A.T. (3-2) vs Bong (3-2) A.T. wins

[The Archetype]

LLL Season 15, Week 7

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Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
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[Bongkers]

Mr. A.T..

[A.T.]

Mr. Bong...

[Bongkers]

will edit verse here

[A.T.]

My bad, almost forgot...

Your faggot ass has got to go, cause your constantly riding pro's,
You ain't got shit, dick! but, you've gave every vet in the league one of those ,
Not waiter but I serve the poor, free even though u ain't worth it whore,
I ain't getting rich trying to bill a bong, when all this broke fuck does is surf boards. 
You're an overweight pale fuck who can't run without breathing heavily,
So, lights, camera, and... action!... Are three things this ugly fuck'll never see!
Our past battles left you in a coffin, now you back for another stomping,
See, I'm like an Arch-nemises, and yours would have the skill of Joeboston,
What's the best u got, I drop explosive verses and you'll never see this vet stop,
Cause, as soon as you step on mine, the next one will blow your fuckin legs off. 
Fuck a vegetative state, ima kill him & A.T. doesn't make mistakes...
So the only way you'd ever see a Bong turnip, is if you drained the fuckin lake,
Dont think im conceited, but Token, I shoulda been top ten seeded,
I was gonna drop a dope ass verse... Saw this match up and realized it wasn't needed.

[Bongkers]

after this the confident herb will be a panicky bitch
when he see's AT-L, reminding him how much of a gamble battling me actually is
ur consistency is missing, it's the reason why your a terrible writer
shit, your last verse was so hit n miss I thought that it was meant for the cypher
Toke you put me up against this soft flower? now his chances are tragically slim
when I said id put the pedal to the metal.. I didn't mean for you to match me with him..

Ima use a come/cum line in this weeks battle.

seriously, each week you only have 1 or 2 visable quotes
you drop so played... I honestly couldn't tell if this^^ was a joke
+ ur known to be a redneck, that fucked tradition is apart of you
so if he says he's flippin' the bird, it's just a dead pigeon on his barbecue
you the opposite of hiphop, n the following is actually true..
I could say let's throw dem bones..
n he'll reply "don't waste em, I could use that for a stew"
we competing for the top 10, ima do my best to be rippin him up
could call this a face off.. but I'm just happy u did that n FINALLY removed the pic of ur mug


lol g/l fam

[Slowhands]

AT

Your faggot ass has got to go, cause your constantly riding pro's,
You ain't got shit, dick! but, you've gave every vet in the league one of those ,
- meh
Not waiter but I serve the poor, free even though u ain't worth it whore,
I ain't getting rich trying to bill a bong, when all this broke fuck does is surf boards.
- decent
You're an overweight pale fuck who can't run without breathing heavily,
So, lights, camera, and... action!... Are three things this ugly fuck'll never see!
- meh
Our past battles left you in a coffin, now you back for another stomping,
See, I'm like an Arch-nemises, and yours would have the skill of Joeboston,
- meh
What's the best u got, I drop explosive verses and you'll never see this vet stop,
Cause, as soon as you step on mine, the next one will blow your fuckin legs off.
- nah
Fuck a vegetative state, ima kill him & A.T. doesn't make mistakes...
So the only way you'd ever see a Bong turnip, is if you drained the fuckin lake,
- spell check?
Dont think im conceited, but Token, I shoulda been top ten seeded,
I was gonna drop a dope ass verse... Saw this match up and realized it wasn't needed.
- ok ish

overall - off tops i felt like you dropped cocky thinking this was an easy week. we'll see



bong

after this the confident herb will be a panicky bitch
when he see's AT-L, reminding him how much of a gamble battling me actually is
- ok ish
ur consistency is missing, it's the reason why your a terrible writer
shit, your last verse was so hit n miss I thought that it was meant for the cypher
- meh
Toke you put me up against this soft flower? now his chances are tragically slim
when I said id put the pedal to the metal.. I didn't mean for you to match me with him..
- weak
seriously, each week you only have 1 or 2 visable quotes
you drop so played... I honestly couldn't tell if this^^ was a joke
- meh
+ ur known to be a redneck, that fucked tradition is apart of you
so if he says he's flippin' the bird, it's just a dead pigeon on his barbecue
- lol
you the opposite of hiphop, n the following is actually true..
I could say let's throw dem bones..
n he'll reply "don't waste em, I could use that for a stew"
- corny
we competing for the top 10, ima do my best to be rippin him up
could call this a face off.. but I'm just happy u did that n FINALLY removed the pic of ur mug
- ok ish

overall - bad wording and simple concepts. not impressed compared to your other verses




vote - i have AT taking this by a hair, both seem to lack in concepts and wording kinda killed boths attempts as well.

