Higher Angelou (0-1) vs. Jeffry (1-1) HA Wins

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 3

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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
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Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm PST.

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[#PrimeTime]

present.

14 it is.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...367/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...354/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...359/index.html

[Greedy]

20 lines is a foooooooorce my nigga damn.

You can get 12 lines of dope...

[Greedy]

20 lines? Damn son! And i thought his nose was red cuz this J kid is a clown...
Maybe after this battle he'll see it..he got the playoff chances of a paraplegic...ain't getting a round
And Y'all grimey for this.. dude sucks but think he nice, and y'all ain't saying nothing for 'em?
It just isn't fair Rey ..that ur the biggest one alive, and ur gaying up the forum
Yup..Angelou keep hoes on deck to sex up...in fact ..u better watch y'all dames
But fam..if u see hoes on deck.. she's next up to bat at a softball game
And why u frontin like u wear heat and ratchets when ur a queer diva? Fact is....
You ain't caught a body since high school...at cheerleader practice
That tuff Guy act is ya worse mistake, like im not a g and wont hand this nerd his fate
The shotty 'll blow and have his mind body and soul separated like church and state
I thought he wanted to admin text sites when cats spit bars
But his idea of being a Maude involves black fishnet tights and Mac lip gloss
But Jeff's a playa tho..he virtually sees a broads thong whenever he ain't logged on ....
Keyword virtually ..as in WWW "insert porn site here". Com

[#PrimeTime]

He a sucker for words, he chokin when he hears my cocky attitude
watch the blood rush to his head as i take him to a higher altitude

I ain't a bronco fan, but im a mile high playa my demeanor is Rocky Mountain cold

Pm'ed 14 to animal

don`t worry, i`ll be in next week, i could show everyone the breakdown you did vs rule in the gaunlet where you liked most of my verse and said you look forward to seeing more from me if you want, and call you out on ur blatant lies.

u groom animal, got supernat n u fightin for the LLL Mag's bitch of the week centerfold

your gimmick is pathetic, but nigga i don't give a fuck if you don't care for me,
cuz people forget the fact - your actions are a result of a victim of a welfare queen
After this shit, ima get some respect from Animal, and they'll interview me,
only interview u'll see, is if ur behind closed doors havin cops ask, "did u steal this tv"?
But nigga Abi sed it best: "Quit actin tough askin bout YOU PEOPLE"
you a 3rd class citizen, so i laugh at your attempts to rise cuz we'll neva be equal [1]
i get another NC head, damn, i suggest hittin the logout button n get outta here
you remind me of Danny Glover nigga, now watch me kill every angel in the outfield
Heaven sent? Nah he dont have God in his life, so he'll have a delayed acension,
If it's his time to leave the earth and rise up - ill shoot em down like clay pidgeons.

14.

Expos:
[1] = Check his profile, he was beefin wit Abi.

[Greedy]

Dbl post

[Greedy]

Dbl post

[Knux]

He a sucker for words, he chokin when he hears my cocky attitude
watch the blood rush to his head as i take him to a higher altitude
Ok

I ain't a bronco fan, but im a mile high playa my demeanor is Rocky Mountain cold
u groom animal, got supernat n u fightin for the LLL Mag's bitch of the week centerfold
Ok personal

your gimmick is pathetic, but nigga i don't give a fuck if you don't care for me,
cuz people forget the fact - your actions are a result of a victim of a welfare queen
Nah
After this shit, ima get some respect from Animal, and they'll interview me,
only interview u'll see, is if ur behind closed doors havin cops ask, "did u steal this tv"?
Meh kinda weak
But nigga Abi sed it best: "Quit actin tough askin bout YOU PEOPLE"
you a 3rd class citizen, so i laugh at your attempts to rise cuz we'll neva be equal [1]
Nah
i get another NC head, damn, i suggest hittin the logout button n get outta here
you remind me of Danny Glover nigga, now watch me kill every angel in the outfield
Fav line from u
Heaven sent? Nah he dont have God in his life, so he'll have a delayed acension,
If it's his time to leave the earth and rise up - ill shoot em down like clay pidgeons.
Nice

14.

Expos:
[1] = Check his profile, he was beefin wit Abi.

