u keep fukin uppin ur gonna dq chill man
joeboston
Mac.
u keep fukin uppin ur gonna dq chill man
bump plz
You beating Joe? I think this motherfucker is hearing voices
When it comes to Mac i dunno whos poorer his country or his concept choices
Got sick of battlin Jeff now he wanna part of me
I could eat through Mac a million times too then leave without clogged arteries
^^^Nice concepts
vs
Nothing really
This was one-sided. Mac you're definitely elevating & every battle I read from you brings a couple of alright concepts, but you need to work on your consistency with those. The punches will start to develop more and more, the more your practice. Just keep it up...you're on your way!
v/Joe
cant hit the poll votin for links to put in my battle only feed.
Mac came really simple here basic multis not really any punch in his bars and weak schemes it didnt take much for joe to take the win here he had a few nice ones in his verse and good personals.
vote/ joeboston
around 5 days:
2 votes
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bump
Joe/Mac return the favor on one of these.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...234/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...243/index.html
I put up both because one might be closed by the time you guys get a chance to vote!
Literally u suck at rapping should just cut off at the waist
Dreams of you becoming the great are as slim as ur chances being a citizen in the United States
(^Good bar, but stretched as fuck)
Do like this:
U suck at rapping, should just cut off at the waist
You becoming great is as slim as ur chances being a citizen in the States
(^Just keep it short)
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He's gonna lose so hard that his grandchildren will feel the pain
Losing is going through his veins.. messed with mac, he never used his brain
(i'd do like this)
This loss will cause his grandchildren to endure years of pain
Never a smart kid, now suffer is going through his veins, cause he never used his brain
(Get me? it has to make sense)
V/ J for more consistency
Take a Look at my Life
good looks on the feed man
this is about to be 7 days n still aint closed shit
upp
nothing.. wasnt feeling
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Little mans still a virgin i could just look at him and tell
The closet Mac is ever getting to a box is staring at Velveeta Shells
-i thought this was cool..
v/joseph for a better more hitting verse..jojo ur getting better n better
i got joe with the more polished verse, mac keep at it bro ur gettin better. ur starting to get the idea of schemes wording. u just need to get em concepts and tie everything together.