Fatal Thoughts (0-0) vs. Knux (1-1) Knux Wins

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 3

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm PST.

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[Knux]

Yea 10

[Fatal.]

aight word

[Fatal.]

He’s lonely and he can’t find a girl on Facebook, sooo this dude joined Fuckbook
If I couldn’t get pussy, I would probably do the same… if I looked the way Knux looks
You’re far from presentable, just like your sig and avatar you’re looking beastly
Not in the sense of being muscular…but fucked up face, hair, and crooked teeth b
Especially after some punches, this mutha fucka will be broken and bleeding
Beat him so hard with Ink….that Monster’s and even Token won’t need him
This battle isn’t a playground, so in this battle you will not be sliding
I woulda thought Knux had a giant pet chicken… the way he’s constantly cock riding
He rides so fucking hard that people are actually advising him to buckle up
The outcome of this battle is like a UFC fighter….the way I’m leaving knux fucked

[Knux]

Fatal Thoughts

Really though?...

Ur in way over your head, Its obvious no one's feelin what u spray my way
Cuz sure Fat Al's quoted, but its always "Hey Hey Hey"
Nobody see's u as a contender.. Im goin for the belt and ur just a notch
So only ones keepin an eye on fatal thoughts, are the guards on suicide watch
You get no bitches, skinny with no game.. no wonder girls aint feeling thrilled
So when I say F rail pussy, im just talkin bout this weakling's build
Your shits just weak, think your nice but i'll double your form
So its no surprise punches got this F T bitch laid out, like BBW porn
Dudes suckin dick at the crib, Turned gay in spite of what his parents said
So when they leaving fatal blows.. Ironic my punches doin the same to his head 

10.

[Knux]

Dbl

[Wordz AhGod.]

weak battle.. Fatal Thoughts seems to be more audio based style and Knux is just ass.. every other line started with the word "so" ....soooo I stopped reading.. booo this battle.

[#PrimeTime]

He’s lonely and he can’t find a girl on Facebook, sooo this dude joined Fuckbook
If I couldn’t get pussy, I would probably do the same… if I looked the way Knux looks
weak opener

You’re far from presentable, just like your sig and avatar you’re looking beastly
Not in the sense of being muscular…but fucked up face, hair, and crooked teeth b
not feelin this, no hate

Especially after some punches, this mutha fucka will be broken and bleeding
Beat him so hard with Ink….that Monster’s and even Token won’t need him
dece personal

This battle isn’t a playground, so in this battle you will not be sliding
I woulda thought Knux had a giant pet chicken… the way he’s constantly cock riding
better

He rides so fucking hard that people are actually advising him to buckle up
The outcome of this battle is like a UFC fighter….the way I’m leaving knux fucked
ehh closer

vs.

Ur in way over your head, Its obvious no one's feelin what u spray my way
Cuz sure Fat Al's quoted, but its always "Hey Hey Hey"
aight opener, dece attempt @ nameplay

Nobody see's u as a contender.. Im goin for the belt and ur just a notch
So only ones keepin an eye on fatal thoughts, are the guards on suicide watch
damn good hit.

You get no bitches, skinny with no game.. no wonder girls aint feeling thrilled
So when I say F rail pussy, im just talkin bout this weakling's build
ehh, aight wordplay

Your shits just weak, think your nice but i'll double your form
So its no surprise punches got this F T bitch laid out, like BBW porn
ehh

Dudes suckin dick at the crib, Turned gay in spite of what his parents said
So when they leaving fatal blows.. Ironic my punches doin the same to his head
aight closer

this was an..okay battle. Fatal Thoughts piece was decent, along with knux's. i believe knux had the LOTB wit the suicide watch line. To me that is what won this battle.

v - knux.

[Stat.]

Knux the suicide watch line doesn't connect. You can't see someones thoughts. So it doesn't work.
The LOTB was the fatal blows line. That was the only bar with a decent setup that landed.

Fatal you were reaching way to much with that giant chicken/cock riding line... I mean c'mon man! Really? Your UFC bar was aight.. not executed well though.

Overall this was a bit of disappointment. But I'm voting for Knux.
yeah
Vote Knux

[Liquidity]

I was hoping this would be a nice battle, I was very wrong. I felt only one punch out of this whole battle landed and it was Knux's closer. Everything else seemed stretched, forced, or corny to me.

V/ Knux

[Token]

He’s lonely and he can’t find a girl on Facebook, sooo this dude joined Fuckbook
If I couldn’t get pussy, I would probably do the same… if I looked the way Knux looks
fake personal, weak hit since it was lacking creativity
You’re far from presentable, just like your sig and avatar you’re looking beastly
Not in the sense of being muscular…but fucked up face, hair, and crooked teeth b
lol this wasn't a bad concept, but the wording and execution was pretty off. rhyming teeth b at the end made it sound very unnatural
Especially after some punches, this mutha fucka will be broken and bleeding
Beat him so hard with Ink….that Monster’s and even Token won’t need him
nah, nothing clever here really... predictable and obvious
This battle isn’t a playground, so in this battle you will not be sliding
I woulda thought Knux had a giant pet chicken… the way he’s constantly cock riding
chicken/cock/cum/defeat/defeet... all in the same played category bro
He rides so fucking hard that people are actually advising him to buckle up
The outcome of this battle is like a UFC fighter….the way I’m leaving knux fucked
ok you attempted a nameplay but it was a miss.... you gotta reach outside the box homie

hope this breakdown doesn't offend you, being critical only cuz i wanna see u elevate

vs.