[Chrit.]

Not waiter but I serve the poor, free even though u ain't worth it whore,
I ain't getting rich trying to bill a bong, when all this broke fuck does is surf boards.

vs

+ ur known to be a redneck, that fucked tradition is apart of you
so if he says he's flippin' the bird, it's just a dead pigeon on his barbecue


Both were pretty inconsistent. For the most part both verses were pretty simple and predictable. AT could have sealed it wording the mine punch better. Bong could have won with better wording overall. So it really comes downs to concepts since the execution from both was lacking. AT takes it for the mine idea...



v/AT

[Joe Boston]

A.T.

Your faggot ass has got to go, cause your constantly riding pro's,
You ain't got shit, dick! but, you've gave every vet in the league one of those ,
wasnt feeling this

Not waiter but I serve the poor, free even though u ain't worth it whore,
I ain't getting rich trying to bill a bong, when all this broke fuck does is surf boards.
nice np reference good concept

You're an overweight pale fuck who can't run without breathing heavily,
So, lights, camera, and... action!... Are three things this ugly fuck'll never see!
nah

Our past battles left you in a coffin, now you back for another stomping,
See, I'm like an Arch-nemises, and yours would have the skill of Joeboston,
fuck u lol

What's the best u got, I drop explosive verses and you'll never see this vet stop,
Cause, as soon as you step on mine, the next one will blow your fuckin legs off.
nah

Fuck a vegetative state, ima kill him & A.T. doesn't make mistakes...
So the only way you'd ever see a Bong turnip, is if you drained the fuckin lake,
didnt get this finisher

Dont think im conceited, but Token, I shoulda been top ten seeded,
I was gonna drop a dope ass verse... Saw this match up and realized it wasn't needed.
ok cocky

Bong

after this the confident herb will be a panicky bitch
when he see's AT-L, reminding him how much of a gamble battling me actually is
not bad

ur consistency is missing, it's the reason why your a terrible writer
shit, your last verse was so hit n miss I thought that it was meant for the cypher
nah


Toke you put me up against this soft flower? now his chances are tragically slim
when I said id put the pedal to the metal.. I didn't mean for you to match me with him..
nah not feeling finisher





Quote:
Originally Posted by A.T.
Ima use a come/cum line in this weeks battle.

seriously, each week you only have 1 or 2 visable quotes
you drop so played... I honestly couldn't tell if this^^ was a joke
nah


+ ur known to be a redneck, that fucked tradition is apart of you
so if he says he's flippin' the bird, it's just a dead pigeon on his barbecue
ok lol

you the opposite of hiphop, n the following is actually true..
I could say let's throw dem bones..
n he'll reply "don't waste em, I could use that for a stew"
nah

we competing for the top 10, ima do my best to be rippin him up
could call this a face off.. but I'm just happy u did that n FINALLY removed the pic of ur mug
ok

I seen alot better hits from both contenders alot of misses and some slight hits but when it comes to it thought A.T. had a slight more consistency.

V/A.T.

[King]

Your faggot ass has got to go, cause your constantly riding pro's,
You ain't got shit, dick! but, you've gave every vet in the league one of those ,

good flip, its been done though

Not waiter but I serve the poor, free even though u ain't worth it whore,
I ain't getting rich trying to bill a bong, when all this broke fuck does is surf boards.

decent, the nameplay is kind of a weird lead in though

You're an overweight pale fuck who can't run without breathing heavily,
So, lights, camera, and... action!... Are three things this ugly fuck'll never see!

eh, not crazy about it. "camera" throws the play off

Our past battles left you in a coffin, now you back for another stomping,
See, I'm like an Arch-nemises, and yours would have the skill of Joeboston,

nah. no good

What's the best u got, I drop explosive verses and you'll never see this vet stop,
Cause, as soon as you step on mine, the next one will blow your fuckin legs off.