20 lines? Damn son! And i thought his nose was red cuz this J kid is a clown...
Maybe after this battle he'll see it..he got the playoff chances of a paraplegic...ain't getting a round
Lol ok
And Y'all grimey for this.. dude sucks but think he nice, and y'all ain't saying nothing for 'em?
It just isn't fair Rey ..that ur the biggest one alive, and ur gaying up the forum
Nice, even though nobody would call him Rey
Yup..Angelou keep hoes on deck to sex up...in fact ..u better watch y'all dames
But fam..if u see hoes on deck.. she's next up to bat at a softball game
Nah
And why u frontin like u wear heat and ratchets when ur a queer diva? Fact is....
You ain't caught a body since high school...at cheerleader practice
Ok
That tuff Guy act is ya worse mistake, like im not a g and wont hand this nerd his fate
The shotty 'll blow and have his mind body and soul separated like church and state
Decent
I thought he wanted to admin text sites when cats spit bars
But his idea of being a Maude involves black fishnet tights and Mac lip gloss
Gay, literally
But Jeff's a playa tho..he virtually sees a broads thong whenever he ain't logged on ....
Keyword virtually ..as in WWW "insert porn site here". Com
Forced but ok

I like what I saw from Jeff compared to has other battles.. He came well, but Angelou did take this by an OK amount, not by a ton, but soundly.... his stuff just hit harder IMO, punches and wordplay were decent enough to take it

V-Higher

[Quote]

20 lines? Damn son! And i thought his nose was red cuz this J kid is a clown...
Maybe after this battle he'll see it..he got the playoff chances of a paraplegic...ain't getting a round
aight.. very wordy though
And Y'all grimey for this.. dude sucks but think he nice, and y'all ain't saying nothing for 'em?
It just isn't fair Rey ..that ur the biggest one alive, and ur gaying up the forum
nah
Yup..Angelou keep hoes on deck to sex up...in fact ..u better watch y'all dames
But fam..if u see hoes on deck.. she's next up to bat at a softball game
lol ok
And why u frontin like u wear heat and ratchets when ur a queer diva? Fact is....
You ain't caught a body since high school...at cheerleader practice
lmao, nice
That tuff Guy act is ya worse mistake, like im not a g and wont hand this nerd his fate
The shotty 'll blow and have his mind body and soul separated like church and state
eh
I thought he wanted to admin text sites when cats spit bars
But his idea of being a Maude involves black fishnet tights and Mac lip gloss
blah
But Jeff's a playa tho..he virtually sees a broads thong whenever he ain't logged on ....
Keyword virtually ..as in WWW "insert porn site here". Com
nah

vs.

He a sucker for words, he chokin when he hears my cocky attitude
watch the blood rush to his head as i take him to a higher altitude
okay idea
I ain't a bronco fan, but im a mile high playa my demeanor is Rocky Mountain cold

Quote:
Pm'ed 14 to animal
Quote:
Originally Posted by Supernat View Post
don`t worry, i`ll be in next week, i could show everyone the breakdown you did vs rule in the gaunlet where you liked most of my verse and said you look forward to seeing more from me if you want, and call you out on ur blatant lies.
u groom animal, got supernat n u fightin for the LLL Mag's bitch of the week centerfold
stretchhhh
your gimmick is pathetic, but nigga i don't give a fuck if you don't care for me,
cuz people forget the fact - your actions are a result of a victim of a welfare queen
nah
After this shit, ima get some respect from Animal, and they'll interview me,
only interview u'll see, is if ur behind closed doors havin cops ask, "did u steal this tv"?
nah, too simple a concept
But nigga Abi sed it best: "Quit actin tough askin bout YOU PEOPLE"
you a 3rd class citizen, so i laugh at your attempts to rise cuz we'll neva be equal [1]
too simple
i get another NC head, damn, i suggest hittin the logout button n get outta here
you remind me of Danny Glover nigga, now watch me kill every angel in the outfield
u had a concept but execution was wayyy off
Heaven sent? Nah he dont have God in his life, so he'll have a delayed acension,
If it's his time to leave the earth and rise up - ill shoot em down like clay pidgeons.
nah

overall angel outclass mr jeff here.... jeff needs elevation, angel was really wordy for my liking but he had some hits

v/ angel

[Cody Nash]

