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beat is cool...
flow is decent.. sometimes u hold onto syllables to keep on beat.
emotion is cool for horrocore.
lyrics are on point..
delivery and presence is good..
decent track brotha.
oh and yo the hook was good, i liked it.
7.5/10
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Peeped the track man, Yeah agree with most of the other posters flows laid back, and the track is laid out good, hook is a good move.
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Okay bumping it now. Beat is chill, but I'm not feeling the kicks used. I think this would've hit home if bass was included around the kicks other then that its dope...def a eminem type vibe. 1st verse was pretty decent. Delivery seemed a little force at certain parts. Chorus is cool, but I would add some adlibs. 2nd Verse is VERY DOPE! I think you came much stronger on the 2nd and 3rd verse. Good track. Where will your album be posted at (datpiff?soundcloud?etc) I want d/l and check it out.
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I wasnt a huge fan of the chorus, not bad but it was just okay to me, the verses were dope though, delivery and flow was really on point, lyrics were solid, beat was cool..
Emotion seemed forced at some parts, but for the most part it wasnt, i liked the flow, the hook was dope seemed like something was missing tho, but i like the lyrics wordplay rhyme schemes excetra definitely there, beat is raw af, i give like an 8 out of 10
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I kind of already dropped feedback on this when I reviewed your album but now I'm listening to it again I can appreciate it even more. This is track is ill man, I can tell you really put your all into it. The beat is pretty sparse so it allows your flow/delivery stand out more than over tracks on the album. The lyrics are on the point and the concept is dope. I'm still feelin it a lot.
8.5/10
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Wats good razor! Good to see u joined start dropping traks
To all others thx for feed will rtf whenever I get power back at home
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Upping this
Just got power back last night so all links will be hit by the end of weekend
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1st verse was dope... delivery/flow/lyric on point
hook was really dope, i dug the sound
2nd verse was cool, lyrics were cool on this verse delivery nd flow still on point.. thought lyrics in 1st verse were a bit better, but not a bad thing
3rd verse - u went in.. the emotion was perfect - my fav verse outta all of em
overall this was a hott track. u did well with where u were going with it --- i liked it as a whole nd imma give it more listens..
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I loved the whole song, its really fucking dope, and your flow is beast as shit. Lyrics were on point, Dope bars.
One thing i might suggest, is to echo the chorus. I think itll make it sound better? idk lol.
Good shit bro, solid!
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Thx for feed fellas mic ill hit u bak soon
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yo loving the beat very dark n raw. its like u put a diffrent energy into ur voice more gritty on this one. loving the delivery on this too man. the hook was raw as fuck too lotta emotion lot of griminess too it. yo im loving the third verse the most man the energy and emotion was off the hook man. keep doing ur thing Rishi much respect.
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