The beat goes pretty hard, your flows alright, a lil plain and robotic, the lyrics are pretty good, some of the concepts need more polish, the wording is a bit awkward in some places too, sounds a tad mother goose'ish. Also were you talking about joe camel, i didnt know they still made camels. anyway ya. Thats a decent critique, not that one line bullshit you tried on me - its give and take nigga
im feeling this, real laid back, make you think and definately a nice switch of pace from today's music.
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Beat is DOPE, maybe turn your vocals a bit more up, flow is a bit basic, maybe try and make it more smooth, content is cool, second verse voice sounds different, not sure if it's a different person. Overall not to bad bro, needs some work here and there, just need to tighten up some things. Keep it up.
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Beats pretty dope, some newschool kinda shit for sure, but could be early 2000's. I like the content on this, pretty relatable. Flow is pretty good, falls a bit off beat at some points but that's me being extremely picky haha. Quality could be improved a bit, but the same goes for all of us. I like the chorus, its very trippy/somber, reminds me of something to play by yourself on the street or going for a drive. Something to make you really think. Good song man, I'd bump this again.
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Beat has a nice vibe
Voice a little quiet on the track could work with some melody on the verse
Ok delivery basic cadence but made sure to stay consitent
CHorus works nice
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the beat is hot man!
the vocals need to be upped abit more bro
the lyrics are nice man hook works good like the female vocals in hooks !!
all in all man dope drop just need to have a better mix !
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the beat is hot man!
the vocals need to be upped abit more bro
the lyrics are nice man hook works good like the female vocals in hooks !!
all in all man dope drop just need to have a better mix !
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Spotify - JMIN SCHOBS
AMAZON - JMIN SCHOBS
AppleMusic - JMIN MUSIC
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The BEAT was real sick bro
Lyrics werent bad either
I'd pump this again too
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