Mafioso. (0-0) vs Cbjbkd (0-0) Maf wins

[The Archetype]

LLL Season 15, Week 7

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[Mafioso.]

wat a great way to start me offf..

[Letterman]

Check

[Mafioso.]

alias???

[Letterman]

Nope...12 lines?

[Mafioso.]

na I need like 16 so i can shake the rust

[Letterman]

Iight

[Letterman]

So Maf's back...

With the same ol’ tactics, still dropping average stuff
But brought a new excuse to justify his wackness…to call it rust
Was a mistake undermining me, so when I body dude…
The league will have to retrace his steps…and his body too
You shoulda retired, you’re showing signs of rust in your verse
Your bars have been noticed…
But that’s only because your punches wont work
We wont get your shit, even if explained a thousand times
Your concepts are such a stretch…as a result of your tired ass lines
It’s too easy, sit back & watch the votes get swept
Im sending you to 0-1…
& while you’re there, be sure to return all of your concepts
Try to throw some haymakers & watch they all go floppin
Cuz all your punches are remotely played, like video boxing
Even tho’ he’s cocky, arrogant, and a little bit pushy
Maf’s a down to earth cat…especially since I buried this pussy

Dropped 14

[Letterman]

Edited my verse in...

[Mafioso.]

i'll drop soon my b jus gote dnt wrry tho i wont nishow....jus let me eat smoke and i;'ll drop fam

[Mafioso.]

lmao dam its been a while

cbjbkd??? WTF has LLL become too? bitch, ur nowhere near my flow
everyone knows I'll KO yo ass...with recyled lines I KEYED from two yrs ago
plus ur weird AND slow, no woman will eva bend her bac for this man
so his idea of "blinddates"...kidnappin girls, THAN rapin them in bac of his van
I should give mods the bac of my hand, for jus lettin me take the win..
its obvious arch was on METH wen he set this...cuz YOU should be facin him
how the hell did they let you in??? its easy to tell ya shits wack
u flip so many wack lines...ur verses are the fucin reason chrit's back.
I'll get this kid jacked, I dont understand why people saying ur hot wen
thirty people can sign out the league...and u still wouldnt be top ten
shitty ass style jus by ya verses I can tell ur a bored teen
u fuckin fiend, the only time we wanna CBJ...is on a porn screen
and fuc ya whole team, I'll steal ur sig and bring it to life so chill son.
WEN I BUST IN UR MOTHERS MOUTH...now thats the definition of ill tongues

[Bongkers]

With the same ol’ tactics, still dropping average stuff
But brought a new excuse to justify his wackness…to call it rust
weak
Was a mistake undermining me, so when I body dude…
The league will have to retrace his steps…and his body too
lol, okish
You shoulda retired, you’re showing signs of rust in your verse
Your bars have been noticed…
But that’s only because your punches wont work
Not feelin' it
We wont get your shit, even if explained a thousand times
Your concepts are such a stretch…as a result of your tired ass lines
played bro
It’s too easy, sit back & watch the votes get swept
Im sending you to 0-1…
& while you’re there, be sure to return all of your concepts
haha, dope
Try to throw some haymakers & watch they all go floppin
Cuz all your punches are remotely played, like video boxing
na this is weak
Even tho’ he’s cocky, arrogant, and a little bit pushy
Maf’s a down to earth cat…especially since I buried this pussy
ehh.. kinda played out


Aight verse.. one dope bar, the rest were decent enough had a few played concepts in there that kinda killed your verse though..



cbjbkd??? WTF has LLL become too? bitch, ur nowhere near my flow
everyone knows I'll KO yo ass...with recyled lines I KEYED from two yrs ago
ok
plus ur weird AND slow, no woman will eva bend her bac for this man
so his idea of "blinddates"...kidnappin girls, THAN rapin them in bac of his van
haha, simple but the way you worded it cracked me up
I should give mods the bac of my hand, for jus lettin me take the win..
its obvious arch was on METH wen he set this...cuz YOU should be facin him
Played.. aight flip
how the hell did they let you in??? its easy to tell ya shits wack
u flip so many wack lines...ur verses are the fucin reason chrit's back.
doesn't really make sense to me, why would he come back if he's flippin wack lines? idk haha
I'll get this kid jacked, I dont understand why people saying ur hot wen
thirty people can sign out the league...and u still wouldnt be top ten
lmfao, basic but funny
shitty ass style jus by ya verses I can tell ur a bored teen
u fuckin fiend, the only time we wanna CBJ...is on a porn screen
played bro, I know your just back but I've seen that concept a lot so i kinda killed it
and fuc ya whole team, I'll steal ur sig and bring it to life so chill son.
WEN I BUST IN UR MOTHERS MOUTH...now thats the definition of ill tongues
meh

Some of your bars were a little basic but you definitely know how to make a verse funny, your wording is pretty good too.. just watch the played wordplays on people you haven't battled before cause most shits been used.


