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    1000 Words

    Title is simple...this track has 1000 Words in it, lol...went off the old saying "A picture's worth 1000 words". Had this recorded a long time ago and re-recorded it for quality purposes..I'm gonna post up both the video and lyrics (to prove it's 1000 words, lol. If you're actually gonna check it out I typed this up in Microsoft Word 2007) Check it out and get back at me

    PS- If you wanna see the picture I used it's on the old version of 1000 Words that'll probably pop up on the right hand side if you view the video on youtube, not just here on the site

    Also, this goes over the "Trippin" instrumental by Zion I

    [youtube]cfJcFfbuvik[/youtube]

    Lyrics:

    They say every picture’s worth 1000 words, man...
    No matter what every one of them has a story behind it
    And every feeling that it brings leads to another as your eyes soak in the colors…
    And as cliché as it is I’m putting it to the test
    So here I go...
    1000 words.. Nothin’ more.. Nothin less..


    Uh…He fades into the dark
    Lookin out at something brighter, anxious for a start
    Holdin onto to everything, he’s prayin in his heart
    That he can catch the break that could be makin him a star
    Tired of the games that have him playin different cards
    He’d rather play on radios, get racin up the charts!
    Til he becomes the standard like he’s raisin’ up the bars
    Call him Ace the Prophet, he’s a savior to the Gods!
    He sees it all flash right back into his teens
    An authentic Melo jersey, saggin baggy jeans
    With them Birdman Lugz, just imagining the cream
    And his reactions to the green while he’s cashin’ in his dream
    Never lookin past it but he keeps it on the low
    It’s his little secret, ain’t no reason they should know
    Cuz he writes it for himself and he doesn’t wanna share it
    It’s personal as hell and he feels he’d get embarrassed--
    But still he goes on til he feels the flow’s gone
    A young’n with ambition, man, the feeling’s so strong!
    Writin down the shit he’s been concealing so long
    Reachin’ for the sky til the ceiling’s all gone!
    Now flash forward, present day, scratchin at the surface
    Of his diamond in the rough, it’s too passionate and perfect
    To be passin’ up, you can see it glarin’ in his eyes
    With the red carpet rollin’ anywhere that he arrives
    Where the girls’ lookin’ flashy as they try to drag him in
    He keeps a heavy heart so he don’t even crack a grin
    He’s just pressin’ forward, ain’t no need for backin’ in
    Forgettin every flake, see if they’ll see his ass again
    They’re all he’s been accustomed to, friends, he only trusts a few
    Try to ask him what to do, he ain’t got a fuckin clue
    …And he just doesn’t care
    He ain’t about to search for it if there ain’t nothin’ there--
    He sees it all is faded now that everyone’s impaired
    He finally can focus so he’s never unaware, man!
    Uh, and so he’s changing up his views
    Startin to make sense of all the days he was confused
    Gathering the wisdom and ways it wasn’t used
    Makin’ different moves, ain’t no way he’s gonna lose!
    And maybe he’s a fool, but still he’s gotta try
    Honesty is critical when all of it’s a lie
    Statements that he’s livin through, all up in the sky
    Swearin it’s the answer but he’s gotta wonder why, man
    Why?

    Gotta figure out where everything stems from, man…

    Take it back a couple years, putting back a couple beers
    Lookin at his baby girl pushin’ back another tear
    Uh…She’s wonderin’ why there’s nothin’ clear
    Starin’ at reflections in the shadow of another’s mirror
    Wondering if love is really what she should be living for
    He’s the only one she’s ever had this kind of feeling for--
    But really though, every single bit of this has got her actin silly so
    She’s behind his back with shit, like “Will he know
    That every single night that I’m sleepin with this knife?
    The blade is creepin’ closer to the reason for my life
    And pain is just a slit away, watch it all come gushin’ out
    Let me show him I’m for real, then he’ll shut his fuckin mouth!
    Yeah! That’ll show him his mistakes
    Put the blade to my skin, how much longer can it take?
    I’ll never learn, let it burn! Let this shit incinerate!
    It all was just too perfect though, how’d I let it get away?”
    Damn…and maybe it’s too painful
    To understand everything she’s seein’ from her angle
    So he lets her know that he’s there to consolidate
    He’s the reason for it all but he can take it all away
    But she was havin’ none of it, swore she’d never love again
    And tried to commit suicide right in front of him
    Wait, what? Come again? He stood still
    Understanding powers of words could kill
    Wasn’t quite sure if that’s how he should feel
    But illusions of confusion felt unusually real
    Never woulda guessed he could apply this kinda stress
    To someone who was lookin for a life that’s to be blessed
    And if she couldn’t find it that’s a life that’s put to rest
    Almost a decision she was dying to regret
    Lookin’ to the sky for someone higher to perfect
    Everything and say she’s worth every diamond on her neck
    Cuz he couldn’t do it though he tried to protect
    This fragile girl from the truth and it’s why she’s a wreck
    So she covered up her face to hide the hatred in her eyes
    As she tried to suffocate herself but thankfully survived
    Maybe that’s the day that his angel realized
    That it should do all it can to be keepin’ him alive
    And bless him with a gift that makes it easier to write
    The fire of emotion, you can see it in eyes!
    You can hear it in his voice, even feel it in his touch
    Puts his heart on the track when being real isn’t enough
    And when he’s feelin’ lonely he gets thinkin’ of the moment
    How he overcame the pain and how the fuckin blade’s an omen
    Of everything he’s ever fought, everyone he said can rot
    Middle fingers up to anyone who said he better not!
    Now every head’ll rock to every word he said he’s got
    One fuckin thousand of ‘em kickin’ in to set it off
    Yeah…But he’ll lay to rest with these
    He’s not the best there’s ever been, he’s the best there’ll ever be

