Quote (2-0) vs. R!can Theoryz (1-1) Quote Wins

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 3

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Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
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[R!canTheoryz]

Checking in, im going 10 match me.

[Quote]

word, lets drop early. i can drop by tonight most likely if u can

[R!canTheoryz]

Umm, i gotta go to the airport to pick my brother when i get back i can drop most def. if your still down LMK.

[Quote]

10 ready when you are

[R!canTheoryz]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux

[Quote]

and NBA i'll break your face before u even attempt to swing on me your like 40 lbs compared to 220 boyyyy get your weight up virgin.

i'd break you in half son, your 65 lbs of pure bones!

ahem..

it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem

[Knux]

ahem..

it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
Lol ok
this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
lmfaooo nice
lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
lol ok
wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
Solid
think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
lol coo

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
Lol solid punch, messed up wording in setup though
You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
Meh
you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
Weak
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
lmfao
Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux
No comment lol, nah but ok personal

This is honestly was closer than I thought it would be... Rican's opener was friggin solid and may have been the LOTB if it werent for the get your weight up line from Quote.. I have to say that Quote took it with consistancy but Rican came harder than i pretty much ever seen him, nice verse by both, Quote gets it with consistant punches n personals

V-Quote

[#PrimeTime]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
nice opener

You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
not feelin it, no hate.

you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
dece nameplay

fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
i chuckled @ this bar... not bad.

Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux
ha aight

vs.

it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
ehh

this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
good punch

lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
nice hit.

wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
good punch

think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
i lol'd @ this closing bar. good closer

i think R!can started off well, but faded towards the end. Quote was more consistent overall throughout his piece. 1 of the better battles i seen so far. props.

v - quote

[Fatal.]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
i liked this cool opener

You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
ehhh wasnt bad

you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
alright pretty good name play
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
haha this was cool...you were talkin bout going to the airport too before u dropped.

Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux
closer wasnt anything special

vs.

it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
not bad opener

this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
good hit here

lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
goood

wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
good

think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
nice closer here

alright this was a good battle,
rican- you had some pretty good lines, but some of ur lines weren't that strong hitting consistantly through ur verse
quote- you came a lot more consistant and had some lines that made me laugh and hit with some sting.

overall quote had the better rounded verse.

v/quote

[Lethargic]

R!can

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.

Not really feelin it. Might be the wording that threw it off.

You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.

Okay

you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.

Meh, okay

fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.

I'm normally not a stickler for having the last two words of the setup/punch rhyme. This was so off base that it literally made me stop and reread it, make sure I didn't somehow miss a line for a couplet. Plus, I've never seen Quote's pic, so this didn't hit hard for me. Link the pic maybe next time? if there is no pic, fake personals FTL.

Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux

Overall, there were some okay punches that just didn't hit really hard for me. Might just be having an off week.

Quote

it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half

This is a perfect example of providing proof of the personal. That's what made this line nice. Well, that and the good wording.

this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning

Decent

lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me

Lol, niceness.

wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you

Decent

think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem

Not a bad closer. One of the weaker punches in your verse though. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing considering your verse was pretty solid.

V - Quote ripped his face off.

[Hydr0]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
played concept. worded horribly
You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
not feeling...
you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
decent concept.. wording needs help tho
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
corny
Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux
nahhhhh



V


it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
decent jab. cool swag
this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
seen this done before..aite flip i guess
lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
ehh
wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
coulda done more wit this imo
think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
lol i felt this, worded slick and comedic. good closer


v- Quote, easy. he had two cool bars. opener and closer i believe, rican came pretty wack he had a decent attempt but his wording made it a subpar bar. the rest of his verse was a couple played concepts like the pool q ball line. he had some misses and a corny forehead joke. wording is ur achiles heal dog. no hate.

[miracle]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
-decent attempt but the wording seemd off n it took away from the punch a bit
You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
-could have been harder
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
-iight

vs

this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
-cool bar
wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
-ok
think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
-ok

v/quote .close but i give it to him..he ended stronger

[kontro]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
this was okay
You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
i found this to be played out
you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
[b]nahh man, [b]
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
lol, i like this
Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux
mehh

your verse was okay, you had alot of good set ups but you didnt finish, so i thought your 10 was mediacore at best


it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
this is aiight
this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
lol, i liked this
lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
okay
wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
meh, okay
think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
okay

overall this battle was okay, it seemed to me that Quote had the upperhand though, due to him being able to finish,

v/quote

[Cody Nash]

your a champ at taking the sack nothing but former, in a pool is horror,
So when it comes to q ball we know he enjoy's being hit several times in any corner.
meh.. wording
You get no attention, he's simply blind with lady's,
lately, we'll never witness a stat quo unless he was a rapper signed to shady.
reaching for a nameplay imo...
you hideing you deepest feelings will only put that thought farthest,
"Im a faggot queer" even if we didnt quote that we all know your still just being honest.
too simple
fuck your face pussy cuz my fist always stay banging,
plus, your forehead is big enough for 10 different airlines to make emergency landings.
lol, decent
Cant win any battle even if you kept a damn picture with luck,
i know u cant fight, cuz on NC's thought u was swingin & got laid out quicker battling knux
too statement-ish.. not really a solid diss.

vs

it's clear this tool's a fag, you'll never catch this queer shootin' gats
shit, I break bitches in half when i bone.. you threaten to break boney dudes in half
Aiight, coo...
this fatass wakes up to cardio, just gettin outta bed the sweat's already pouring
so it's ironic he's telling this kid to get his weight up, when he struggles to do that every morning
good hit..
lmao @ ur usertitle, i'm not hating though I believe you fo' sho, g
I can't really blame those hot heads tbh, i'd be fucking pissed too if you ghost wrote for me
nah...
wack faggot i'm about to flame you, think you'd win? ur insane dude
cuz it's pathetic you post on both RB & NC, n' neither one would EVER fucking claim you
Lol, cool...
think im bluffing? i'll quit text if you can find one person who says their site is ur home
i mean you get so emotional over verses I can never tell if ur ranting or writing a poem
meh, played out



Quote got this pretty comfortably.. okay battle


vote Quote