Composure (0-1) vs. Kontext (0-1) kontext wins

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 5

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 5 links to the battles you voted on in the Voting Links Thread.

Negative 1 vote per missing link in next person's battle, INCLUDING THE LOSER

[Token]

Kontext is deducted 4 votes for missing 4 links last week

[Kontext]

booo...My pc shutdown...N i did vote on like 2 batts tho...fuck...anyways innn

[Composure]

Chess, chess, y'all!

(And you don't stop.)

[Kontext]

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck

[Composure]

The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.

[Joe Boston]

Kontext

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
didnt really like setup but finisher was cool kudos on the personal attempt

this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
nah wasnt feeling the concept on this finisher

& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
ok lol

i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
the wordplay attempt was cool but finisher was kinda forced too me due to the wording here

cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck
ok very cool nameplay reference and liking the concept and also punch was direct

Composure


The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
ehh i see what concept u were on here but wasnt really feeling this finisher

This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
lol

Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
nice like the direct punch here

This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
lol

When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.
ok nice nameplay with the concept

V/composure

Just thought his punches came a little more cleaner. kontext had some ok punches but some wording hurt him as well as some misses.

[ArchDevil]

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
^ ehh

this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
^ too corny lol

& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
^ okish

i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
^ seen a somewhat similar concept before, but okish flip

cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck
^ cool, havent seen a lot of battles from composure but this seems ok for a nameplay


vs.


The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
^ ehhh

This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
^ ok

Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
^ ehhh

This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
^ okish

When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.
^ pretty basic nameplay, seen it on all "Kon" people


I have no idea who to vote for, composure tried to be witty/funny in every line, didnt really work in my eyes, had some misses in there...kontext had misses aswell but in the end i think the comcast bar won it in my eyes, was the only bar in this battle worth quotin...comp wasnt bad, just wasnt feelin all his attempts...close call but
vote - kontext

[#PrimeTime]

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
ehh

this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
ok

& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
nice wording

i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
ok

cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck
good closer

vs.

The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
nah

This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
weak

Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
better

This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
decent

When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.
ehh

both had misses, both need better wording. kontext needs better wording, n composure was all over the place. i dunno who to vote for.

*Flips Coin* = v Kontext for better attempts.

v - kontext

[Kontext]

hey toke can u take the waiting on com off..its stunting votes

[Slowhands]

kontext

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
- ok ish
this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
- nah
& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
- meh
i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
- ok but rhyme was forced
cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck
- meh could of been better

overall - shake the rust lol, you had some weirdly worded lines that took away from the ohhh effect, keep trying different possibilities until you feel comfortable with it. up


composure

The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
- lol decent
This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
- lol corny funny
Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
- meh
This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
- nah
When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.
- ok ish

overall - your opener was lotb, after that you started falling up, try to keep up with consistency, the second half of your verse is what will make up voter minds imo.



vote - this is a toss up, really goes to reader preference. i give this to kontext for being consistent. if composure would have keep the pace with his first 2 lines he would have won by far imo. lotb is his opener as well. up

[Slowhands]

kontext

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
- ok ish
this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
- nah
& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
- meh
i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
- ok but rhyme was forced
cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck
- meh could of been better

overall - shake the rust lol, you had some weirdly worded lines that took away from the ohhh effect, keep trying different possibilities until you feel comfortable with it. up


composure

The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
- lol decent
This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
- lol corny funny
Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
- meh
This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
- nah
When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.
- ok ish

overall - your opener was lotb, after that you started falling up, try to keep up with consistency, the second half of your verse is what will make up voter minds imo.



vote - this is a toss up, really goes to reader preference. i give this to kontext for being consistent. if composure would have keep the pace with his first 2 lines he would have won by far imo. lotb is his opener as well. up

[C.Wrighter]

& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat

V.

This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin


V/ kontext .. Had better overall verse.

- done from cell, so I couldn't do bar by bar.

[Essen]

Kontext

first off nigga fuck you, on RB acting ill but we know he's wack
so sure you'll see Competition to bring longbars & forced multies back
^^Not bad, wordplay grammatically works both ways, well done on that. I like the com-petition part of it, but it would help if he's an old school head who had those styles. This was still solid though
this hoes on crack, thinking he fucking wit' Kon, but I pimp Bro
so that wasn't the glass dick this time..more like penis in the window
^^I didn't feel it, I've never seen this concept before, but I just didn't like the concept overall.
& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
^^Swag, decent flex here, not an original concept but a decent flip with a nameplay and wording was on
i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel
^^Ehh a good concept, but a bit forced.
cus' kid your a bad actor N a worse rapper, how you claim you cut the check
when anytime I see something that Comcast...
it really just makes me wanna tie cable around his fucking neck
^^Going to three bar here, this was ok, concept was pretty cool but too stretched so it softened up a bit. But I like the idea.


Composure

The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...
^^Is this a personal? I mean, the misdirection was cool, props for that. Otherwise, it's really just calling him funny and stupid for hypothetically dressing like poison ivy. I'm probably missing something though, but I like the misdirection.
This is skydivin'. When you pull the chord, I'll make sure the bungee snaps
Kon gets bullied by 3rd grade kids who punk his ass and won't give his cubby back.
^^Eh, going from sky-diving to bullied by third grade kids? It's a pretty quick transition, the concept could have flowed a bit better. I didn't like this too much
Mere mortals know fear. As a god, I'm not sure what it is you might be feeling
I'll connect this uppercut with no big deal, 'cept for the spikes in the ceiling
^^I like the misdirection, not a bad flip on an old concept. I just don't see it adding too much to the punch, the misdirection kind of happens after the punch which takes away from it a bit.
This aint a school yard fight, how the hell you gonna win? I'm just wonderin'
Kon's album cover had: a head tilt, a cheesy grin, and fingers locked under his chin
^^I don't really get it man, sorry. Is it a personal? Other than that, best case scenario you're saying his hypothetical album color looks lame cause of something relevant to school.
When dude raps, it's straight wack. It's no match for whatever I've done
And beyond that, sure you can hear Kon tracked, but he'll never sign one.
^^This wasn't bad, decent misdirection, only using half of his name and wordplay was a little forced, but a decent jab.


Overall, I'm giving this to Kontext, his misses weren't as bad but this was close. Props to both, pz

[ALIEN]

& his broad is a nympho, so dropping played lines wont make you G.O.A.T
trust, anything 'Taken out of Kontext' was just used to glaze her throat
i'll stomp Comp, cus' lames like you is why this league came to spoil
trample his face & after I Wachovia, I'm kinda Banking on your Withdrawel

vs

The league's been itching for this battle, but think you're more of a comic, Kon.
I'm not sure, but you dressin' like Poison Ivy is probably what brought it on...

Kon had one of the nicer verses I've read this week, props man. I think Composure started off well with the opener and then kinda trailed off. Not a bad verse, but just outmatched punch for punch and with wording as well. That Wachovia line was line of the battle/week for me so far.

Vote - Kontext