played, ok flip

Fuck a vegetative state, ima kill him & A.T. doesn't make mistakes...
So the only way you'd ever see a Bong turnip, is if you drained the fuckin lake,

cool

Dont think im conceited, but Token, I shoulda been top ten seeded,
I was gonna drop a dope ass verse... Saw this match up and realized it wasn't needed.

weak. this kind of shit has been done a lot.

vs

after this the confident herb will be a panicky bitch
when he see's AT-L, reminding him how much of a gamble battling me actually is

eh, not really feeling it

ur consistency is missing, it's the reason why your a terrible writer
shit, your last verse was so hit n miss I thought that it was meant for the cypher

nah, i've seen a lot of shit like this, and it wasn't a hard enough flip

Toke you put me up against this soft flower? now his chances are tragically slim
when I said id put the pedal to the metal.. I didn't mean for you to match me with him..

ok, set up was wordy as fuck though

seriously, each week you only have 1 or 2 visable quotes
you drop so played... I honestly couldn't tell if this^^ was a joke

soft

+ ur known to be a redneck, that fucked tradition is apart of you
so if he says he's flippin' the bird, it's just a dead pigeon on his barbecue

cool punch, but its soft

you the opposite of hiphop, n the following is actually true..
I could say let's throw dem bones..
n he'll reply "don't waste em, I could use that for a stew"

same punch as above with a different lead in.

we competing for the top 10, ima do my best to be rippin him up
could call this a face off.. but I'm just happy u did that n FINALLY removed the pic of ur mug

the personal was a good concept, but this delivery was a miss. "face off" shit is played. punch was wordy


AT got this. not by much but he was clearly more consistent, with better attempts. both of the verses were way too soft though. no personals, nothing really that harsh.

vote AT

[Token]

Your faggot ass has got to go, cause your constantly riding pro's,
You ain't got shit, dick! but, you've gave every vet in the league one of those ,
Not waiter but I serve the poor, free even though u ain't worth it whore,
I ain't getting rich trying to bill a bong, when all this broke fuck does is surf boards.
You're an overweight pale fuck who can't run without breathing heavily,
So, lights, camera, and... action!... Are three things this ugly fuck'll never see!
What's the best u got, I drop explosive verses and you'll never see this vet stop,
Cause, as soon as you step on mine, the next one will blow your fuckin legs off.

vs.

ur consistency is missing, it's the reason why your a terrible writer
shit, your last verse was so hit n miss I thought that it was meant for the cypher
seriously, each week you only have 1 or 2 visable quotes
you drop so played... I honestly couldn't tell if this^^ was a joke
+ ur known to be a redneck, that fucked tradition is apart of you
so if he says he's flippin' the bird, it's just a dead pigeon on his barbecue
we competing for the top 10, ima do my best to be rippin him up
could call this a face off.. but I'm just happy u did that n FINALLY removed the pic of ur mug

barbecue line wasnt really a hit i just laughed cuz it was corny... but this was a decent battle actually, it was pretty close imo. AT i'm proud of u son, those first couple lines were fire... ur concepts are there just need a bit of wording work. Bong you are getting there, just had a couple misses where the concepts were just wack. eliminate the filler.

V/ AT

[MV]

A.T.
Your faggot ass has got to go, cause your constantly riding pro's,
You ain't got shit, dick! but, you've gave every vet in the league one of those ,
Fuck a vegetative state, ima kill him & A.T. doesn't make mistakes...
So the only way you'd ever see a Bong turnip, is if you drained the fuckin lake,
This faggot bitch is a poor slob and has a huge fucking porn prob
& I will fucking kill you... If you don't stop starring at me every time you eat a corndog.

vs

Bong
ur consistency is missing, it's the reason why your a terrible writer
shit, your last verse was so hit n miss I thought that it was meant for the cypher
seriously, each week you only have 1 or 2 visable quotes
you drop so played... I honestly couldn't tell if this^^ was a joke
we competing for the top 10, ima do my best to be rippin him up
could call this a face off.. but I'm just happy u did that n FINALLY removed the pic of ur mug


both were kind of hit and miss this time around. i have bong with the stronger personals but A.T. with more consistency thorought the verse. i have to go with A.T. on this one because his misses were stronger than Bongs

v/A.T.

[The Archetype]

AT wins