Shunned1 (1-1) vs. Hydr0 (2-0) Hydr0

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 3

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm PST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 5 links to the battles you voted on in this thread somewhere.

Negative 1 vote per missing link in next person's battle, INCLUDING THE LOSER

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[Hydr0]

Nikeeeee

[Shunned1]

check

[Hydr0]

gl in ur haiku league match this week dog.
.
.
ayooooo

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
lol @ this modern day homo-poet, don't ever claim u from the streets,
i bet yemen love em so much.... they even get recited in the middle east
this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!
you'll die a virgin, geek. that shits way out in the open,
chicks say 'u needa learn howto 'act-shun'.. only cuz he never gettin any'a that from em
got bitches overseas, the magicjack keeps my game ahead,
ur version of some Magic,JACK.. is when ya gay lover does the houdini to u in bed

[Shunned1]

dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,
you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,
you're corrupt, a fake, just a charlatan that stems tales,
he's located in the clouds?, then i'm invading him like chemtrails,
your life's tainted, completely degraded with that pus you got,
so if people askin how rawhide is, its dumb kids at a butcher shop,
conceited and depressed, he's always catchin L's, let me aid his story,
i'll get this bitch to slice his wrists, then show him some vainglory,
your name's unsuitable, this kid is getting beaten down,
how are you gonna call yourself hydro when i got your face planted in the ground,

[Knux]

dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,
Weak
you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,
Nah
you're corrupt, a fake, just a charlatan that stems tales,
he's located in the clouds?, then i'm invading him like chemtrails,
Aight
your life's tainted, completely degraded with that pus you got,
so if people askin how rawhide is, its dumb kids at a butcher shop,
Nice
conceited and depressed, he's always catchin L's, let me aid his story,
i'll get this bitch to slice his wrists, then show him some vainglory,
Aright
your name's unsuitable, this kid is getting beaten down,
how are you gonna call yourself hydro when i got your face planted in the ground,
Mmmm Okish

gl in ur haiku league match this week dog.
.
.
ayooooo

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
Nice
lol @ this modern day homo-poet, don't ever claim u from the streets,
i bet yemen love em so much.... they even get recited in the middle east
Lol nice
this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
I think this concepts getting played but not sure, its a nice punch.. and highlighting the wordplay isn't necessary, we'll get it
CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!
Meh
you'll die a virgin, geek. that shits way out in the open,
chicks say 'u needa learn howto 'act-shun'.. only cuz he never gettin any'a that from em
Weak WP IMO
got bitches overseas, the magicjack keeps my game ahead,
ur version of some Magic,JACK.. is when ya gay lover does the houdini to u in bed
Nah

Ahh kinda close.. But I have to go with Hydr0 i believe, really its a toss up.. I think Shunned had the LOTB with the rawhide punch.. and on the other hand Hydro had the haiku personals and a couple of decent wordplays, altthough they were mixed with some weaker ones, i still think he BARELY edged this out.. i literally took a while deciding who to vote for because you both had your hits and misses, and even tho shun had the LOTB I think Hydro takes it with a steady flow of decency

V-Hydro

[Aye Wun]

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!

vs


you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,

V.Hydro, pretty one sided.

[ArchDevil]

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
^ good shit

lol @ this modern day homo-poet, don't ever claim u from the streets,
i bet yemen love em so much.... they even get recited in the middle east
^ lol nice punch n concept

this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
^ havent seen a lot of battles from shunned to say if its played, but the nameplay is ok

CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!
^ cool, not bad

you'll die a virgin, geek. that shits way out in the open,
chicks say 'u needa learn howto 'act-shun'.. only cuz he never gettin any'a that from em
^ not feelin

got bitches overseas, the magicjack keeps my game ahead,
ur version of some Magic,JACK.. is when ya gay lover does the houdini to u in bed
^ ehhh

vs.


dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,
^ not bad

you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,
^ seen the stake concept before, okish flip

you're corrupt, a fake, just a charlatan that stems tales,
he's located in the clouds?, then i'm invading him like chemtrails,
^ not bad

your life's tainted, completely degraded with that pus you got,
so if people askin how rawhide is, its dumb kids at a butcher shop,
^ lol liked this

conceited and depressed, he's always catchin L's, let me aid his story,
i'll get this bitch to slice his wrists, then show him some vainglory,
^ pretty basic wordplay

your name's unsuitable, this kid is getting beaten down,
how are you gonna call yourself hydro when i got your face planted in the ground,
^ ok


this was a close battle honestly...2-1 on quotables in hydro's favour, i think hydro started off nicely, then didnt keep up that same rhythm but still managed decent attempts, some weaker than others...on the other hand, shunned had the rawhide punch which was his best, while the rest of his punches were pretty consistent but not spectacular...if shunned had one more punch on the level of that rawhide he would've won this imo...but in this case, hydro edges it by a hair
vote - hydro

