[sc]http://soundcloud.com/chi-money/heaven-knows[/sc]
[sc]http://soundcloud.com/chi-money/heaven-knows[/sc]
nice song, I would trim the intro, a bit long. Good flow, but it the heaven knows part is a bit annoying.
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Good lookin out Monster..
Intro is a bit long but it sets the mood so that's nothing major. The beat is pretty good, some newschool but real hiphop type shit, not the radio BS. You got a dope way of flowing, and lyrically your representing and bringing it. You kind of remind me of Danchise a bit from this board. I feel the emotion in this man, good track! Keep doing ya thing man.
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Damn.. you killed this fam. Flow was on point the whole way through, the beat was nice as hell IMO and the lyrics and mic presence were some of the best I've seen from you. This might be my favorite track from you so far props bro
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Good lookin out guys, and I returned the feed on your link the other day Shadowless..
Damn you sound like Machine Gun Kelly. This is dope. Digging the super mellow beat. The sample is hot. Your flow and emotion on this is top notch. Quality was madd crisp. I could bump this on the regular man. Dope shit. No complaints. Return the favor http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...590/index.html
Beat is dope. I'd mess with the EQ on your vocals a little bit on the quality tip and lower the DB's. Verses were on point. I think you could do a lil bit more with the chorus then just let the vocal sample. Maybe put some adlibs in it. Dope beat I'm def fucking with this. I'm diggin the sample...sumthn I'd bump on a chill day in the whip while I light a L.
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not a fan of your name change lol anyway;
the hook/intro sounds chilled, nice vibe to it. mellow beat delivery is quite good, liking the accent and you have very crisp quality. flow seems alright, although i think a more interesting mic would've benefited this type of track a bit more however still a nice drop.
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Beats ill....dig the sample....your delivery's fuckin dope on this....flow's ill...you killed this shit bro. Nothin much to say, haha. I'd bump this as well.
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I would agree about trimming the intro.
You can instantly tell that you were heavily influenced by Pac and WC haha.
Beat is crazy nice, and your flow is raw as shit.
Lyrics are deff up there, and im really feeling this song (y)
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Preciate all the feedback, I'll be returning the feed tonight..
Aigh, finally got to everyone's links aha..
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