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Last edited by Jizzy.; November 29th, 2011 at 07:46 PM
This is our first track ever btw. lol
This beat sound familiar. That Marty guy almost sound like Mac Miller. Pretty impressive. Lyrics could've been a bit deeper. But nothing too major. Flow from both followed this beat nicely. ... By the way, this an immortal technique beat? Anyways, hook is raw. Bring your boy here dude. I might have a crew spot for you both. On here and Facebook. Dope track, impressive from both artists.
Thanks a lot man. Yeah we kinda just came up with the hook, but he's got the voice for it. Lol I always tell him he sounds like Mac. This shit aint really like my style, its more like his. But we put something together. The shit we wrote was pre written, we didnt even make the track together, just kind've bunched it together. My style goes a lil harder, and i'll post more shit soon. But i'll definatly tell him man and we'll get something going. Like i said, we both have days and days of ammo, just got the studio time recently. so this was our first track, i feel like its not good enough. im a perfectionist lol so we got mad work to do. Thanks for the feed man. you got links i can hit ?
Don't worry about links, right now I'm just Freshcoast classics coleader and promoter. Just keep posting music and stay active fam.
That's wassup. Yeah we got some real shit on deck. I'ma check out the site
If interested....
Www.Facebook.com/paranormalClassics
Edit: thanks
Last edited by Mr. Write; November 10th, 2011 at 12:54 PM
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...063/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...200/index.html
There you go.
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This was actually pretty dope. I love the guitar, very chill type track. Your friend has a good voice, I'm going to have to get him on one of my hooks lol. Anyway, chorus was dope. I think you guys compliment eachother on this track pretty well. Lyrics were interesting, flow was smooth. The only thing I would suggest is maybe improving your delivery. Both of you guys had spots that could be touched up, try really expressing those emotions from your lyrics when ur spittin. Overall though, this was pretty catchy and I definitely had to play this a couple times.
Thanks a lot for the feed man. Yeah we kind've just got the studio time, we didnt even really put this together like it should have. Just moshed a bunch of ideas we had. I do have to work on expressing myself through the music, i'll practice that through recording in the future. Myself and him are coming out with some real hip hop & try to go hard. But i always enjoy the chill tracks, ya know. Thanks for the feed.
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Just realized it's a J. Cole beat.
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Definitely not my style of song, but I can respect the effort put into it. Flows really smoothe, kind of half singing shit too that's pretty dope not everyone can do that kinda thing. All verses mesh together pretty well, all seem to be at a similar skill level. Quality could use some work, but that goes with everyone. Nothing too crazy but a nice smoothe jam, good shit man. Keep doing your thing.
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