this was pretty dope, like I told you on FB... lyricism is real nice in here... keep it up Clive...
this was pretty dope, like I told you on FB... lyricism is real nice in here... keep it up Clive...
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Dude, you fucking WENT IN on this track man. Only thing I wish is that your quality was a little better, so I could understand your words a little clearer. I can understand everything, but obviously a song is more enjoyable when it's nice and clear. I would work on the mixing a bit. Your wordplay here is way above par for sure. You fucking killed it man. I'm a fan. Your delivery and flow were solid as fuck, and I think the only flaw with this is the mixing. Track of the Week for me. Nice drop dude!
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dope shit Clive..keep doin' it homie..
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This is pretty dope man, definitely on that battle type vibe. I like the video too, adds to the whole feel of the song with the grimey black and white thing. You definitely got flow, like some lyrical battle kinda mic prescence which is dope. Lyrically this is extremely dope, I would bump this kinda shit and that says a lot because I'm generally picky with my hip-hop haha. Beat kind of reminds me of dude JNyce. I'm feeling this man, all i got to say hahah.
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Good start. Your video was the same the whole time, think changes but not too much where its overwhelming. MAIN thing. No high end. Yes pop screen will help with the muffle. Now, evryone else who said this dident add much as far as a solution so here u go. Listen careful. Boost your vocal track in the high end by that ill get specific. 6 k and up is the Presence clarity area, One problum. You cant boost ANY frequency without takeing away from something else. SO boost around 6 k and up but only 3 db or less, Watch fur phaze shifts. They make stuff disapear when listened to in mono.
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