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    Sadness




    I'm new to rapping
    what do you guys think

    Would love if you guys checked out by other videos to

    THANKS

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    Re: Sadness

    sounds kind of like your talking and its a little off key

    yeah delivery and flow needs work, try to not read and rap

    but that shit should improve the more you rap so keep at it
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    Re: Sadness

    Why use a weed image for sadness? Hahah, other than that, beat is good, real oldschool sounding that's always a plus. Flows is pretty good, riding the beat well. Lyrics are relatable to some, quality could be a bit better though. Also should have extended this, I was feeling it haha. Good drop.

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    Re: Sadness

    Quote Originally Posted by ShaDoWLesS View Post
    Why use a weed image for sadness? Hahah, other than that, beat is good, real oldschool sounding that's always a plus. Flows is pretty good, riding the beat well. Lyrics are relatable to some, quality could be a bit better though. Also should have extended this, I was feeling it haha. Good drop.

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    Thanks for the feedback
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    Re: Sadness

    This was pretty good for someone who just started recording. The beat goes hard, id'e work on the quality a bit, my shit aint that good but i did here places where it sounds like you bumped the mic and otheres where you clipped out, those are things you could work on pre-recording, i don't know if your using a pop filter or not but if your not you can make one out of wire hanger and hosing. The lyrics and flow were alright, both need work but you didn't suck. Just keep at it and you'll find your comfort zone.

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    Re: Sadness

    You sound like you just started rapping.
    DONT PANIC...I've heard worse lol.

    You should write a specific verse to the chosen beat, and use the syllables to your advantage. Remember you're the author.

    Good shit for a first try tho.
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