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no feed its all good tho
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alright, you want some good feed. You have one long ominous tone, now thats fine for a specific artist but if youre trying to appeal to the masses this isnt enough, you have to at least add in a distinct theme or melody as they say, a lead, a riff, whatever for people to remember. It doesnt have to be intricate but it has to be something. It sounds like an episode of some detective show and theyre walking through a sewer looking for the bad guy, doesnt really have a musical tone to it yet. maybe you could add a more prevalent bass line too, something that stands out. You cant say this is good or bad yet, if you think its done its because you already have the sound of the artist in your mind, which a whole beat could be a fucking snare hit, if that artist rocked it well. so if you put a vocal sample on it to let people know how its supposed to sound or why its so simple it would help but to just hear this sounds like your at the very beginning.
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thanks bro
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i aint got a clue why your shit is getting slept on (maybe try commenting on other ppls stuff abit then they pro will return the favor)
intro was good but i thought it too long to get into the beat!
drums were nice man liked the sub kick before and after the snare!
with the club/dance intro and the hiphop/industrial drums there needs to be abit of variation in the melodies just something faint just to give it some more body..
but still very nicely put together
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thx bro
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the beat has a R&B feel to it... like you could autotune your way through it... if you take that tag out it might be more enjoyable.. i think someone could rap over this aswell.. i like the creativity of the beat ... it didnt seem that repetitive to me... keep doing you
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