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Rican's bitch made, 5th grade shots never connect, we'll never be alike
Fake ass nerd ... online gamplay was his last 'source' of a 'counterstrike'
Not a 'staple' or a 'ruler' on RB, no elevation from this fairy
Even when trying to push the "envelope" ... Rican's status will always be "stationary"
Peeped holes in your verse deisgns, no chance to 'block' the signs
So when i say "RT" is "offensive" ... it's cause he's always rushing lines
This faggot's on so much dick, like he got slipped rohypnol
So don't count on votes when Rican says he'll RTF and hit poll
Rub 'salt' in the wounds, 'pepper' spray my words to prove i'm the better man
Tasting my 'flavor' is the closest this 'herb' will ever be to a seasoned verteran
I need a small ext. still at work have no time to post right now
Its true what they say bout pussy. fuck around & leave his spinal done,
cuz if this kat has 9 lives, he's about to meet his first & final one.
Never took care of beef always called ya momma, flatline this guy so ur a nada,
your verse was blah blah, I'll leave this dummy hanging by a string like a piņata.
Orlando is known for its tourist all the faggots that race for enjoyment,
So if bitches are asking if wonder works, thats because its your place of employment
Your not into sports so im folding lames, after a shutout you'll be a broken name,
there's no time for 9th inning, cuz im like rivera on the mound known for closein games.
I always get laid cuz my cock huge so she swallow like your bitch is,
so when it comes to pussy, bitches wonder ... where the fuck the rest of ur dick is.
Expo:
http://www.wonderworksonline.com/
its an attraction place here in orlando ^
I'm at work too will get links up when I get home
Imma have to go with 9th
1) his punches hit harder
2) his closer was better ( to me that last line should hit hard that the last thing the people read give them sumthing to remember) R! closer was corny and lacked originality
3) Originality (9th was a little more original)
VOTE: 9TH
Upp
Rican's bitch made, 5th grade shots never connect, we'll never be alike
Fake ass nerd ... online gamplay was his last 'source' of a 'counterstrike'
ok
Not a 'staple' or a 'ruler' on RB, no elevation from this fairy
Even when trying to push the "envelope" ... Rican's status will always be "stationary"
iight
Peeped holes in your verse deisgns, no chance to 'block' the signs
So when i say "RT" is "offensive" ... it's cause he's always rushing lines
iight
This faggot's on so much dick, like he got slipped rohypnol
So don't count on votes when Rican says he'll RTF and hit poll
nah
Rub 'salt' in the wounds, 'pepper' spray my words to prove i'm the better man
Tasting my 'flavor' is the closest this 'herb' will ever be to a seasoned verteran
nice
v.
Its true what they say bout pussy. fuck around & leave his spinal done,
cuz if this kat has 9 lives, he's about to meet his first & final one.
nice opener
Never took care of beef always called ya momma, flatline this guy so ur a nada,
your verse was blah blah, I'll leave this dummy hanging by a string like a piņata.
meh
Orlando is known for its tourist all the faggots that race for enjoyment,
So if bitches are asking if wonder works, thats because its your place of employment
ok
Your not into sports so im folding lames, after a shutout you'll be a broken name,
there's no time for 9th inning, cuz im like rivera on the mound known for closein games.
idnt like this
I always get laid cuz my cock huge so she swallow like your bitch is,
so when it comes to pussy, bitches wonder ... where the fuck the rest of ur dick is.
iight at best, could of had better wording or something
v/ 9th
you cant be a newbie to text i can see that, and that might be why rican came a little mellow i guess.
"Thank God for Everything, Even this L"
uppp
9th
Rican's bitch made, 5th grade shots never connect, we'll never be alike
Fake ass nerd ... online gamplay was his last 'source' of a 'counterstrike'
cool punch didnt need to start finisher with "fake ass nerd though" took a little sting away from it
Not a 'staple' or a 'ruler' on RB, no elevation from this fairy
Even when trying to push the "envelope" ... Rican's status will always be "stationary"
nice concept on the setup good on the relevant finisher liked how u flipped it
Peeped holes in your verse deisgns, no chance to 'block' the signs
So when i say "RT" is "offensive" ... it's cause he's always rushing lines
see a similiiar RT np before but not bad
This faggot's on so much dick, like he got slipped rohypnol
So don't count on votes when Rican says he'll RTF and hit poll
not feeling this rhyme scheme was also off too me
Rub 'salt' in the wounds, 'pepper' spray my words to prove i'm the better man
Tasting my 'flavor' is the closest this 'herb' will ever be to a seasoned verteran
again nice setup relevant finisher cool concept
Rican
Its true what they say bout pussy. fuck around & leave his spinal done,
cuz if this kat has 9 lives, he's about to meet his first & final one.
nice cool concept nice flip off setup and direct punch
Never took care of beef always called ya momma, flatline this guy so ur a nada,
your verse was blah blah, I'll leave this dummy hanging by a string like a piņata.
nah setup was too wordy wasnt feeling the metaphore on the finisher
Orlando is known for its tourist all the faggots that race for enjoyment,
So if bitches are asking if wonder works, thats because its your place of employment
ok lol good personal good concept
Your not into sports so im folding lames, after a shutout you'll be a broken name,
there's no time for 9th inning, cuz im like rivera on the mound known for closein games.
finisher a little statementish concept was there but couldve wordred this better
I always get laid cuz my cock huge so she swallow like your bitch is,
so when it comes to pussy, bitches wonder ... where the fuck the rest of ur dick is.
lol
Well ok battle but Rican had some misses had a couple concepts which made me laugh but other then that wording hurt a bit in this one. 9th overall just had better executed punches and better developed concepts.
V/ 9th Wonder
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Not a 'staple' or a 'ruler' on RB, no elevation from this fairy
Even when trying to push the "envelope" ... Rican's status will always be "stationary"
Rub 'salt' in the wounds, 'pepper' spray my words to prove i'm the better man
Tasting my 'flavor' is the closest this 'herb' will ever be to a seasoned verteran
vs
Its true what they say bout pussy. fuck around & leave his spinal done,
cuz if this kat has 9 lives, he's about to meet his first & final one.
Orlando is known for its tourist all the faggots that race for enjoyment,
So if bitches are asking if wonder works, thats because its your place of employment
I always get laid cuz my cock huge so she swallow like your bitch is,
so when it comes to pussy, bitches wonder ... where the fuck the rest of ur dick is.
v /rican. i thought his hits were lil better...
Not a 'staple' or a 'ruler' on RB, no elevation from this fairy
Even when trying to push the "envelope" ... Rican's status will always be "stationary"
Rub 'salt' in the wounds, 'pepper' spray my words to prove i'm the better man
Tasting my 'flavor' is the closest this 'herb' will ever be to a seasoned verteran
vs
nothing
v/ 9th wonder took this ez, rican had no impact,played concepts and wording was shit. keep it up 9th
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