Always (I love you)

[Fatal.]

ALWAYS

Every time I think about you I feel cold inside
It happens all the time and I don’t know why
All the happy days keep flashing in my mind
I’d do anything just to rewind the time
Just to feel how it was when you were mine
I honestly thought you were the truest find
I thought you were the one to complete me
And now that your gone, it's not easy
Believe me, I cared
And every ones losing loved ones It’s not fare
Every ones scared of having their heart snapped
Talking about relationships, pffft, don’t even start that..
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Love injures your soul and makes you depressed
But I will always love you, you could take away the stress
You’re the one who always made my day the best
I think about you every night before I lay to rest
You and I together made sense
And that’s a true statement
Face it, girl you’re the one I wanted to ride with
But now we don’t talk right after you slide quick
I gave you everything, im such a nice and respectful person
Don’t make someone a priority if your an option..lesson learned then
How could I forget the hurting, circling through my brain
My hearts beating fast, sadness flowing through my veins
Everytime I hear your name, your face flashes in my mind
And once again I wish I could honestly go back in time
I really wish that, I miss that feeling of hugging you
And loving you, you made me feel comfortable
And showing you a great life is what id love to do
But I guess it wasn’t enough for you
You fucked me over easy as that, why?
You actually made me cry
After all those days and nights
Talking and laughing, flirting and kissing
I wish I could read her mind from her position
But listen, I’m just reminiscing
Through the past where I had you
And it’s pretty clear that im sad boo
Im mad too, cuz you just did it out of the blue
And that was something that I doubted from you
Now your outta the view
Havent seen you for a while girl
This is just another messed up thing in this wild world
I remember highschool seeing you in the hallways
One look at you and you were in my mind all day
How could our love fall away,
But just know girl that ill love you always…

[Fatal.]

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[Fatal.]

lets get some feed. leave links

[KnowP]

no homo, but this was very pretty? lmao. idk. felt like a smooth poem that spit to ya main squeeze and she gives you a mad blow job that night. i definetly feel the passion behide the writted heart. vocab wasnt strong though. if you woulda used more profound words, this woulda turned out tighter than it is. not a bad drop though. good read. stay after it dog.




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[SoulWriter]

A lotta feeling in this one. The "I gave you everything, im such a nice and respectful person" kinda didn't flow, it kinda threw me off imo. but overall, good work.

[Fatal.]

thanks bro

[JazeFlame]

like, i liked it and all but after the feed you gave me on mine, i expected this to be way more. no hate tho and i feel this piece and what it means and all. it wasnt incredibly simple like my piece was but i feel like you can do way better. just my opinion from other posts i've seen from you.

[Fatal.]

like, i liked it and all but after the feed you gave me on mine, i expected this to be way more. no hate tho and i feel this piece and what it means and all. it wasnt incredibly simple like my piece was but i feel like you can do way better. just my opinion from other posts i've seen from you.

yea i admitt this was one of my more simpler drops. just something with a love feel to it with some emotion. wasnt trying to go over the edge on this one. good looks with the feed homie