Collab (blame us)

[<SamPle>]

[Intro]
Seems like every time….
I open my mouth….
I get scrutinized….
Accused….
Well fuck….
If I shouldn’t say what I want
I want to say what I shouldn’t

[Beta Viewz]
I’ll take the blame, and the slander to my name
For hypnotism and brainwashing society’s lames
I bash the dames, cuz of past experiences please excuse
My rude, dubbed interludes, spilling feelings from a dude
Who tries to be real wit fans and let them into his tomb
And learn my history reversed from life to exiting wombs
You dare assume, that I do this on purpose, and its worthless?
Interested in what I say than bitches kids who’s birthless?
Meaning my simple rhymes over instrumentals aint fine
Defined as an outrage, but killing kids aint out of line?
I don’t mind, telling people my wheels are bigger than theirs
Its entertainment so don’t listen if ya feelings aint spared
You’ve got a choice, and don’t watch me if you hate what I do
Cuz I hate what you do, hypocrites and goody two shoes
Too good to teach their kids the difference, leaving it up to us?
I don’t live in their home, I don’t walk them up to the bus
Put a sandwich in they lunch bag, or give em kiss
Fuck ya attitudes and complaints, I should make this a diss
So here I am, wanna fight me? Give me your best shot
But I’m a thug right? You better back away from my spot

You can just blame us (us)
Cuz they all make a fuss (fuss)….when
We start dissin….when
We start cursin….when
We offend women…. then

Blame us, Blame us
Blame us, Blame us
Blame us, Blame us
Blame us, Blame us

[SPBennett]
All you people do is seem to put the blame on us
When we don’t even know each others name were strangers
And yet I’ve already turned your son into something dangerous
Blaming us, for your children being ignoramuses
“Excuse me Ms” I think I know why your girl sucks penises
Cause she follows as mother does, the dad walked out
At a tender age of four or five or there about
Open my mouth, suddenly your tearing me apart
All cause I run mouth and say this girls a tart
Okay guys! A fresh start let me restart
I apologize for before never again, I swear
Shit, cunt, whore, fuck, twat, queer
“Oops” sorry that was me being literal
Sorry, but have you ever seen that film collateral
Damage, you tell me that I’m as bad as that, I don’t kill people like rata-tat-tat
I don’t force people to attack tack-tack
Don’t go looting like the London riot-at
How you tell me I’m the bad influence when instead
You let your little girl watch TV after watershed
Where there’s nothing she can’t learn that I’ve just said
And you say I’m the one fucked up in the head
Do what I say? There not smart as you thought they were
Don’t look at me, don’t even point the finger or
Don’t blame me when your son shoots you with a rifle
You’re the one who supposed to be there idol

[Hook]

[~ItHurtZ]
Yo I’m stated above the law koz I scratch with my Freddy Krueger like claw,
don’t sit there and ignore like a homeless bum that’s poor,
I terrorize with your mind koz im a criminal kind
im real hard to find like the joker underground
posters up of me saying Lost and found fiveO after me choppers are inbound
Spittin my rhymes while screaming "catch you on the rebound"
im the urban master king of society's disaster
Gettin chased by the gangs on my bmx trying to pedal faster
im stated above the gods up in heaven,
what’s the time already half past eleven
im stated above the alcohol limit "who's driving Robbie or beaven?"
I write my life story in my notebook hoping that one day god will take a look
stated above about the things I have took from the one they call "the master crook"
doing bad things don’t give me no satisfaction
only bad girls give me a magnet like attraction
got to pay my $5000 dollar fines and stupid infraction
from the car I was stealing had no good traction
I was out of place and lost in a trap
can find my way out of life koz I lost the map
feels like I’m runnin a figure 8 lap by lap
im stated above and I’m sick and tired im done with this crap!


Sooooo……..

Just blame us

[GZ]

nice, good lyrics. it seems like you touch on allot of different things while still keeping on the idea of blaming you for their problems. i like the idea with this, but the idea is somewhat overdone but never quite to this extent so good job. i have to say the flow needs work and i like how you seem to flow one rhyme into the next like when you end with traction with trap. but i think each sentence needs to flow better so everything sounds better, maybe youd spit it differently than how i would, but to me it seems like a sloppy style. i like the story telling aspect of what your saying though, dope stuff keep at it.

can you give me some feedback: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...483/index.html

[N.F.M.]

Very nicely collaborated you guys. I think you both did a very good job. Huge props on the intro, I think everybody should feel that shit. I wasn't really much for the hook, being a feminist myself, but I think you all had some pretty good verses. I look forward to hearing more from all of you in the future. Thanks for the read. Keep rappin.

[<SamPle>]

cheers guys
keep the feed coming

[<SamPle>]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...180/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...465/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...107/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...151/index.html

[WhatsHisFace]

Not bad, great topic first of all. There were some parts were each of your guys verse drifted away from the overall messege. O.K. hook, you guys should think of another one that wraps up the whole messege in a orginal way. But like I said, hook was o.k. Good intro also.

Beta - good verse, flow was nice but you could of got deeper in the messege.

SP- also a good verse, good job on giving your opinion. With details and word choice you did a nice job expresse your own messege.

Hurtz - i didn't understand your verse, you weren't talking about the whole entire topic which lost me.

Overall, nice piece guys. Great topic to write on.

[Shoemaker]

If I shouldn’t say what I want
I want to say what I shouldn’t

i like this alot

Cuz I hate what you do, hypocrites and goody two shoes
Too good to teach their kids the difference, leaving it up to us?
I don’t live in their home, I don’t walk them up to the bus
Put a sandwich in they lunch bag, or give em kiss
Fuck ya attitudes and complaints, I should make this a diss
So here I am, wanna fight me? Give me your best shot
But I’m a thug right? You better back away from my spot

this is my favorite from you beta.
nice multies and sarcasm.
played concept but you made it fresh.

i would say try to expand your vocab... thats the only criticism i can give you, nice verse.

All you people do is seem to put the blame on us
When we don’t even know each others name were strangers
And yet I’ve already turned your son into something dangerous
Blaming us, for your children being ignoramuses
“Excuse me Ms” I think I know why your girl sucks penises

this was my favorite from you sp,
was funny, and you did a great job of continuing beta's thought.
this created a nice flow and progression to the overall song.
good shit man.

im the urban master king of society's disaster
Gettin chased by the gangs on my bmx trying to pedal faster
im stated above the gods up in heaven,
what’s the time already half past eleven
im stated above the alcohol limit "who's driving Robbie or beaven?"
I write my life story in my notebook hoping that one day god will take a look
stated above about the things I have took from the one they call "the master crook"

these were your best bars. your verse was really unusual as far as rhyme scheme. but i think your piece flowed just fine.
good job

overall: good piece that flowed and never got off topic.
this is a solid trio, good job guys

return the feed?
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...433/index.html

[<SamPle>]

"If I shouldn’t say what I want
I want to say what I shouldn’t"

proud to say i came up with this. ha

cheers.. about time this peice got some attention

will rtf

UPPIN....

[<SamPle>]

can we get 100 views??

uppin