be giving rap class in a hotel zero stars
But we already noticed fattys wipe their asses w/ ur bars
For a gay friend mine, i'll put you in some gay designs
But he still thinks he can win me with two shit n gay lines
I keep thinking, is this guy retard or really weak?
Instead of battling me stick editing those OM for a holy week
[1] = incase you dont know fairy meaning.. "offensive terms for an openly homosexual man"
[2] = its a movie of same sex marrying.. more info here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Now_P...huck_and_Larry
This kid is pure trash so I have no problem scrapping with Mac
You’re pathetic cuz I’ve seen better rhymes from Cat and the Hat
This fool has no swag & it’s easy to tell that this kid’s whack
I can compare you to a sandwich…cuz you got less taste than a Big Mac
Fatal’s coming with the sick rap & i’m also known to pulverize
You got vulgar lines….
…….& I’ll treat this battle like a club and strip your fucking pride
I’ll hugely strike this puny tike, so he’ll never come up with victory
The only way he could see a V…isn’t looking at his country’s history
You got terrible weak lines, with your mind your rhymes can never be fine
Haven’t you noticed the losing patterns in all your battles each time
It’s obvious to see that Mac isn’t good, so fuck claiming you’re awesome
If the fastest animal was the best rapper…then you would be a possum
Mac, this is some of your better work here, i enjoyed the opener
We saw your pics, showing ur muscles alone u look fairy
Imma grab you and divide ya in two and remake Chuck & Larry
So if we see girls talking about him.. it's all fatal thoughts - lol
But Fatal came at you a bit harder than you did him, example
This kid is pure trash so I have no problem scrapping with Mac
You’re pathetic cuz I’ve seen better rhymes from Cat and the Hat -lol
I can compare you to a sandwich…cuz you got less taste than a Big Mac
The only way he could see a V…isn’t looking at his country’s history
Fatal you connected well with the punches and the flow was good, mac - keep at it man i see some improvement from before
v/ fatal thoughts
^thanks for the vote appreciated, got any battle up so i can rtf?
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mac honestly you didnt really come with a direct punch. i was going to quote the name play line but i was to played out. you didnt flip it at all. overall you just gotta come with better concepts and learn how to word them more directly. i see potential tho, keep it up
vs.
This kid is pure trash so I have no problem scrapping with Mac
You’re pathetic cuz I’ve seen better rhymes from Cat and the Hat
fatal you came alright man, i quoted your opener cuz it made me laugh. you concepts are pretty good, some of the lines could use a touch up, but overall i can tell you got some ammo. keep it up
v/ fatal
-Scytsophrenia-
nada
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closer
both need to get more creative with their punches and use more metaphors and think outside the box. structure was aight, but concepts were too basic.
v. FT
mvgt to fatal for having a better grasp on concepts/wording and structure.
mac needs to read some LLL/vet verses to get a better grasp on how a battle should be written.
anyways mvgt ft