20 lines? Damn son! And i thought his nose was red cuz this J kid is a clown...
Maybe after this battle he'll see it..he got the playoff chances of a paraplegic...ain't getting a round
wording was blah...
And Y'all grimey for this.. dude sucks but think he nice, and y'all ain't saying nothing for 'em?
It just isn't fair Rey ..that ur the biggest one alive, and ur gaying up the forum
Hmm, miss...
Yup..Angelou keep hoes on deck to sex up...in fact ..u better watch y'all dames
But fam..if u see hoes on deck.. she's next up to bat at a softball game
Lol, coo...
And why u frontin like u wear heat and ratchets when ur a queer diva? Fact is....
You ain't caught a body since high school...at cheerleader practice
Good hit, creative...
That tuff Guy act is ya worse mistake, like im not a g and wont hand this nerd his fate
The shotty 'll blow and have his mind body and soul separated like church and state
Dece...
I thought he wanted to admin text sites when cats spit bars
But his idea of being a Maude involves black fishnet tights and Mac lip gloss
Lol, funny...
But Jeff's a playa tho..he virtually sees a broads thong whenever he ain't logged on ....
Keyword virtually ..as in WWW "insert porn site here". Com
corny

vs

He a sucker for words, he chokin when he hears my cocky attitude
watch the blood rush to his head as i take him to a higher altitude
wording was off... needs to be harsher
I ain't a bronco fan, but im a mile high playa my demeanor is Rocky Mountain cold
u groom animal, got supernat n u fightin for the LLL Mag's bitch of the week centerfold
waaaay too much in between.. the quotes ruined the punchline
your gimmick is pathetic, but nigga i don't give a fuck if you don't care for me,
cuz people forget the fact - your actions are a result of a victim of a welfare queen
not feelin' it..
After this shit, ima get some respect from Animal, and they'll interview me,
only interview u'll see, is if ur behind closed doors havin cops ask, "did u steal this tv"?
too plain and simple... not feelin' it again
But nigga Abi sed it best: "Quit actin tough askin bout YOU PEOPLE"
you a 3rd class citizen, so i laugh at your attempts to rise cuz we'll neva be equal [1]
Just diss the cat and stop overcomplicating shit with weak ass concept lol
i get another NC head, damn, i suggest hittin the logout button n get outta here
you remind me of Danny Glover nigga, now watch me kill every angel in the outfield
outta here and outfield don't rhyme first off.. and the conept is okay
Heaven sent? Nah he dont have God in his life, so he'll have a delayed acension,
If it's his time to leave the earth and rise up - ill shoot em down like clay pidgeons.
could've been better.


this is a pretty one sided match.. I dunno. No hate to Jeff cause I haven't read much from you but what I did see here was waaaay too simple.. your wording kills you here.

Vote Higher Angelou

[Fatal.]

20 lines? Damn son! And i thought his nose was red cuz this J kid is a clown...
Maybe after this battle he'll see it..he got the playoff chances of a paraplegic...ain't getting a round
not bad opener
And Y'all grimey for this.. dude sucks but think he nice, and y'all ain't saying nothing for 'em?
It just isn't fair Rey ..that ur the biggest one alive, and ur gaying up the forum
pretty good
Yup..Angelou keep hoes on deck to sex up...in fact ..u better watch y'all dames
But fam..if u see hoes on deck.. she's next up to bat at a softball game
cool bar
And why u frontin like u wear heat and ratchets when ur a queer diva? Fact is....
You ain't caught a body since high school...at cheerleader practice
good set up and nice punch
That tuff Guy act is ya worse mistake, like im not a g and wont hand this nerd his fate
The shotty 'll blow and have his mind body and soul separated like church and state
decent
I thought he wanted to admin text sites when cats spit bars
But his idea of being a Maude involves black fishnet tights and Mac lip gloss
ehhh
But Jeff's a playa tho..he virtually sees a broads thong whenever he ain't logged on ....
Keyword virtually ..as in WWW "insert porn site here". Com
weak ccloser

vs.

