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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=449388
NFamuZ..straight murderous u cant stand my Evil Writes Prick
'portait of ya self'..either u a fag or some Emo White Bitch..
giv'em so many lacerations to the point were theres no Hiding the Lesions
i'll torture miracle more than his verse on 'Vylent Legion'..
seeing that your into the dark shit i must explain that my Sins might scare
miracle,the example of what ill do to ya crew so "find a happy place" b4 i end nightmares..
and ya girl plays you,she a slut,i run Game on ya eX's Box
with no connection between us i still Controll-her wet spot..
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
sorry no time
everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
dudes shook if u confront him...throw a punch n he'll hide down south
getting tough w/ him is like dogs that bite.......muZzle shut his mouth
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
this keystyle is trashing you..im wasting this bar n im still flyer
ur like receiving crabs during sex...in other words a dick rider
ill get links tomorrow
NFamuz
NFamuZ..straight murderous u cant stand my Evil Writes Prick
'portait of ya self'..either u a fag or some Emo White Bitch..
nah didnt feel this finisher seen EMO punches before but this one just too basic for me no hate man
giv'em so many lacerations to the point were theres no Hiding the Lesions
i'll torture miracle more than his verse on 'Vylent Legion'..
setup was longer then finisher here so syllable wise would throw off this punch plus same rhyme scheme wasnt feeling it
seeing that your into the dark shit i must explain that my Sins might scare
miracle,the example of what ill do to ya crew so "find a happy place" b4 i end nightmares..
this was ok direct not bad
and ya girl plays you,she a slut,i run Game on ya eX's Box
with no connection between us i still Controll-her wet spot..
concept played here no hate
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
ok metaphore here nice punch
Miracle
everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
lmao this was a cool concept here nice wordplay
dudes shook if u confront him...throw a punch n he'll hide down south
getting tough w/ him is like dogs that bite.......muZzle shut his mouth
nah kinda forced here
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
played concept
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
lol ok
this keystyle is trashing you..im wasting this bar n im still flyer
ur like receiving crabs during sex...in other words a dick rider
nah
Damn i seen better from miracle no hate and Nfamuz had some ok lines but played concepts as well. They both were tied as far as quotes go. Anyways i liked Miracles opener i thought the concept was creative. No hate to Nfamuz but your closer was probably your best bar. So im gonna have to give this to miracle because i thought his opener was enough.
V/Miracle
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NFamuZ..straight murderous u cant stand my Evil Writes Prick
'portait of ya self'..either u a fag or some Emo White Bitch..
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Multi at the ending was pretty smooth. Other than that the concept was pretty simple.
giv'em so many lacerations to the point were theres no Hiding the Lesions
i'll torture miracle more than his verse on 'Vylent Legion'..
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Gonna give you a nod on the personal cause I don't know the reference. Aside from that fact the delivery and concept was simple to me. Nothing wrong with a straight forward personal but other than that it's a pretty dull bar.
seeing that your into the dark shit i must explain that my Sins might scare
miracle,the example of what ill do to ya crew so "find a happy place" b4 i end nightmares..
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Filler....nothing to see here, move along.
and ya girl plays you,she a slut,i run Game on ya eX's Box
with no connection between us i still Controll-her wet spot..
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Weak bar...first line coulda been a good set up but the follow up was vanilla.
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
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I like this bar. Good set up, good punch. Best bar of the verse.
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everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
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Nice wordplay...flow is a bit wonky here cause of the second line.
dudes shook if u confront him...throw a punch n he'll hide down south
getting tough w/ him is like dogs that bite.......muZzle shut his mouth
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Weak....all filler here.
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
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lol solid bar.
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
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Good flow, nice multi. Punch/concept was fairly weak though.
this keystyle is trashing you..im wasting this bar n im still flyer
ur like receiving crabs during sex...in other words a dick rider
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Blah, weak finish.
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Vote: Miracle. More creativity in his verse, stronger punches and an overally more solid flow.
Weak battle, i'm being generous with these bars Nfamuz.
giv'em so many lacerations to the point were theres no Hiding the Lesions
i'll torture miracle more than his verse on 'Vylent Legion'..
and ya girl plays you,she a slut,i run Game on ya eX's Box
with no connection between us i still Controll-her wet spot..
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
vs.
everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
dudes shook if u confront him...throw a punch n he'll hide down south
getting tough w/ him is like dogs that bite.......muZzle shut his mouth
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
mir had more consiency and better concepts.+ his punches hit harder.
Nf you had a very simple bars with not a lot of hard hitting punches, and you didn't have very original concepts.
v/miracle
seeing that your into the dark shit i must explain that my Sins might scare
miracle,the example of what ill do to ya crew so "find a happy place" b4 i end nightmares..
and ya girl plays you,she a slut,i run Game on ya eX's Box
with no connection between us i still Controll-her wet spot..
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
vs
everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
not a bad battle here, but i feel miracle came with stronger, creative, and more clever bars than fam..no hate but my vote goes to Miracle on this one.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=460777Originally Posted by miracle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=460537
NFamuZ..straight murderous u cant stand my Evil Writes Prick
'portait of ya self'..either u a fag or some Emo White Bitch..
(if your talkin bout the picture displayed shits aight)
giv'em so many lacerations to the point were theres no Hiding the Lesions
i'll torture miracle more than his verse on 'Vylent Legion'..
(shit was nice)
seeing that your into the dark shit i must explain that my Sins might scare
miracle,the example of what ill do to ya crew so "find a happy place" b4 i end nightmares..
(decent)
and ya girl plays you,she a slut,i run Game on ya eX's Box
with no connection between us i still Controll-her wet spot..
(ehh kinda forced)
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
(not feeling the ender gun punches play no matter wat way you use it the gangster shit doesn't amuse me no more)
everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
(nice concept ender shoulda hit harder though)
dudes shook if u confront him...throw a punch n he'll hide down south
getting tough w/ him is like dogs that bite.......muZzle shut his mouth
(na man this was weak)
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
(come on miracle played punch mayne)
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
(same again played punch)
this keystyle is trashing you..im wasting this bar n im still flyer
ur like receiving crabs during sex...in other words a dick rider
(haha funny)
to be honest i think this was a one sided battle NFamuZ took this all the way through fresher lines more consecutive personals and better disses flow was on point....miracle man only thing i got for you here is nice flow...you seem like you rushed this battle just through fillers in not much more then that personals if any were missed..v/NFamuZ
seeing that your into the dark shit i must explain that my Sins might scare
miracle,the example of what ill do to ya crew so "find a happy place" b4 i end nightmares..
and ya bars weak bitch ya frail with no sense of murder rap
catch'em 'shining' in his hood,i put shells on em like turtle wax..
vs
everyone hates you alot..now it's time i heat this bitch
cuz your like taking a number 2 in italy's leaning tower...a pisa shit
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
ive seen better from mir.. lol.. nfamuz came wth wack shit .. the stuff i quoted they were like an attempt, keep elevating. miracle came more creative and stronger..
v/mir
Nfamuz get three links ASAP.
peepd ur profile n i laughed ..everyone on rb is ripping dude
it's ironic your occupation is hammer n nails..while u keep getting screwd
i get sky high smoking weed, while this drag queen's on his knees for chumps
so if you heard he's lifted off the ground, chances are it's his heels or pumps
vs
nothing
waow i dunno the fucks goin on with people or what there reading..nfamuz dropped a bunch of statements and played concepts with no impact. atleast miracle had 2 decent quotables.. he ezily gmv here.
bring on the hate vote..
rtf on me vs malcom texts
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