im the sickest

[jknill3]

ok listen to what i have to say
what i write make your lyrics look gay
your so fatyou will never get laid
my raps are the best thats why im getting paid

im the best thing to happen to the game
i make everyone else look lame
im typing this shit to drum and bass
my tunes so loud
i could melt your face
your speakers are blasting amazing grace

your face reminds me of ratchet and clank
youv got no nob so how do u wank
if u want some drugs then talk to frank
your tunes make the whole room skank

i break down the beat then i chop of your feet
stick you orange girls in a microwave watch you melt from the heat
im the best rapper no one can compete

ok guess what il say it again
il hang your body lifeless from the top of big ben
want some drugs go back to your den
your so old you look like goodman:len

whatttt this raps insane shit so hot itl melt your brain
just make sure you remember my name

[.Nell.]

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[<SamPle>]

have to say man very simple and very cheesy puns, was kinda bad

lines like this:
what i write make your lyrics look gay
your so fatyou will never get laid

something i would say on the playground in year 7

keeping wrtiting though

[*J.R.*]

Weak rhymes, nonexsistant flow.

Sucks.

[WhatsHisFace]

Very mediocre. Simple and plain. I'm not trying to be rude, but you had nothing intersting in this piece. No shock value, barely any poetic device. Honsetly, this was just jabber. Try again and be more in touch with your creative side.