    He’s the Prophet!


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    Re: 1000 Words

    loved the concept, so deep, lyrics were on point, delivery is so unique, quality is perfect, you actually remind me of young Em, one of the best tracks I've heard in a while, real talk, great listen man, I'd love to collab sometime, it'd be an honor working with a rapper of your caliber

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    Re: 1000 Words

    solid presentation...

    good work



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    Re: 1000 Words

    nice delivery man, wish i had vocal clarity like you. . but its not one of my gifts lol. . Alot of quotable lines in there, so im not even going to attempt to list them, just know the lyrics were nice... i like the beat, its just rides.. nice and simple, and the lyrics and flow just move along it really well. .

    really felt this part. .

    And maybe he’s a fool, but still he’s gotta try
    Honesty is critical when all of it’s a lie
    Statements that he’s livin through, all up in the sky
    Swearin it’s the answer but he’s gotta wonder why, man
    Why?
    fished up just really well. . this was a good drop man. And thanks for posting the lyrics. I like having the option to read along and let the track do the rest of the work. Sick shit homie

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    Re: 1000 Words

    Dope beat, i love it..
    flow and delivery go hand in hand
    nice smooth transitions, and the lyrics
    kick up a couple of different images,
    so you did ya part on conveying the concept
    of a pictures worth a thousand words,
    overall its a real nicely structured and well
    delivered track, im feeling it
    keep spitting.

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    Shit is dope man! Solid shit. Your flow was mostly on point, and your lyrics were well delivered.
    The only thing i dont like is the intro. Idk, something about it. Maybe if you dont introduce the song as being a story, and the word count. But just instead, Bringing the song out SWINGING with a "Gettin ready" intro, u feel me?
    but then again, the title is attractive and is deff for the better (y) lol.
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    Re: 1000 Words

    heard this earlier. anyways, you know, i heard it, and i really liked it. off the top i liked it. you have this atmosphere. its a feeling of really good vibes. you sound very uplifting. you sound like you're having a good time rhyming. and of course. of course your flow was perfect. dope.

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    Re: 1000 Words

    First off let me say this

    The fact you did a 1000 word track is dope!

    Beginning when your talking grabed me in, made me want to listen.

    Flow is on point throughout the track which always is a plus man, overall I'm trying to find something to point out and I can't, so I'll just go ahead in say this is a dope song... Specially if I listened the whole way through, echo at end hurt my ears though lol, jk

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    Re: 1000 Words

    Yo, I appreciate all the good looks, everyone.

    Phiend, I feel you on the intro. People have told me that before. I felt it was more necessary though to kinda set the tone and let people know what I was going for, ya know? Plus I needed extra words to fill the complete 1000, lol

    And VS, I appreciate that you remember the old one, bro! Didn't think anyone would, lol.

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    Re: 1000 Words

    really ncie quality, flow was good, i think you hold your syllables at the end of the bar too often, you should mix that up a bit more (staaaarrrrt, hearrttttt) iuno if thats just your accent but it seemed you stretched it due to the beat, it got a bit repetitive. but other than that little thing this was a dope track. was that really 1000 words? lol

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    Re: 1000 Words

    nice concept, sick flow and cool beat.. keep it up

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    Re: 1000 Words

    clear vocals, nice execution.

    dude, you remind me of lupe fiasco back from the "food n liqour" days. good stuff man.

    btw, i kinda felt compelled to count if it was a 1000 words or not...counted the first 2 n said fuck it lol

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    Re: 1000 Words

    Man, glad I'm gettin comparisons to young Em and F&L Lupe, lol...I appreciate it. And trust me, it's a full 1000 Words, haha. I posted the lyrics up so if you wanted to copy and paste them they're there, lol. Once again I appreciate the good looks!!

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    Re: 1000 Words

    you have a strong delivery and its ill as fuck!wat program do u use? ur vocals sound dope..plus instrumental is ill but cmon zion beats r the shit

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    Re: 1000 Words

    This was tight man. I enjoyed the beat a lot, I thought your flow and delivery was sick. Nice lyrics too, digging a lot of the content.

    Solid shit man, this is a nice concept.

    Keep it up.



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