Jmin - shangri la

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[J-min]

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[H.A.S. - D.4.L.]

at first i thought there were too many vocals, during the hook its hot, but through the verses it through me off but after letting it set it i like it a lot like a back up vocalist to ad-lib for the rapper. But to be honest, the overall vibe compared to your older shit is missing, I'm personally more into up beat tracks so maybe im just being bias

[KineticTheory]

I'd have to agree with H.A.S. that the vibe is somewhere amiss lol. cant really put my finger on it but, its missing something. The vocal sample was good on the hooks tho. Put some beat drops in somewhere, switch up your kicks every now and then also, make it less repedative sounding. I usually really dig your beats bro, but this ones just not strummin me right. Keep doin your thing bro, we all know you got it in ya!

[W.isdom I.s L.ife so L.iv]

the bassline could be better... shy away from the 808's on this one ... the drums and bassline kill the melody... did you make the drums first? i could go for a basic boom bap on this melody. keep elevating.

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