[Joe Boston]

HYDRO

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
lol nice personal

lol @ this modern day homo-poet, don't ever claim u from the streets,
i bet yemen love em so much.... they even get recited in the middle east
lmao wow nice concept

this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
lol nice concept again creative on the name flip

CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!
ok not bad direct

you'll die a virgin, geek. that shits way out in the open,
chicks say 'u needa learn howto 'act-shun'.. only cuz he never gettin any'a that from em
nah


got bitches overseas, the magicjack keeps my game ahead,
ur version of some Magic,JACK.. is when ya gay lover does the houdini to u in bed
nah


Shunned 1


dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,
not bad

you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,
this wasnt a bad concept liked the flip i never seen it

you're corrupt, a fake, just a charlatan that stems tales,
he's located in the clouds?, then i'm invading him like chemtrails,
ok

your life's tainted, completely degraded with that pus you got,
so if people askin how rawhide is, its dumb kids at a butcher shop,
lol

conceited and depressed, he's always catchin L's, let me aid his story,
i'll get this bitch to slice his wrists, then show him some vainglory,
nah

your name's unsuitable, this kid is getting beaten down,
how are you gonna call yourself hydro when i got your face planted in the ground,
OK


This was another good battle here Hydro had some decent concepts and then fell off his last two bars. Shunned 1 also had some decent concepts some didnt hit as hard and his closer was a miss. Hydro gets my vote for being slightly more consistent. I agree if shunned had 1 more killer punch in this he woulda had a chance.

V/Hydro

[The Archetype]

Hydro... any LLL flip is old as dirt... next 2 punches were good... rest was eh...

Shunned... I don't know what happened this time around... verse wasn't good... only opener was a hit...

vote Hydro...

[A.T.]

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
eh
lol @ this modern day homo-poet, don't ever claim u from the streets,
i bet yemen love em so much.... they even get recited in the middle east
ok
this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
cool
CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!
ok
you'll die a virgin, geek. that shits way out in the open,
chicks say 'u needa learn howto 'act-shun'.. only cuz he never gettin any'a that from em
decent
got bitches overseas, the magicjack keeps my game ahead,
ur version of some Magic,JACK.. is when ya gay lover does the houdini to u in bed
lol... played, but worded funny

vs.

dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,
decent
you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,
concept was cool... coulda been worded a bit better
you're corrupt, a fake, just a charlatan that stems tales,
he's located in the clouds?, then i'm invading him like chemtrails,
meh
your life's tainted, completely degraded with that pus you got,
so if people askin how rawhide is, its dumb kids at a butcher shop,
I see it, but just didn't hit right
conceited and depressed, he's always catchin L's, let me aid his story,
i'll get this bitch to slice his wrists, then show him some vainglory,
nah,
your name's unsuitable, this kid is getting beaten down,
how are you gonna call yourself hydro when i got your face planted in the ground,
cool concept, cept come off as statementish

overall, decent battle. I got hydro taking this with better hits.

vote- Hydro

[Vinzr]

this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
CEO of this rap shit, groupies line up to take my unborn babies, son
last time u seen a chairman, was when i used one to bash ya cranium!
you'll die a virgin, geek. that shits way out in the open,
chicks say 'u needa learn howto 'act-shun'.. only cuz he never gettin any'a that from em

vs

dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,
you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,

Gotta go with Hydro here, he came with harder hits. Shunned kind of came quite weak or at least not as strong.

v/ Hydro

[The Gwapfather]

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..

vs

you wont rise to the top, with your skills we're not impressed,
so if he wants to stake his claim, then i'm stabbing him in the chest,


Hydro had two hits to Shunned's 1, and overall was just a bit more consistant, decent battle overall though..



VOTE: HYDRO

[King]

this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..

vs


dude you got weak hits ,what makes you think u can step to me?
the only hydro knockin me on my ass is the herb I bought at the dispensary,

hydros nameplay was pretty creative, rest of the verse was meh. Shunneds opener was ok, wasn't feeling much else

vote Hydro

[miracle]

building up the villains loss columns, that's what this league is about dude,
You call it triple L,
cos after u catch that many in a row, u'll sign out n stick to writing haikus
-i liked it
lol @ this modern day homo-poet, don't ever claim u from the streets,
i bet yemen love em so much.... they even get recited in the middle east
-cool
this faggots pissed, actin like him n hoes can co exist,
u always lookin to 'get a grip on a dick shun', like u some kinda interventionist..
-yeah i was feeling this

vs

your life's tainted, completely degraded with that pus you got,
so if people askin how rawhide is, its dumb kids at a butcher shop,
-iight
your name's unsuitable, this kid is getting beaten down,
how are you gonna call yourself hydro when i got your face planted in the ground,
-ok

v/hydro ..kinda onesided