hey this is my first attempt at an audio, just wanting some feedback thanks guys
iv re-recorded the track trying to incorporate the feedback iv been given
the beat is from fort minor song. where'd you go
hey this is my first attempt at an audio, just wanting some feedback thanks guys
iv re-recorded the track trying to incorporate the feedback iv been given
the beat is from fort minor song. where'd you go
Last edited by One80; December 4th, 2011 at 06:17 AM
yooo everyone is using this beat lol.
Slayerr just used this with his boy Kayge.
Its a good pick tho. I like how you came off on it even though it is a rough copy {i think}.
Youre more of a message sender. You should send that to the girl you talkin bout. Daz a definate pussy getter lmao
Peep my shit. Ill definately keep in contact wit you. You'll get better as you keep on
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thanks man and yea bro its my first audio so i wasnt really sure what i was doing lol, but yea man i got another one in the works atm, so i'll keep at it, and yea i like the idea of sending a message in rap =) , an i'll defo peep ya shit bro thanks alot for feedback
Did you make the beat? Pretty cool but sounds a tad bit sloppy if you know what i mean. I feel like I;ve heard this before somewhere though so maybe not. Vocals are pretty good, quality could obviously be improved a bit. You got lyrics though, very metaphoric I'm feeling it on that point. You can also ride the beat pretty well. Keep doing your thing man, stay up!
Please return the feedback homie
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...388/index.html
Last edited by ShaDoWLesS; November 17th, 2011 at 09:45 PM
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dont mind the beat choice, quality def could be upped....u flow good, delivery needs work but thatll come with time im sure.....lyrics were pretty good man, def see potential
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thanks guys, uppin
Need more emotion in the vocals sounds like ust reading on the beat the cadence on the beat good rhythm
Please Refeed.
Check out the video
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=455255
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thanks guys upping
yo nice beat choice lol, i think you should turn your vocals up though especially with a thick (midlands?) accent. lyrics were pretty nice, you been writing before you started recording? also if you really want to get better quickly best thing you can do is improve your quality yours is quite low and it will actually help you out loads. how old are you btw? this has a lot of potential though.
rtf on the track ill have up in a day or so, ill edit the link in here.
hey thanks, and yeah i have a cheap mic an have no idea how to mix, iv been writing for aslong as iv been on here so like 2-3 months in text just moved to audio, an yeah nice catch with the midlands accent haha, an im 24 =/
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you are rapping like someone is sleeping in the next room... stick your chest out when you rap, so to speak... in other words, flow with more confidence and not like you're reading off of a sheet of paper
[listening for the lyrics]
decent storytelling
Last edited by W.isdom I.s L.ife so L.iv; December 6th, 2011 at 10:52 PM
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well yeah nice beat choice delivery is kinda boring needs more energy man. just too plain for me man no emotion. no hate though keep doing ur thing
thanks guys i appreciate the feed
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