Ur in way over your head, Its obvious no one's feelin what u spray my way
Cuz sure Fat Al's quoted, but its always "Hey Hey Hey"
Fat/Fate don't sound the same to me, miss
Nobody see's u as a contender.. Im goin for the belt and ur just a notch
So only ones keepin an eye on fatal thoughts, are the guards on suicide watch
decentish
You get no bitches, skinny with no game.. no wonder girls aint feeling thrilled
So when I say F rail pussy, im just talkin bout this weakling's build
lol, cool flip.. tho i'm still not liking these first letter of name + word that doesn't even sound the same when said together punches
Your shits just weak, think your nice but i'll double your form
So its no surprise punches got this F T bitch laid out, like BBW porn
I used an FT nameplay on him in GG so this was played to me
Dudes suckin dick at the crib, Turned gay in spite of what his parents said
So when they leaving fatal blows.. Ironic my punches doin the same to his head
coulda done SO MUCH MORE with fatal blows dude..

lmao @ you saying "so" before every line though, cut that shit out

you still got the battle comfortably with better concepts in general.

v/ knux

[Lethargic]

LOL@that cock riding line. I can't believe you put that in your verse man. That was terrible. C'mon man, you've got more creativity then THAT. I didn't see much from Knux I cared for either. There were some decent concepts but poor execution. Maybe that had something to do with all the "So..." startups. Made your verse feel redundant. I guess I'm gonna..

V - Knux for better concepts.

[Joe Boston]

fatal


He’s lonely and he can’t find a girl on Facebook, sooo this dude joined Fuckbook
If I couldn’t get pussy, I would probably do the same… if I looked the way Knux looks
made me lol in a way but weak overall

You’re far from presentable, just like your sig and avatar you’re looking beastly
Not in the sense of being muscular…but fucked up face, hair, and crooked teeth b
weak punch again

Especially after some punches, this mutha fucka will be broken and bleeding
Beat him so hard with Ink….that Monster’s and even Token won’t need him
this was a nice personal

This battle isn’t a playground, so in this battle you will not be sliding
I woulda thought Knux had a giant pet chicken… the way he’s constantly cock riding
lmao

He rides so fucking hard that people are actually advising him to buckle up
The outcome of this battle is like a UFC fighter….the way I’m leaving knux fucked
didnt feel this finisher was relevant to this setup u coulda flipped something diffrent on this finisher here

Knux

Ur in way over your head, Its obvious no one's feelin what u spray my way
Cuz sure Fat Al's quoted, but its always "Hey Hey Hey"
lol at the attempt but thought u coulda made this finisher better

Nobody see's u as a contender.. Im goin for the belt and ur just a notch
So only ones keepin an eye on fatal thoughts, are the guards on suicide watch
nice concept

You get no bitches, skinny with no game.. no wonder girls aint feeling thrilled
So when I say F rail pussy, im just talkin bout this weakling's build
i lol'd at this myself but yeah coulda done sumthing diffrent other then using a letter from his name and developing it into a wordplay concept


Your shits just weak, think your nice but i'll double your form
So its no surprise punches got this F T bitch laid out, like BBW porn
nah

Dudes suckin dick at the crib, Turned gay in spite of what his parents said
So when they leaving fatal blows.. Ironic my punches doin the same to his head
lol not bad

V/ Knux gotta agree too many "So's" here also both had alot of of misses here only quote i say that let knux edge this is the suicide watch reference on the nameplay thought it was creative other then that both catz didnt come as hard no hate

[MV]

F.T.
Especially after some punches, this mutha fucka will be broken and bleeding
Beat him so hard with Ink….that Monster’s and even Token won’t need him

vs

Knux
Ur in way over your head, Its obvious no one's feelin what u spray my way
Cuz sure Fat Al's quoted, but its always "Hey Hey Hey"
Nobody see's u as a contender.. Im goin for the belt and ur just a notch
So only ones keepin an eye on fatal thoughts, are the guards on suicide watch


This one was pretty one sided. i have to go with Knux he was just plain more creative and had harder hitting punches

v/Knux

[R!canTheoryz]

Especially after some punches, this mutha fucka will be broken and bleeding
Beat him so hard with Ink….that Monster’s and even Token won’t need him

vs


Ur in way over your head, Its obvious no one's feelin what u spray my way
Cuz sure Fat Al's quoted, but its always "Hey Hey Hey"

Overall Vote - Knux. He had a overall better verse. wasnt a bad match but could of been better read better from both, complexity wise knux got it with less misses.