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Joint stupidity, title track off of a little album we made. Listen, leave feedback and shit!!!?@? I swear its better than every rap song ever no big deal or anything
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Joint stupidity, title track off of a little album we made. Listen, leave feedback and shit!!!?@? I swear its better than every rap song ever no big deal or anything
this was diff...a bit too dif, i feel yall just made this to try and make your own flav, i respect the creativity, but i dunno, the beat was a bit too pausey and shit for me, didnt like the vocal effects on first verse, lyrics were meh and delivery could use some more emotion, flow was alright...hook i wasnt feeling, it was catchy tho second verse had a better flow i liekd the vibe of it, lyrics again were meh, and delivery again could use some more to it and the vocal effects need to go, with the beat the verses sound too muffled..
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Re: Butter Pretzels - Joint Stupidity
i hate to quote another persons opinion, but im kinda strapped for time, and IME pretty much laid out where i'd take my own reply..Originally Posted by I-M-E
not bad all in all, but IME has pretty much the same critical outlook as i'd have..
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looks like u owe these ass fucks $10. I wouldn't say it's better than every rap song ever. I'm sure you're exaggerating but I thought the flow was good, the quality was good and the voices were good and very clear. Lyrics and rhymes were ok. Overall this was a pretty good drop, keep it up
Not really a hip hop head type song but it has a good pop type of tune
Need a good video that can go viral
CHorus is ok
Please Refeed.
Check out the video
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=455255
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kinda cool... definitely different, but gotta pretty dope vibe to this and a unique sound... not bad, not much to say really...
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Hahah very different, which I respect. The beat is pretty dope, I like the way it bangs. Vocal quality definitely needs work though. I like the way you're flowing, somewhat reminds me of KMK around 2k. Chorus is on some party shit, but not that club shit which for me is always a plus. Makes me wanna hot box haha. Pretty ill man, something different but it's good different. Keep droppin'...
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thanks for the feedback, i should prolly clarify that its not just me, 1st verse is my buddy 2nd is me were a duo ya know!?>@
@IME - we def didn't try and just make our own flav, this is what we rap like i guess its just different, its not forced different though
but yea thnx n shit ill try to hit dudes back
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