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Last edited by The Gwapfather; November 18th, 2011 at 01:28 AM
Damn this was dope. Delivery and flow was good and lyrically this was definitely nice. I felt the emotion through your delivery. Also the hook on this was sick as well. Overall everything was pretty good man...nothing to point out that was bad. Good job Gwap!
Not bad, vocals need a bit more mixing I feel. You can definitely flow riding the beat real well. You got some dope lyrics too, very relatable on that personal level. You sound like Danchise of this board kinda haha. Chorus fits well with the whole thing, this is pretty good man, some personal hip-hop shit, good drop man.
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yeah vocals sound like they need more mixing, they dont mesh with the track....flow was coo, delivery was real good, def feeling the lyrics....the beats good but sounds like your verses are too hyped for it, hook is cool and fits well...
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iigh checking this
real soulful type of beat....is this hook? oh is it i guess so lol yeah obviously i coudln't tell it sounded too much like a verse man
anyway to the verses you coming in with a lotta energy think u need to tone it down for a beat like this just swag out and keep it smooth....content is dope tho real shit....flow ain't too bad watch them breaths they're pretty loud
overall not a bad track tho man very relatable
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sick beat, loving that soulful shit. nice mechanics, flow and delivery. lyrics are nice as well. just an overall sick track dude. what can i say, i'm bumpin this hard. my kind of music.
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This is dope to me. Real laid back and smooth. You kept your emotion even all the way through. Your flow was real slick, sounded a little like Big Kannon, Infact the Hook reminded me like 2Pac for some reason probably due to the Old Skool effect it had. Definatly something I could bump outside the website holmes. Sick overall... props!
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This was sick, I listened to it a bit ago. Your flow is smoothe. The mix isn't totally clean but it's still decent and works. I like the beat and how well you ride it.. delivery is nice.. I like the notepad/wrote that part.. good emotion in the track. something you lay back and chill with your buds to. keep doin' your thing you ghetto brandon cee soundin' mufucka, ha.
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Some of the multis go to far but it was spit pretty good on the beat.
I liked the chorus the track was a nice vibe
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playing now... like the beat so far...
the vocals... sounds too forced... it doesnt really blend with the way the beats slams on the speakers. the second delivery was better it goes well with the beat the breathing kinda bothers me... sorry man..
but this was illy man.. you have talent man.... just the vocals is my only problem with this the content and rhythm was cool man
The beat is nice and mellow.
The flow rides the beat nicely.
The lyrics are good most of the way and drift off for me on other parts.
Overall very good job Gwapfather.
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damn I'm loving da beat so sourful and ur flow is amazing u rode da beat so well chorus real dope.
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