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9thwonder
Malcolm Text
Malcolm Text vs. 9thwonder
5 bars | 10 lines
one hour time limit
House rules
check in before you drop [As Soon As Possible]
good luck:doofy:
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EZ....
this nothings a joke, on rb you better come with reason
ill cut his throat, and i'm not talking about tonsil treatment
u win? dont make me laugh, u like a small joint cuz im smokin you fast
or u like the history of comedy because i'm putting this joke in the past
ill make your shitty lines disappear, subtract a magician
...all i got to do is
take a bar graph on skill and half your writtens would be missin
9's flashin, glocks blastin, i'll off this faggot and leave em' in anguish
only time 9 talks bout raisin' arms is when hes learning body language
only bars you've dropped so far is soap, if i was gay u'd be my bitch
i told him 'put your money where your mouth is' and he put a dollar by my dick
Fuck 9th, call me Stevie to 'feel' your stale rhetoric
Cause Malcs rhymes only elevate when written down as brail lettering
Lie low, before you die slow, text got no punch like the Venus De Milo
Peep the punches I throw, not these bitch made 'blanks' like you practicing 'Tae Bo'
Who is Malcolm Text? where to begin me versus you,
Text Malcolm: Bondage, Fetish, Toys ... Does reading your ad count as a 'personal'?
Questionable behaviour, when the flavor of a rager is what you savor
Voters run scared when Text pleads I'll return the favor!
I bellittle, Malcolm Little, 9th 'won', der is no second fiddle
Check my name, one time 'Malcolm' won't get what's in the 'middle'
u win? dont make me laugh, u like a small joint cuz im smokin you fast
or u like the history of comedy because i'm putting this joke in the past
ill make your shitty lines disappear, subtract a magician
...all i got to do is
take a bar graph on skill and half your writtens would be missin
9's flashin, glocks blastin, i'll off this faggot and leave em' in anguish
only time 9 talks bout raisin' arms is when hes learning body language
vs.
Questionable behaviour, when the flavor of a rager is what you savor
Voters run scared when Text pleads I'll return the favor!
9thwonders piece seemed rushed. work on throwing harder punches homie. also make sure ur lines rhyme too. Malcolm came much harder in this one. no hate, keep elevatin n battling.
v - malcolm
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Vote malcomi love the rhytmic and verses, even though 9th seemed too be not bad,
V/Malcolm
i got malc edging this with more dirct bars, both had hella wording issues but mt still had enough to get the W here.
V.Malc..overall better verse,punches were stronger..i like 9ths line about venus de milo and the closer was dope
decently close. 9th had good set ups and all but his punches werent connecting that well. Mal had some alright lines in there. i think mal's cleverness helped him edge this out tbh. mehh battle overall.
vote: Malcolm
juss feed not hittin the poll..
my vote goes to malcolm he had the stronger punches in this one that easily stood out more. 9th had some good lines though was a decent battle props to both.
poll fixed n closed..
I swear ur gona make me smack the shit outa somebody u keep freeposting
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