Just Being Me

[~ItHurtZ]

i deploy my ultimite terra nova,
i drove around doing drive by,z in my red range rover,
im good with dodging bullets koz i wear my lucky fourleaf clover,
REACHING INFINITE IN 5 SECONDS FLAT,
smacking fly's like there nothing but crap theres one "come here miget" *Splat*
people never want to mess with me,
because sophisticated grammar is my specialty
new comers on here needa learn to rap this aint no spelling bee
sentenced to life for my rhymes against humanity,
my family was the first to witness the outer depths of my insanity,
i hate what ive done in life for things that have occured,
my minds feeling dizzy like im mentally disturbed
rappin and making lyrics was the path that was chosen
because school wasnt good for me so i gave up while the door was closing,

[*J.R.*]

Some lines seem forced but thats okay, you'll get better. flow was decent. Work on it bro!

[<SamPle>]

people never want to mess with me,
because sophisticated grammar is my specialty
new comers on here needa learn to rap this aint no spelling bee
sentenced to life for my rhymes against humanity,
my family was the first to witness the outer depths of my insanity

i think maybe you dragged the "me" ryhming scheming on, but with the right flow it could work...

some nice metaphors, keep going brb

[~ItHurtZ]

cheers for the feed uppin