Two cents

[*J.R.*]

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[Verse 1- B.Nutz]

Hahah, fuck my two cents, fuck your two cents,
Shucks, Apparently I'm a nusiance, Well excuse this,
Fuck you, Never gave two queefs about Your thoughts,
It's me your Stuck to,Yeah, I'm Sure shocked,
It's not Luck dude, My heart is pure? Not.
Go on, chump sue, Meanwhile, Suck your Whore's cock.
Turn the page, and you'll learn it's this Game, he craves.
This Worm is crazed, Leave you pussies Dazed, and shaved
C.R.E.A.M And I? Yeah, we're Here to stay,
Seems you guys could be queer or gay,
After this game's demise, You'll fear the name,
Your raps are lame, they just seer my brain,
Fuck you Gucci mane, You've ethered the game,
Rap is dead, By you it was fapped to death,
It's you we should Snatch instead, Yeah! Snap his neck
Fuck the times, We've laughed and wept, I've snapped and left.


[Verse 2- B.Nutz]
Your comments? Keep em to yourself, I don't give a fuck,
Common sense agrees with me, you should just give it up,
I'm shivering and stuff, From your weak metaphorical drops,
Quivering at your bluffs, The door? Use it, this shit needs to stop.
My record's 2-3, but bitch, trust me you don't wanna fuck with me,
The last guy to fuck with B, was found stuffed with bee's,
They cut him open, Ironically the bees killed two hundred and three,
I may be redudant see, But I'm reluctantly, Gonna have to stop ethering these rhymes,
Gotta go finish up my onslaught of rap, Excuse me, I will be back, But for now I gotta cease my time.

[WhatsHisFace]

It's alright I suppose. I mean, I can see your try to produce shock value but nothing here made me go "O dang" or "Wow". It had vary bland word choice. So truth be told, this was boring. Also your flow was on and off at times, thier was some multis but they were placed unsually which damged your flow. Next time, actually spit what your wrote. It's the same thing as a writer reading out loud a paragraph to see if it make sense and flows. Same principle.