He a sucker for words, he chokin when he hears my cocky attitude
watch the blood rush to his head as i take him to a higher altitude
ok opener
I ain't a bronco fan, but im a mile high playa my demeanor is Rocky Mountain cold

Quote:
Pm'ed 14 to animal
Quote:
Originally Posted by Supernat View Post
don`t worry, i`ll be in next week, i could show everyone the breakdown you did vs rule in the gaunlet where you liked most of my verse and said you look forward to seeing more from me if you want, and call you out on ur blatant lies.
u groom animal, got supernat n u fightin for the LLL Mag's bitch of the week centerfold
very stretched
your gimmick is pathetic, but nigga i don't give a fuck if you don't care for me,
cuz people forget the fact - your actions are a result of a victim of a welfare queen
not feelin
After this shit, ima get some respect from Animal, and they'll interview me,
only interview u'll see, is if ur behind closed doors havin cops ask, "did u steal this tv"?
ehhh
But nigga Abi sed it best: "Quit actin tough askin bout YOU PEOPLE"
you a 3rd class citizen, so i laugh at your attempts to rise cuz we'll neva be equal [1]
ehhh again
i get another NC head, damn, i suggest hittin the logout button n get outta here
you remind me of Danny Glover nigga, now watch me kill every angel in the outfield
alright
Heaven sent? Nah he dont have God in his life, so he'll have a delayed acension,
If it's his time to leave the earth and rise up - ill shoot em down like clay pidgeons.
meh closer


overall i feel higher took this, his bars hit harder and were more creative. jeff came simple with a few hits, but higher had an overall better verse so he gets my vote.

v/Higher

[Fatal.]

dbl...

[Lethargic]

Angelou had the cheerleading practice, church and state, and lip gloss lines. They were all decent, but with better wording they could've been amazing. Your concepts are definitely on point Angelou.

Jeffry had me feeling like I was reading a FL battle. There wasn't really anything about your verse I liked.

V - Higher

[CatasTrophy]

20 lines? Damn son! And i thought his nose was red cuz this J kid is a clown...
Maybe after this battle he'll see it..he got the playoff chances of a paraplegic...ain't getting a round
stretched..
And Y'all grimey for this.. dude sucks but think he nice, and y'all ain't saying nothing for 'em?
It just isn't fair Rey ..that ur the biggest one alive, and ur gaying up the forum
what is this?
Yup..Angelou keep hoes on deck to sex up...in fact ..u better watch y'all dames
But fam..if u see hoes on deck.. she's next up to bat at a softball game
weak..
And why u frontin like u wear heat and ratchets when ur a queer diva? Fact is....
You ain't caught a body since high school...at cheerleader practice
ok..
That tuff Guy act is ya worse mistake, like im not a g and wont hand this nerd his fate
The shotty 'll blow and have his mind body and soul separated like church and state
ehh..
I thought he wanted to admin text sites when cats spit bars
But his idea of being a Maude involves black fishnet tights and Mac lip gloss
where was the rhyme?
But Jeff's a playa tho..he virtually sees a broads thong whenever he ain't logged on ....
Keyword virtually ..as in WWW "insert porn site here". Com
noo..

vs.

He a sucker for words, he chokin when he hears my cocky attitude
watch the blood rush to his head as i take him to a higher altitude
2nd line could've been better
I ain't a bronco fan, but im a mile high playa my demeanor is Rocky Mountain cold
u groom animal, got supernat n u fightin for the LLL Mag's bitch of the week centerfold
no..
your gimmick is pathetic, but nigga i don't give a fuck if you don't care for me,
cuz people forget the fact - your actions are a result of a victim of a welfare queen
nah..
After this shit, ima get some respect from Animal, and they'll interview me,
only interview u'll see, is if ur behind closed doors havin cops ask, "did u steal this tv"?
umm nah...
But nigga Abi sed it best: "Quit actin tough askin bout YOU PEOPLE"
you a 3rd class citizen, so i laugh at your attempts to rise cuz we'll neva be equal [1]
good..
i get another NC head, damn, i suggest hittin the logout button n get outta here
you remind me of Danny Glover nigga, now watch me kill every angel in the outfield
didnt rhyme.
Heaven sent? Nah he dont have God in his life, so he'll have a delayed acension,
If it's his time to leave the earth and rise up - ill shoot em down like clay pidgeons.
so-so closure

Overall..this battle could have gone either direction but H. Angelous lines were more funnier. I expected more from this battle. Overall good battle though.

vote-Higher Angelou

[Token]

6-0 Higher Angelou Wins.

don't forget to vote both of you.