Vote- Close battle here, I think CBJ had Botb with the 01 concept but apart from that his verse was really lacking.. Maf did pretty well and had a couple of bars that were hitting and his misses were on par with cbjs I think he edged it here with consistency.. cool battle

V - Maf

[ArchDevil]

With the same ol’ tactics, still dropping average stuff
But brought a new excuse to justify his wackness…to call it rust
^ seen similar concepts, okish though

Was a mistake undermining me, so when I body dude…
The league will have to retrace his steps…and his body too
^ ahh, not a bad concept, just wasnt feelin the finisher here

You shoulda retired, you’re showing signs of rust in your verse
Your bars have been noticed…
But that’s only because your punches wont work
^ kinda played tbh

We wont get your shit, even if explained a thousand times
Your concepts are such a stretch…as a result of your tired ass lines
^ a bit played

It’s too easy, sit back & watch the votes get swept
Im sending you to 0-1…
& while you’re there, be sure to return all of your concepts
^ seen different concepts like this, 0-1, 0-3, 0-2, not that fresh

Try to throw some haymakers & watch they all go floppin
Cuz all your punches are remotely played, like video boxing
^ not really feelin this

Even tho’ he’s cocky, arrogant, and a little bit pushy
Maf’s a down to earth cat…especially since I buried this pussy
^ haha cool


vs.


cbjbkd??? WTF has LLL become too? bitch, ur nowhere near my flow
everyone knows I'll KO yo ass...with recyled lines I KEYED from two yrs ago
^ lol, a bit statementish but was a cool start

plus ur weird AND slow, no woman will eva bend her bac for this man
so his idea of "blinddates"...kidnappin girls, THAN rapin them in bac of his van
^ lol @ "bend her back for this man", was pretty funny when i read that part...cool punch, fresh aswell

I should give mods the bac of my hand, for jus lettin me take the win..
its obvious arch was on METH wen he set this...cuz YOU should be facin him
^ ehh, pretty played, seen a few meth concepts til now

how the hell did they let you in??? its easy to tell ya shits wack
u flip so many wack lines...ur verses are the fucin reason chrit's back.
^ lol, dont actually know the personal but it was funny, i see what u mean

I'll get this kid jacked, I dont understand why people saying ur hot wen
thirty people can sign out the league...and u still wouldnt be top ten
^ haha, this was lotb imo...solid punch, had sting

shitty ass style jus by ya verses I can tell ur a bored teen
u fuckin fiend, the only time we wanna CBJ...is on a porn screen
^ nah, this is really played on him

and fuc ya whole team, I'll steal ur sig and bring it to life so chill son.
WEN I BUST IN UR MOTHERS MOUTH...now thats the definition of ill tongues
^ ehhh, nothing spectacular


ok, this is a cool battle...but could've been real dope if both came a bit more fresh in some parts...cbj, i really enjoyed ya verse structure wise, ya set-ups were nice, cool wording but some of the concepts were played imo, which made the punches not hit that hard, too bad tbh...on the other hand, even though mafioso had a few played lines aswell, he had a couple more fresher concepts and was just a bit more consistent with punches...
vote - mafioso

[Vinzr]

Was a mistake undermining me, so when I body dude…
The league will have to retrace his steps…and his body too
It’s too easy, sit back & watch the votes get swept
Im sending you to 0-1…
& while you’re there, be sure to return all of your concepts


vs

cbjbkd??? WTF has LLL become too? bitch, ur nowhere near my flow
everyone knows I'll KO yo ass...with recyled lines I KEYED from two yrs ago
I'll get this kid jacked, I dont understand why people saying ur hot wen
thirty people can sign out the league...and u still wouldnt be top ten

i think both had about the same number of hits and misses but i think mafioso's misses hit better than cbj's misses

v/ maf

[Slowhands]

cjbjkjkskadhaklsdno

With the same ol’ tactics, still dropping average stuff
But brought a new excuse to justify his wackness…to call it rust
- meh okish
Was a mistake undermining me, so when I body dude…
The league will have to retrace his steps…and his body too
- meh old
You shoulda retired, you’re showing signs of rust in your verse
Your bars have been noticed…
But that’s only because your punches wont work
- ok ish
We wont get your shit, even if explained a thousand times
Your concepts are such a stretch…as a result of your tired ass lines
- nah
It’s too easy, sit back & watch the votes get swept
Im sending you to 0-1…
& while you’re there, be sure to return all of your concepts
- played
Try to throw some haymakers & watch they all go floppin
Cuz all your punches are remotely played, like video boxing
- ok
Even tho’ he’s cocky, arrogant, and a little bit pushy
Maf’s a down to earth cat…especially since I buried this pussy
- meh

overall - feel like your concepts came from 2002 or some shit, not to mention it seemed like you didn't try much with your set-ups.



Mafioso

cbjbkd??? WTF has LLL become too? bitch, ur nowhere near my flow
everyone knows I'll KO yo ass...with recyled lines I KEYED from two yrs ago
- lol kinda
plus ur weird AND slow, no woman will eva bend her bac for this man
so his idea of "blinddates"...kidnappin girls, THAN rapin them in bac of his van
- meh kinda corny
I should give mods the bac of my hand, for jus lettin me take the win..
its obvious arch was on METH wen he set this...cuz YOU should be facin him
- lol ok
how the hell did they let you in??? its easy to tell ya shits wack
u flip so many wack lines...ur verses are the fucin reason chrit's back.
- decent
I'll get this kid jacked, I dont understand why people saying ur hot wen
thirty people can sign out the league...and u still wouldnt be top ten
- ok
shitty ass style jus by ya verses I can tell ur a bored teen
u fuckin fiend, the only time we wanna CBJ...is on a porn screen
- meh ok but meheh meh
and fuc ya whole team, I'll steal ur sig and bring it to life so chill son.
WEN I BUST IN UR MOTHERS MOUTH...now thats the definition of ill tongues
- nah

overall - your misses were ugly, but the middle of your verse was pretty funny shit. i can see you getting back in no time.




vote - i got Mafioso taking this easily, seems like cbjbjb wahtever is just an alias bullshitting tbh. not much effort on his part and played punches