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  1. November 5th, 2011, 10:03 AM #1
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    Im On It (cover)

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  2. November 5th, 2011, 10:06 AM #2
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...929/index.html

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  3. November 5th, 2011, 10:43 AM #3
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    Checkin this out for ya too..you come in smoother than the last joint i just checked out...swagger shit, here. Good punches. Startin to get more hype here, lol. I dig it. Don't think I've heard the beat before but it's cool for the track. Keep it up, man. 1
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  4. November 6th, 2011, 05:55 AM #4
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    Thanks man, if you have any tracks that need feed, I'll rtf.

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  5. November 6th, 2011, 11:37 AM #5
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    the beat was nice could see it in the club most definitely. The start of flow was very laid back wasnt feeling it but then when the beat picked up the energy was fuking ill. flow was ill and lyrically ur fukin nice. keep droppin man ill keep leavin feed i think u have madd potential.
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  6. November 6th, 2011, 02:27 PM #6
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    Beat is somewhat hype as fuck. some ass droppin shit. I like how you start out all laid back and then get hyped out out of nowhere. SICK. props dude
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  7. November 6th, 2011, 05:39 PM #7
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    The flow in the beginning was really beginner sounding and put me off to how the rest of this track would go... but when you started picking up the intensity your true potential showed and I started really vibing with this track.
    Besides the beginning I thought this was solid
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  8. November 6th, 2011, 05:39 PM #8
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    The flow in the beginning was really beginner sounding and put me off to how the rest of this track would go... but when you started picking up the intensity your true potential showed and I started really vibing with this track.
    Besides the beginning I thought this was solid
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  9. November 6th, 2011, 06:14 PM #9
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    Thanks for all the feed guys...I will rtf when I get to a computer.

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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    up.

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  11. November 9th, 2011, 06:34 PM #11
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    Bro this could be NASTY if it was mixed well. Let me mix this man, it could be fire!

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  12. November 11th, 2011, 10:55 AM #12
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    i dont really like your laid back delivery..when u kick it into hardrive and put more bass in ur voice is nice..u sound off on some bars..and it kinda sounds like ur adding to much on some effect..its good shit tho
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    This was pretty dope, you flow jumps around a little too much for my taste but the lyrics for the most part were on point. The beginning was monotone but when the beat kicked up it fell into place the only other thing i would say work on is coming up with more relative similies and metaphores or you run the risk of saying a bunch of dumb random shit like lil wayne, not saying your shit is dumb or random, just try and tie your devices into a common theme. See, this is how you leave feed back... Feed-Back
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  14. November 11th, 2011, 02:48 PM #14
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    beat's kinda bangin'... I think your delivery could have a little more life in it, your delivery style is cool but need to put some more energy behind it... all of a sudden it changes and gets WAY better... not bad all around yo...


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  15. November 11th, 2011, 02:56 PM #15
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    Re: Im On It (cover)

    real club -ish

    feelin this


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