10 lines
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drop whenever you can after you see this
This is my check
10 lines
house rules
drop whenever you can after you see this
This is my check
check
9th a bitch in the kitchen just baking up pies,
came to battle with 4 and 20 blackbirds instead of a forty-five,
so how you gon fuck with the chosen one, no ammo will blow me son,
rhymes are like bullets, you didn't just jam, you a frozen gun,
so i wonder why you come at me softer then plush pillows,
your bitch i bust into, now drake aint the only one with trust issues,
i KICK like instrumental and ninth shit in his underwear
you'd only bring a beat-in (beating) if the real 9thWonder appeared,
but here ill go head put this in a way you will understand,
even with 'your arm above my head' you still won't have the 'upper hand'
Peeped your wack verses, need to 'iron' out kinks in your sentence
Cause your rhymes only 'seem/seam' to be 'straight' ... sorta like your sexual preference
Style will always be repetitive, a sedative however you may strive
'Power in Numbers' and 'Motown' is the only time you'll ever hear a dope Jay five/J5
No 'doubt' i'm 'reasonable', but you got to stop dealing shit
Jigga man is the only time voters associate a Jay line with 'feeling it'
I don't pretend to hit, or mean to offend this bitch, you need to amend your shit and stop play talking
With so many 'pedestrian' concepts in any battle you take the L and start 'Jay Walking'
Black mamba like Kobe, beef is what i'm after ... not interested in play
But you're too easy, 'super knockout' ... like playing first level and beating 'Gabby Jay'
givin this to 9th for bein the more creative, original, complex here. it wasnt close at all to me and he just seemed to form concepts better, at times there was weak jabs thrown or long set ups in my opinion but it was enough.
i guess jay did try to be complex but it came out weak execution wise, need to work on that wordin dog. also wasnt feelin the nameplay, coulda been harder.
vote -> 9thwonder
INFEKTED PENZ
9th a bitch in the kitchen just baking up pies,
came to battle with 4 and 20 blackbirds instead of a forty-five,
statementy opener
so how you gon fuck with the chosen one, no ammo will blow me son,
rhymes are like bullets, you didn't just jam, you a frozen gun,
mehish
so i wonder why you come at me softer then plush pillows,
your bitch i bust into, now drake aint the only one with trust issues,
ha,mehish
i KICK like instrumental and ninth shit in his underwear
you'd only bring a beat-in (beating) if the real 9thWonder appeared,
ha,ok
but here ill go head put this in a way you will understand,
even with 'your arm above my head' you still won't have the 'upper hand'
played
vs
Peeped your wack verses, need to 'iron' out kinks in your sentence
Cause your rhymes only 'seem/seam' to be 'straight' ... sorta like your sexual preference
ha,nice opener
Style will always be repetitive, a sedative however you may strive
'Power in Numbers' and 'Motown' is the only time you'll ever hear a dope Jay five/J5
nah
No 'doubt' i'm 'reasonable', but you got to stop dealing shit
Jigga man is the only time voters associate a Jay line with 'feeling it'
meh
I don't pretend to hit, or mean to offend this bitch, you need to amend your shit and stop play talking
With so many 'pedestrian' concepts in any battle you take the L and start 'Jay Walking'
oo nice one,could of been worded a bit better but still good
Black mamba like Kobe, beef is what i'm after ... not interested in play
But you're too easy, 'super knockout' ... like playing first level and beating 'Gabby Jay'
meh
v/9th for the better punches of the match
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"Man is the measure of all things,because God made him that way"
Uppin for Jay's links n one more from 9th
LEGION OF LEGENDS
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Peeped your wack verses, need to 'iron' out kinks in your sentence
Cause your rhymes only 'seem/seam' to be 'straight' ... sorta like your sexual preference
vs
i KICK like instrumental and ninth shit in his underwear
you'd only bring a beat-in (beating) if the real 9thWonder appeared,
v/ jay
both verse wher meh
"Thank God for Everything, Even this L"
Jay - your opener did matter
i like the frozen gun line
the name play was ok
but 9th had name play all in his verse
apposed to ur 1 line plus his opener was an attempted punch
VOTE:9TH
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Peeped your wack verses, need to 'iron' out kinks in your sentence
Cause your rhymes only 'seem/seam' to be 'straight' ... sorta like your sexual preference
Best Punch from your verse^
Black mamba like Kobe, beef is what i'm after ... not interested in play
But you're too easy, 'super knockout' ... like playing first level and beating 'Gabby Jay'
LMFAO. yo, this is funny. i used to have that game.
VS
so i wonder why you come at me softer then plush pillows,
your bitch i bust into, now drake aint the only one with trust issues,
Best Punch in your verse ^
but here ill go head put this in a way you will understand,
even with 'your arm above my head' you still won't have the 'upper hand'
Played as fuck ^
Overall Vote - 9th wonder, Jay had a nicely structure verse but he wasnt throwing any REAL hitters mostly played concepts, and no REAL execution. 9th had simple jabs but he scored and landed enough to get my vote.
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