16 lines 2 verse after check
here's my check
DizZy 45
Defy-Gravity
16 lines 2 verse after check
here's my check
i'm easily winning this, its a shame, no way he can harm me/
your flow needs change and tumbled more then clothes that spent all day in the laundry/
change your name dog, just be yourself it builts character B/
A you'll die, cause your verses are too plane to be taken seriouly and get buried at C/
i wanted to just shoot off a few, i'm hot, you know what blue balls can do/
and when i bust you, i hit ever shot center mass, and up his lungs he a cough and puke/
i rise above most which is why my name is so rare/
and just because you had sex during a yeast infection doesnt mean your making dough here queer/
why make friend with him, i aim to kill, mangle your corpse and/
under different circums, i usually put the nife to you dickheads like forskin/
i didn't try hard for this battle, just keyed a few lines/
but still my wraps open up and eat his ass alive like moon pies/
strange name noob, i guess you shot one and lost conscieness too/
I'm a harm dude, but i heard his house has more naked men in tiles then gyms and saunas do/
the boy was easy, make me your avatar, cause you want to be me/
i'm your biggest star but i dont just spit Fi for ty ve/
here we go again turnin battles to tragedy//
time to show you the definition of gravity//
actually i can just run up in ya faculty//
bury you like an apple seed your just another casualty//
your lines are garbage but you probably think there the hardest//
success was ya target but you missed that by alot bitch//
we pass ya girl back and forth like a game tennis//
bust in her mouth she mixes it around like a chemist//
after that she follows it off with a swallow//
you aint got no gravity like a moon trip on the apolo//
a thousands volts with one line i can definitely shock ya//
got so many one twos im like a best in the league boxer//
save ya breath and take a step back you get that//
if you dont leave you black and blue like a mets hat//
im shitin on you boy and i aint takin ex lax//
they pop in ya cd and hit the button for the next track//
nice shit my dude
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Defy Gravity
i'm easily winning this, its a shame, no way he can harm me/
your flow needs change and tumbled more then clothes that spent all day in the laundry/
ok on the concept and metaphore reference just felt couldve worded this finisher better
change your name dog, just be yourself it builts character B/
A you'll die, cause your verses are too plane to be taken seriouly and get buried at C/
not feeling this abc reference c/sea wordplay too basic
i wanted to just shoot off a few, i'm hot, you know what blue balls can do/
and when i bust you, i hit ever shot center mass, and up his lungs he a cough and puke/
wording again hurt this finisher
i rise above most which is why my name is so rare/
and just because you had sex during a yeast infection doesnt mean your making dough here queer/
this made me lol a bit concept a little played but funny
why make friend with him, i aim to kill, mangle your corpse and/
under different circums, i usually put the nife to you dickheads like forskin/
wording again man
i didn't try hard for this battle, just keyed a few lines/
but still my wraps open up and eat his ass alive like moon pies/
ok this concept with the moonpies didnt get at all
strange name noob, i guess you shot one and lost conscieness too/
I'm a harm dude, but i heard his house has more naked men in tiles then gyms and saunas do/
tiles???? do u mean towels here???
the boy was easy, make me your avatar, cause you want to be me/
i'm your biggest star but i dont just spit Fi for ty ve/
no
Dizzy 45
here we go again turnin battles to tragedy//
time to show you the definition of gravity//
not a punch statement here
actually i can just run up in ya faculty//
bury you like an apple seed your just another casualty//
good attempt on punch just gotta hit harder here
your lines are garbage but you probably think there the hardest//
success was ya target but you missed that by alot bitch//
ok better direct
we pass ya girl back and forth like a game tennis//
bust in her mouth she mixes it around like a chemist//
lmao
after that she follows it off with a swallow//
you aint got no gravity like a moon trip on the apolo//
nah concepts werent relevant here
a thousands volts with one line i can definitely shock ya//
got so many one twos im like a best in the league boxer//
finisher again a statement
save ya breath and take a step back you get that//
if you dont leave you black and blue like a mets hat//
ok not bad
im shitin on you boy and i aint takin ex lax//
they pop in ya cd and hit the button for the next track//
nah
Well many weaknesses in this battle no hate to both but Defy many wording issues for you and looks like u were trying to hard when it came to the wordplay references. Dizzy too many statement punches and trouble making some of ur punches have that sting affect. When it comes to it i gotta give it to the person who tried to form punches.
V/Dizzy attempted punches that had a slight landing but enough to take the win agaisnt poor wording no hate.
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i rise above most which is why my name is so rare/
and just because you had sex during a yeast infection doesnt mean your making dough here queer/
vs
we pass ya girl back and forth like a game tennis//
bust in her mouth she mixes it around like a chemist//
save ya breath and take a step back you get that//
if you dont leave you black and blue like a mets hat//
Overall Vote - Dizzy 45, simply A VERY WEAK BATTLE. both sides need work with getting creative, and polishing there lines i cant believe i sat here n read this sorry battle. smh dizzy getting better from the last battle i read from him so yeah, dizzy had lesser misses so he gets my vote.
This battle was too long in the first place.... Anyways my vote goes to Dizzy 45 even though both had misses and wording problems. Dizzy's verse flowed smoothly and most of his lines really made me laugh...... No hate Defy, u got some cool concepts but poor wording killed it. Keep elevating.
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we all know i'll beat you guys. so I applaud your misguided hate votes, i'm not surprised nor upset.
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i rise above most which is why my name is so rare/
and just because you had sex during a yeast infection doesnt mean your making dough here queer/
vs
we pass ya girl back and forth like a game tennis//
bust in her mouth she mixes it around like a chemist//
save ya breath and take a step back you get that//
if you dont leave you black and blue like a mets hat//
okok very weak battle n' lines coming from both, both had misses and attempts, but i'll hand the win to dizzy cuz he had less misses, n more attempts, no hate bro.
v/diz
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